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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: utsha

Silence is the beginning of many things vishal.

Awesome prologue, very gripping.

Now pls do continue soon. Let's enjoy this journey of revenge from the beginning.


I wikl not say thank you because we r buddies but am happy u like it. And yaa lets enjoy the journey of revenge with bitter sweet moments
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was really interesting😊
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 2

They said love will kill you...
But see I am alive still
They said love is nightmare...
But see I had stop dreaming
They said love will breaks you in pieces... But see I am stone now
They said love will made you cry...
But see it's too hard to feel any emotion now
Its KNOWN STRANGER now...
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He smile "hero... my name is hero" saying this he start walking toward the main gate. She was blank. And before she could think something he turns back and finish his sentence "naam toh sunna hi hoga (may be you heard the name)" horror struck her. Something flashes infront of her eyes. It can't be true. He is dead. She whispers to herself. Before she could react, she got a call "sheen our plan did not work. Come here" someone speaks from other side. Sheen cut the phone and run toward old building block A. she entered in the room no 10, ground floor and found two girls fully drenched in paint. "What the f**K" she could not control herself. "What happened here, will anyone tell me?" she gives them frustrated look.
SOMETIME AGO
Kirti and suman both were hiding in the two rooms with paints in their hands and the doors of both rooms were infront of each others. Their plan was to through the paint on the boy from both sides who will try to pass from that way. They kept half door open so that when they through the paint, it could not affect them. When one will through paint, it will splash on boy and the half closed door of other room while same for other. According to plan they felt someone was coming their way. As they both sense someone is going to pass the doors they splash the paint but what happen it was unexpected for both of them. The boy opens both the doors fully and he back off immediately. It happened in fraction of seconds that both girls could not understand anything and through the paint on each other because the doors which were half closed to protect them from each other was not half closed now. It was fully opened.
IN PRESENT
"What the hell. I will not leave him, now you see" saying this sheen left from there.
AT UNKNOWN PLACE
It was midnight and the whole place was full of darkness. It was silent and scary. Some sounds of music were coming from a room. Someone playing piano there and it was difficult to see his face because of the darkness. Above that he was facing to opposite side of the door. But with sudden everything turned into brightness fading the darkness away. Someone switches on the light but the person playing piano was unaffected. It seems he was somewhere else too lost in some other world. He was expressionless until someone touches his shoulder. He stops playing piano and whisper in a low voice "rihaan.. You here?" rihaan looked toward him with unbelievable expressions. He was shocked to hear the painful voice of his friend. He could easily sense the pain in his body language but he knows he can't do anything. He never saw earlier this side of his friend even at the time worst time. Sahil again speaks "rihan don't stare me like this. "rihan smiled toward him. "You are not the same" rihan whisper." You are changed a lot in these days" he gives him annoying look but sahil was too tired to react. He again lost in his past where he should have long time ago but he was never there and now he know he can't go there. "I hope you again break these walls around you like old times. And let me help you." Saying this rihan left him there alone to deal with his loneliness. sahil looked toward his friend last time and again starts playing piano. "bhai you know no one can beat you in this. You are awesome. Pls teach me too how to play it. "He looked around himself. The whole room was full of memories. His brother was not there. He knows he can't be back. And these memories will always hunt him.
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"hero.. naam toh suna hi hoga..." he said with a mischeviuous smile. "okk leave about me. You tell me your name. I think it should have heroine" saying this he start laughing..the evil laugh and with sudden jerk she wakeup. It was nightmare. What was that? Whose was in her dreams which meet her yesterday or her past.. the proof of her deeds. Many answer was there in her minds but little did she knew..her nightmare just had starts.
NEXT DAY IN COLLEGE CANTEEN
"Are you nuts? He is dead sheen and may be the person you talk is just coincidence. I mean because of these filmy lines naam to suna hi hoga you can't let affect these things to your mind. We know what happens 1 month ago was a bad day and which left a scare in your mind.. maybe all this is because of that incident and you herself tell us that no one knows what happened that day. You never told to anyone even us and other person is dead so chill yaar." kirti tried to calm her. "but what about that boy who meet me yesterday. I mean the way he talk with me it was not normal. I know here is something fishy." Saying this sheen cover her face with her hands. kirti knew it will happen. Their past will not leave them easily. But she knew she needs to divert the mind of sheen because sheen has not fully recovered yet from that incident. It can affect her mind. Kirti was clueless that how to they will deal with all these problems because she knew that the real dangerous is too close to them...
NEXT DAI IN MORNING
"Are you sure? I mean why you are so afraid. No one knows what happened that day even you did not tell us. Then why you are afraid." Someone said from other side of the phone. Sheen was talking to her friend. She again had a nightmare and her mind was getting complicated in all this. It was totally unacceptable for her because she was leader of her group and she never afraid from anything in her life but now everything was mess-up. "See mannat why you guys do not understand. I know no one knows about that incident but at least we should have little research about the boy who meets me two days ago. Pls for me... unless this stress will kill me. When you are coming back?" sheen said in frustration. From last two days she was trying to make her understand her friends but no one listen her. Mannat sense her anger "I am coming tomorrow. Lets deal with it." Saying this she cut the phone. Sheen took the sigh of relief. Mannat has been the strongest pillar of her side and sheen knew no mannat have solution of every problems. After all she is the beauty with brain. Toper of her batch in studies and in sports too most gutsy person. Sheen was happy now. An evil smile spread on her face ...
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Sahil was standing in front of the pic of his brother "she is coming back brother. She is coming back"
WHILE SOMEWHERE ELSE
"I know it's you sahil...the game is on" mannat gives a half hurt smile... dangerous one.
HOW MUCH YOU RUN FROM YOUR PAST...IT WILL HUNT YOU DOWN ONE DAY...THE DAY WHEN YOU LEAST EXPECT IT
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG!!!!! that was truly exceptional update...the small confusions which I had are cleared now... 😃
& I guess many secrets r u b revealed... soon... 😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting. continue soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 3:


