The Lady In Black-A Praja TS- Ramya and Mahishee Collab Complete Pg 6!

Mannmohanaa thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#1
Hello the lovely people of this forum... Ramya di and I present to you all a new story... A collaboration!!!!😃😃

It's a modern one ... So just relax and enjoyy😊😛

It's in Pratap's POV(I referred here is Pratap)

So presenting... The Lady In Black!!!!

Part One~ Strangers Meet


I was running towards the boarding gate of the Maharana Pratap Airport at Udaipur. I had badly miscalculated the time and was in all probability going to miss the flight. With only a briefcase in hand, I was running with all my might. Beads of perspiration appeared on my forehead.
I was about to reach the Boarding Gate to collect my Boarding Pass when suddenly:
Thud!

I had crashed into someone. I was thrusted onto the floor as both of us had a nasty fall. I opened my eyes to see a lady in a jet black saree with a yellow lining busy collecting the heap of papers strewn on the floor. Her face was majorly covered with her hair and only a fraction of her Kohl smudged eyes was visible.
I quickly picked my bag when the lady spoke:
Mister! First help me in collecting the papers!

Her voice was magical and I felt lost in it. My limbs refused to move and I automatically started collecting papers.

Sure enough, the Boarding Gate was closed by now and Lo!
I had missed my flight. Still as a last attempt, I moved forward to convince the Officer and my explain my emergency in attending the extremely important conference but to no avail.

As I turned to express my anger and frustration on the lady, having missed the flight by seconds, I saw she was gone! Had she disappeared into thin air? I found no trace of even her existence there a mere few seconds before. Was I hallucinating?

I gasped in disbelief. I need not say that i was dejected and a bit angry too. How could I have miss that flight? It was such an important conference. International clients had already arrived and even Dad was there. But only I was missing it, courtesy this fall.

I called up Dad and informed of this foolish blunder. And Strange enough he was OK with it! He asked me to leave for Mumbai for the preparations of the Company's Annual Meet. I booked a flight to Mumbai which was five hours from now.


After 5 hours, I rushed quickly to collect my pass and soon got seated in the Waiting Area for the Gate to open. I was just lazing around when a news flash popped up on the Airport Television screen:

Flight 5J320 that just took off 5 hours ago from Udaipur Airport has met with an accident. The plane was detected with an engine failure as a flying object got stuck up in its propeller.
5 people are reported to be dead and 40 are injured. Stay tuned for more updates.

I didn't know what to say or feel. My mouth went dry and I felt jitters all over my body. Anything could have happened to me- I could have been a 6th man to die or the 41st injured man.

My frustration and agony subsided almost immediately and I was profusely thanking God. It was then I thought about that lady in a black saree who had actually saved me. I hadn't even seen her after I collided with her. I wanted to thank her for saving me though unknowingly. Somehow, my heart said that this brief meeting was yet incomplete and we would meet again... but how?


When landed at the Chhatrapati Shivaji Airport, Mumbai; the weather was quite pleasant and cool. I had heard a lot about this city known as" the City Of Dreams". I was bored of the travel and my previous meetings so I decided to have a small adventure. I decided to travel to the Hotel by a Mumbai Local.

I headed straight to the local station and then regretted being so thoughtless with my decision when i saw the station swarming with people. As soon as the local arrived, it seemed as if a calamity had struck and people gushed into the small chambers of the local. I literally got crushed and stiffled in the crowd.
I luckily managed to get a seat in a while. After what seemed eternity, my stop arrived and again I got down amidst all the pushing and pulling. It was late evening by now. I headed towards the taxi stand to reach Hotel Sea Princess. After a short ride we reached the Hotel. As I dipped my hand into my pocket to remove my wallet, I realized to my horror that I had been pickpocketed!

My wallet was missing and I felt miserable. All the cash, my credit cards-- everything was gone! I gave the taxi driver the emergency cash which I kept in my secret pocket and sat outside the Hotel-- exhausted and famished.

I was lost in thinking what will I do in an unknown city without any cash when I saw flashlights in front of me. A car slowly stopped and a lady lowered the window to reveal her face.
Her black sequenced saree with the yellow lining glimmered in the dim street light and the memory of the collision flashed past my mind's eye. It was the very same lady!




