Ashlok ff True love!!..Updated chapter 1 on page 2

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PROLOGUE

Present...
When she s returning to that place where she spent her childhood... pune.it s d city which caused her pain which could she never share with anyone...and it s d same pune where she found her true love...He s d reason of her smile and also tears...
its not possible to live whole life in single moment...but she lived her whole life in a single moment
Aastha stard remembering those beautiful days of her life...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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I don't knw ...whtr I continue this Ashlok ff or not...
if u people wanted me to continue then surely I vl continue...I am just inspired by one old serial... hope u all likes this ff...
and thanks to Anu(dazzles)..Sai(saibhargav)...bcz of these two I am writing... so sai here s ur surprise...I knw its tooo short one..
Thank u all ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice prologue dear.continue writing this ff.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooja186

I don't knw ...whtr I continue this Ashlok ff or not...
if u people wanted me to continue then surely I vl continue...I am just inspired by one old serial... hope u all likes this ff...
and thanks to Anu(dazzles)..Sai(saibhargav)...bcz of these two I am writing... so sai here s ur surprise...I knw its tooo short one..
Thank u all ...


thank u for taking time to write it
i like it eagerly waiting to read it
dont stop, we r here to read it
update next one soon

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice prologue dear. please do continue. v ll wait 4 ur update. aur sahi kaha thumne sai nd dazzles( didn't know hr name's anu. thanks 4 that) r puttng in great efforts in rvivng d forum. i too am inspird by them. waiting 4 ur update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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THANK U ALL...FOR UR PRECIOUS COMMEMTS...SOON IAM GOING TO POST PART 1...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1...
Aastha just enters her house ..by seeing aastha Avdhot started convincing her..
AV:aastha u r not a small girl...understand
KA:Ha aastha teri baba sahi keh raha hai beta...tum kyu samj nahi rahi hu????
where ajju just come and sit beside aastha to give her strength by saying Avdhot and kalindhi what happnd to both of u...why u people are forcing aastha to marry Shlok...
this made avdhot angry..
AV (in a loud tone ): beacause I given promise to Niranjan that I gave aastha hand only to Shlok not anyone don't you knw ayi even astha ko bhi pata hai ...
KA:ayi aap plz apki ladli ko samazayiye take vo shlok se shadi karne keliye ha kahe
aastha simply watched all this drama...and even she don't hv any words to say...because avdhot never give any rights to her to take her own decision in her life...where kalindhi s also by her husband side...
but when it comes to marriage she has some dreams...and and more than she loves someone??!!!
suddenly aastha replied in dr conversation
A:.I cnt marry shlok...
Av(aggressively):why???
aastha took courage and bravely said to her father...
A:because I love someone else and I want to marry him only baba...
there s pin drop silence for a while in whole KIRLOSKAR HOME...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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continue soon...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzles



continue soon...😉


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Posted: 9 years ago
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ashimamm91,EM099,saibhargav THANKS FOR LIKING PROLOGUE ...
&
EM099,sashra,sathuraj,nadeeka1200, THANK U SOO MUCH DEARS FOR UR PRECIOUS COMMENTS WHICH MOTIVATE ME A LOT...THANK U
Dazzles,saibhargav THANK U MY FRIENDS
ashimamm91 YA DEAR WELL SAID AND THANKS FOR UR COMMENT...

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