ff- revenge, chapter 3 update on page 5

index

prologue - i page no- 1
prologue - 2 page no- 3
chapter 1 page 3
Chapter 2 page 4
chapter 3 page 5




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prologue- 1
"You can never forget me. I know that. "She said to him looking straight in his eyes. "I am not feeling bad for myself because I know it will come one day. I know it's painful but..." She again said. He was motionless. "do you really thing its matters to me?" his lips curved into a smile."I never love you. It's just a game." He said shifting his gage toward the sky.She close her eyes, controlling the tears. She felt him moving away from her. "I love you more than my life. You are my world." She shouts from behind. He turns to her and gives a smile. And then again start walking away from her. Now it was hard. She could not stop her tears. But she was smiling. He knows what she was doing but he never stops. Today her tears did not affect him or maybe he thinks so. He was happy. He did for which he come here. He took his revenge from her. He knew he killed her. She will die every day but as they say if we have to get something then lose something. He lost himself. He did not kill her alone but 2 souls. He killed himself and he knew that. This was what he chose for himself, the sleepless nights which will hunts him for his life. But he took his revenge from her. He still remembers the day when he was returning from his college. It happened 2 years ago when his bike stops in front a hospital after a shocking call on his cell phone. But he was late. His brother was dead. Suicide was the reason of his death. But the dairy of his brother change everything for him. For him It was not a suicide but a murder. A girl was the reason of his brother's suicide. He was keen to take revenge. He changed his college and then everything gone in his way. She falls for him. Today he broke her completely. It was same heart which had starting feel her pain but today it was like he changed himself into a stone. Today he chose revenge over her and he was not unaware from the gifts he got with this revenge; loneliness, emptiness. He comes too far from her.
She was facing her back. She was smiling with teary eyes. she knew this. She knew why he comes here 2 years ago. She knew it from beginning and that's why she tried to avoid him. But it seems like he come only for her and at the end she fall in the trap. She never wanted his forgiveness nor she ever try to run. She knows it was her fault. She never knew her one bet could take a life. His brother was a nice guy and she was aware the fact that he loves her. But it was different time. She was most beautiful girl of the college and she never realizes how arrogance she had. She humiliates him. It was worst. Later she realized her mistake. She could have simply ignored him but she did not. She used him for her purpose and then she humiliates him. She realized it but it was too late. And today everything is over. She was waiting for this day but it takes too much time. She means it what she said to him. He becomes her world in last 2 years and now he was leaving. He was happy breaking her and she too. She was happy for him.she was happy for his success. She was happy because she had seen something in his eyes which he was trying to hide from her. The same thing which she had always saw in her own eyes whenever she faces mirror. She knew it was not worthless. She knew he loves her. She knew it was not only a game for him. She knew she got her punishment but why he got punishment, she was unaware from the fact. Punishment of his whole life and that's hurt her. It was she who deserve punishment, then why he too. He was showing ignorance and arrogance to her but could not hide his emotions. She was smiling for his success. He was happy for his success but unaware from them a soul was crying for both of their their failure.

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Thanks for the PM. Nice OS. Emotions were deep & heart touching. U should write more often.

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A revenge story :-/

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It's so nice and painful :-(

U have written it very beautifully

U made me feel those pain through ur words

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Prologue - 2

He looked toward her with teary eyes. He never imagine this day when she will stand against him. Today she is standing in front of him with evil smile on her face. "so hero... still here. I thought you will leave from here after knowing the truth. "She chuckled. He wants to go toward her but he stops himself. "You did not have any need to do this. If once you told me the truth, I walks away from you." He gives her sad smile. She gives her serious look. "See, I never want to hurt you but this was a game and it's the end. "She laughs. It was hard for him. Is she the same girl whom he knew? "Hurt?? You did not just hurt me . You killed me. It's just game for you but for me it was my life." He looked toward the window to hide his tears from her. She walks toward the sofa and sit there. "Today's lovers never understand. I never love you. Look I warn you long time ago. I told you that you will hate me when you will got to know the real me." He remembers she used to tell him but he never took it serious. He was too much in love with her. With sudden his expression got blank. He remembers something. His gage shifted toward the gun lying near a dead body. He took it in his hands and gives her sad smile. "You remember when you asked me why people call me hero. And used to ask me that in my life I ever did anything which heroes do." She was confused why he is talking like this. She never know when her lips mumbles " yaa I remembers and you used to say me that one day you will do something like heroes do." He gives chuckle. "So you remember. See today is the day. If possible then pls do claps for me. "Saying this he kept the gun on his head. She tried to run toward him but a gunshot and everything falls apart. ... silence...

He opens his eyes trying to analysis his surroundings. There he found her lying down on the ground with blood coming from her stomach. He shoots her. He killed her. He starts walking toward exit. Her memories start running in front of his eyes. Their first meet, her eyes, her smile... He destroys everything. In his whole life he never raises a hand on anyone but today he killed her. He took his car and tried to starts it but his hands were shivering. He looked toward his hand full of blood. He lost everything. Next moment he was driving his car in the middle of road. He was too lost in her memories that he could not even notice a truck coming in his way... BOOM...

His POV in inclined lines

He was there lying on road with full of blood but his eyes were still open. The tears were still falling from his eyes. The blood was coming from his head. He turn his face toward his car. Hero... my name is hero. This is not my real name but my friends give me this name. In my whole life I never did anything like heroes do but dnt know why my friends called me hero. I did not have anything special in me aspect my face and my heart. Heart... what a thing made by god. It beat in every human body. Its weight in man has 300 gm but in women its weight is 200gm. This difference of 100gm is the fact. This difference changed my life completely. Now I am lying on the road in pool of my own blood waiting for death. This difference of 100gm made me criminal. I killed her but why and who was at fault? Me or She or her ego? or someone else from whom all this starts? May be answer of this does not matter for you but my brother will ask these question from all of you. What I did is wrong or right... if possible then plss tell to my brother. A smile curved on his lips. Her face again starts running in his mind. I should not have fall for her but how I could stop myself... she was too beautifull...