Hope it is liked and appreciated!!!

Loads of Love


Ramya and Mahishee😃
Edited by Mnp279 - 9 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

58

Views

6.6k

Users

9

Likes

97

Frequent Posters

SweetSau thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Hii
Awesome start! I'm first on this one too. Waiting for the next update eagerly. So Pratap and Ajab met and Ajab saved his life unknowingly. Wow
Continue soon.
Sayli
Ramya_98 thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Pro Thumbnail 10th Anniversary Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 9 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: SweetSau

Hii

Awesome start! I'm first on this one too. Waiting for the next update eagerly. So Pratap and Ajab met and Ajab saved his life unknowingly. Wow
Continue soon.
Sayli


Thanks a lot Sayli. 😳 By the way, i am ramya. 😊
Mannmohanaa thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: SweetSau

Hii

Awesome start! I'm first on this one too. Waiting for the next update eagerly. So Pratap and Ajab met and Ajab saved his life unknowingly. Wow
Continue soon.
Sayli


Hey Sayli!!!

I think I'll have to make a firstie crown for you!!

Thanks and yes we will continue soon.
sujata_patil thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Ramya and Mahishee
This was too good. Loving the suspense element. Waiting for a one on one meeting of Praja. This one has a spooky flavor attached and I am loving it.

This whole collaboration thing is really good. Hope to see more of such collaborations in future.

Love
Sujata
Mannmohanaa thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: sujata_patil

Ramya and Mahishee

This was too good. Loving the suspense element. Waiting for a one on one meeting of Praja. This one has a spooky flavor attached and I am loving it.

This whole collaboration thing is really good. Hope to see more of such collaborations in future.

Love
Sujata


Thank you di!!

Well it was Ramya di's mastermind idea

Thank you for liking the concept
Don't know about future but this one is surely going to be epic and thoroughly enjoyable!!!!😃😛
Ramya_98 thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Pro Thumbnail 10th Anniversary Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 9 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: sujata_patil

Ramya and Mahishee

This was too good. Loving the suspense element. Waiting for a one on one meeting of Praja. This one has a spooky flavor attached and I am loving it.

This whole collaboration thing is really good. Hope to see more of such collaborations in future.

Love
Sujata


Thank you sujata! 😳Mahishee wanted me to write a supernatural story and i got the idea and we are writing this together. So we both share equal credit. And this story is going to be completely spooky.😉
Ramya_98 thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Pro Thumbnail 10th Anniversary Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 9 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: my_angel...


amazing shot...loved it


Thanks sowmya! Glad you liked it.
Mannmohanaa thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome part Mahishee😊



Nonie its my and Ramya di's collaboration so we both have worked in it...
As I said it was Completely her idea!!!

Thanks!!!
Ramya_98 thumbnail
Book Talk Reading Challenge Award - Pro Thumbnail 10th Anniversary Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Hello all my dearest Prajajans!🤗 🤗It seems like years when i actually gave an UPDATE here. I know, i posted an os a few days back. But there is a huge difference between an os and an update!😛 So today i bring with me the second update of this story. And sorry mahishee, i am presenting this update in MY style.😃😉



PART-2

MYSTERIES AND REVELATIONS

She looked at me through the corner of her eye and long hair still covered her face as she said.

Lady:It seems you are in need of serious help.

I intended on explaining everything to her but before i could go on, she continued.
Lady: Please get into the car.

And the very next moment, i found myself obeying her command as if under a magic spell ,as i got into the car with her. It seemed as if i had no control over my senses. I could not utter a single word from my tongue which suddenly seemed more of hers than my own ,although all types of questions kept pouring in my mind.And she slowly started the car and drove to an unknown destination, which i didn't bother to even ask about.
None of us spoke anything.

Very soon, the path began to turn lonely and deserted. It was as if the fog and mist had encompassed us within itself and i couldn't help wonder how she drove the car in such a dense haze. After a long drive away, we the car finally halted at a mansion which appeared at least a 100 years old! The surroundings were mysterious and sorcerous and to be honest i felt a bit scared myself. By i tried to put on my brave front as she invited me in in the very same mystical tone.