Everything was perfect. The day was clear from clouds, letting the sun rays fall straight on her face and she was standing there waiting for someone with confused expressions. It looked as if she was in great dilemma. Her face reflected her anxiety but it lit up as soon as she saw another girl approaching her.

" Hey sheen is you alright?" asked the girl after seeing her facial expressions.

Sheen gives her a half smile" I am happy that you are here. You don't know but nothing is good here."

Mannat gives her a confused look.

"Tell me openly" asked mannat.

Sheen gives a long sigh. "It's about a new boy who joined college 3 days ago. You were not here so you are unaware of that. He had made my life hell. I mean he dared to challenge me. You should have seen him. He is so irritating."

Sheen was cut by mannat." So it's no big deal. You know how to handle these types of guys after all you are diva of college." She said in teasing tone.

But sheen did not respond." It's not like that mannat. Its not that easy. I cant handle this by myself. So I need your help."

Mannat looked seriously towards her. " hmm if u want then I don't have any problem. Bdw who is that boy?" Sheen gives her an evil smile and said. "Hero..He calls himself hero".


Sheen excused herself for sometime while mannat strode towards the girl's hostel, with memories of the past flooding her mind. 2 years ago she helped her friend sheen against hero and now again sheen needs her. Mannat was coming back to her college after a long break. She came to know about the death of hero and about sheen but she couldn't come at that time. Yesterday when sheen called her she got to know about the new development in college, about the new guy who calls himself hero. Hero word triggered many memories of her past. The innocent face still flashed before her eyes. 2 years ago she helped her friend against hero and now again the same situation. It's like karma bites back and everything is repeating. Only time will say how it will end this time. Sheen needs her help again. She doesn't know what she will do. Yesterday when sheen called her, she knew the name hero will come in between their conversation but she never expect that early or in a way the name came up. Someone is here in college who reminds sheen about hero. Is it just coincidence or something is going to happen? The news of death of hero was a hard blow for mannat. She never thought one prank will become the cause of his death. She just wants to hurt him. But not death. She just wanted to show him his place but everything got destroyed. Nothing went according to her plan.


WHILE IN HOSTEL

"omg looks who is here" a girl screamed and run towards mannat. She hugs her tightly. Mannat gives her a big smile and then tease her." Leave me kirti. You will kill me by hugging so tight." Kirti left her in embarrassment. Then they both laugh and jump on the beds. Kirti dialed sheen's number to inform her that both of them are chatting in their room. In a secluded corner of the college Sheen was sitting lost in her haunting past. She was trying hard to concentrate on the present but the one face was not letting her do that. That innocent face was still there in her mind. Hero..She knew this name will never leave her alone. Before she further fight with her emotions, kirti's call brought her to the present.

