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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raingoddess

Loved it! I feel Kunj will start getting involved and as the wedding date comes closer become more n more protective of Twinkle! He has seen his mother suffer, and wouldnt want that on anyone else! He may get hurt in the process but he wont let Twinkle face any form of abuse! Anyway, your OS was really good!!


I do too!

The more Kunj finds out about Yuvi and the way he treats Twinkle, the more his protective nature will come out. Right now I was just reminded by the scene where he was willing to run away with his mom. I wouldn't be surprised if Kunj ends up moving away from his family with only the people he truly cares about.

Kunj is going to interfere in their relationship for sure. Whether he has a direct involvement or indirect, I don't know. But if Yuvi and Twinkle do end up breaking up (this time for good) then it will be because of him.

And thank you! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Only one word "Awesome"👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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kubare - Thank you. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved the fact that u worte this from kunj's point of view for a change...
This seemed so real... Felt as if it were the things going through in kunj's mind...
Loved ur os... Do write more..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing os,
Loved it.


Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Ragini.

I loved the fact that u worte this from kunj's point of view for a change...

This seemed so real... Felt as if it were the things going through in kunj's mind...
Loved ur os... Do write more..


Thanks!

This piece was actually the first time that I had written in someone's perspective. Otherwise I used to stick to write in the objective narrative with a heavy focus on their actions and their dialogue.

But going into the characters' mind is something that I absolutely love and wish to explore every chance I get.

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