Lady:My humble dwelling would be graced by the presence of a guest. So i invite you to stay here today.
Me: Thank you very much for your timely aid.
Lady:No need for that. Please come.

Saying so she unlocked the door and lead me into something what seemed like a an amazing palace. The interiors were so delightful that my eyes were dazzed. The place was magnificent. And completely royal in every sense.I looked around, and it all looked like a dream come true!

Lady:Consider this as your own. You must be tired of the journey, so please make yourself comfortable and have some rest while i make preparations for supper.

And then she moved towards the kitchen as i sat on the king-sized sofa. And i didn't realize when i dozed off, out of all the exhaustion of the day and got up only when she came up to wake me up.

Lady: Gentleman, the dinner is ready.

She again lead me to the dining room as my nostrils were being tickled by the pleasant smell of some amazing dish. And the dining table was such a treat to behold , laid down with such a delicious meal that made my mouth water. I sat down at once and pounced on the food as if i hadn't eaten for a 100 years without even caring for my host to start. And then when i felt i had had enough, i was embarrassed as to what she would think of me. So,i raised my eyelids from the food expecting her to be staring at me by now,but found her tying her long thick black hair which was lying loose into a neat bun. And as she finished, she too looked up and within a few nanoseconds, ironically, i realized myself staring at her instead. She was just BEAUTIFULL! Her eyes were like lotus petals, myriad and dark. They were like an ocean, one could drown into. Her nose was pointed and perfectly shaped and so were her lips, red like a rose. I did not know i was actually blushing for a long time and my gaze won't shift from her as she sat down to eat. And then, while she continued to eat, she asked me if i liked the food and was naturally full of praises for it.

Me:Its just amazing. I have never tasted something as tasty!

Instantly, a smile appeared on her lovely face. A killer smile that i was again lost in.

Lady:Thank you very much. But it is not so good and i know that.
Me:No thank you for helping me out. And yes it is.
Lady:As i said, there is no need to say thank you. Again that commonly used dialogue "It was only my duty".
And she giggled.

Me:Actually, i intended on saying this much before but somehow couldn't. Its not only about this hospitality you are showering on me.You even saved my life today, although unknowingly.
Lady:Really? And how is it may i ask?
Me:You remember that collision we had in the morning? And because of that i missed my flight. The very same flight that met with an accident later on. So i owe you my life! And if i can be so bold as to say ...

But before i could pour out that storm of questions that was waiting in my head since so long, she interrupted,

Lady:How many times have i to tell you this? You don't need to say a sorry or a thank you or anything, Pratap. As you already said it, it all happened unknowingly. You can call this a coincidence, but in a way, you saved me too because i too was in a hurry to board that very same flight.But forgot some important things so was going to bring that when i clashed into you and got saved. And i was in that very flight from which you landed, here in Mumbai but you didn't seem to notice me. And i was on my way here when i spotted you looking as worried and confused so thought of helping you.
Me:Really? Yes, i did not notice that. Wait, ermm..How did you, i mean how do you know my name is pratap.
Lady:I have been travelling with you for so long and you think i do not know you at all ? Stupid, i saw it on your passport when your bag fell.How else could i have known that?
Me:Oh ya, silly me. Actually, every misfortune fell on me today itself. First, i missed that flight and then when i landed in this unknown city for my work, i found out that i had been picked!
Lady:Of course you are new here. And by the way, i am no less silly. I offered you my hospitality but still forgot to introduce myself. Hi! I am Ajabde Punwar. And i belong originally to Mumbai. Was there in Udaipur for some important piece of work. But now i am back in my house. I know this may seem a bit scary but this place belongs to my forefathers. And i just love being here, cherishing this legacy. And i am all alone here at present but my brother Patta and sister Ratan live here too and of course there is our old servant too. But none of them is here tonight. Ratan is away to her friend's birthday party and will be staying there tonight. Patta has gone out of station for some work. And i must thank you for keeping me company tonight.

I was speechless. It was as if she had read my mind. And she had answered every single question i was just about to ask.

*****************************************************************

Hope you all like it. 😳 Please leave for us your precious likes and comments.😉
And yes, i want you all to check out my new index too here. And please please please leave your comments too. I made it only for all my readers but now no one seems interested!😭

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".