Sheen entered in the room and find both of her friends waiting for her. She just sits on the bed and gives half smile to mannat.

"Don't worry. I am here" mannat gives her assurance.

"I never think it will go that far. I never want his death." saying this sheen starts crying.

Mannat and kirti touch her shoulder. "listen sheen... he shot you, you did not shot him so it was not your fault. U can't be weak. Here are many things which we have to fight. So pls be strong." Saying this mannat hug her. The old gang reunites when kirti too joined them in hug.


After pacifying sheen to some extent when mannat found her talking to kirti, she walked a few steps away towards the window to give her neurones a much needed break from all these. Her inner turmoils were getting too much for her to bear alone and she needed to sort out some things clearly before everything went out of her hand. She was hiding a truth much too grave which was churning her up from inside. True , that she was helping her friend sheen in teaching hero a lesson 2 years back, but was it the complete truth?? No, this was for the others to know. There was something more to it, much too deep a reason to be comprehended by the rest, which she was hiding. How much she tried, she couldn't deny this fact. Her plan was going right but then again who was at fault..it was sheen or she herself? There was something else behind that ugly prank. Didn't she desperately wish to make HIM realise the pain of heartbreak through hero, though knowing very well that he was completely innocent. Hero paid a big prize of his innocence. A tear escapes from her eyes thinking about his death as like sheen she also didn't want his death. She too was living in the guilt of destroying a life to this extent, but again something else struck her mind and her expression changed into anger. This time it was a different face which crossed her mind. Amidst of all these she couldn't forget the sharp, intelligent eyes that she fell for only to be refused at the end. She was hurt, rather she felt insulted which resulted in her sheer determination to make HIM pay the prize of HIS mistake. Back in present she thought, " No, it can't be a coincidence, it has to be u. Let's see how long can u play this game of hide and seek with me? Let's see who win this time? Its time to play and I promise u this time it will end once and for all. This time you will face a different mannat, your destruction." Smiling evilly, she engaged herself in preparing her game plan and the much awaited face off, with HIM.


AT UNKNOWN PLACE :
He could hear the screaming and shouting all around himself. "You are orphan, You are orphan. No one loves you. You don't deserve anyone's love and care. You will always remain alone." He wake up suddenly with a jolt. It was nightmare. The horrifying reality of his life, the nightmare was back again and he screamed. "No I am not orphan...I am not. "But there was no one to hear his screams. He was alone suffering in the darkness of his life. Silence was only thing surrounding him. He was never an orphan and he hates that when people called him that. He never understood ,why his life was full of sorrows. His parents left him when he was child. But there was a little ray of sunlight in his life. His brother, who used to made him feel alive. His brother was the one person who always showered care and love upon him. The one person who made him believe his existence in this huge world despite being surrounded by darkness. The only ray of his life, and now that ray was vanished.. The person who was always by his side was no more now. And he knows this cruel reality will always haunt him how much he tried to run away from it. So he decided to face it and finish it once and for all.

On the other side rihaan, his childhood friend who was always on his side in every ups and downs of his life was looking forward to him. He had just arrived there and found him struggling with the past memories. Rihan was a person who can go to any extent just to make him smile once. But today he was also feeling helpless because he knew sahil's loss could never be filled. The loss of his brother was too much for sahil to handle and rihaan knew he will never sit silent. Rihaan was not unaware of the storm which was devastating his friend from inside. Sahil wanted to avenge his brother's death. Rihan don't know the end of this fight but one thing was clear that sahil will definitely get burnt in this fire of revenge. And that's the thing he was fearing. Rihan does not have any sympathy with the peoples who were responsible of sahil's loss but he was afraid for sahil because he knew now no one can stop sahil and this fight will change the dynamics of many lives. He knew this time sahil will not take any precautions and the fire in his silence was too dangerous than the explosives. He only prayed that sahil will not get burnt in this fire but little did he know, that his prayer will not be accepted. Rihaan was looking towards his friend who was getting ready to go in the college... the college where his friend lost his life... his brother... hero...
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Great updates😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey vishal that was an good update...
there is so much of pain in both the characters of mannat & sahil...
& they both are ready to face each other...
hey do mannat know sahil personally??
& eagerly waiting for the next update...
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rmifzala

hey vishal that was an good update...
there is so much of pain in both the characters of mannat & sahil...
& they both are ready to face each other...
hey do mannat know sahil personally??
& eagerly waiting for the next update...
:)

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