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Amazing update..full of manan...bodyguard..hehe...i luvd it..
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lovely update
full of manan loved it a lot
loved the kid nandini
their moments at beach were just lovely
loved the way how nandini became a kid and build sand castles and played in the water
but our mnaik can never leave a chance to romance and tease nandini
loved the way how both manan played with kids in the water
the way nandini called manik her personal bodyguard awww 😳
eagerly waiting for the next part
and thanks for the pm 😊
please continue soon πŸ˜ƒ
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Hi friends how are you all ? I hope everything is fit and fine.As today is the last day of 2015 so i want to thank all my dearest Friends & Readers for their time , their love and for their appreciation . You guys are so much supportive πŸ€—. Thanks for your kind support and your sweet words

For all my Frineds... Dil se






And I hope k tum sub ka yeh support, aur yeh love next year mein bhi aise hi rahe ga.




Ok yaar raat ko bilkul time nahi hai coz kal paper hai so main abhi update kar rahe hoon as i said new year update mile ga so here i am.

Sorry in advance for mistakes






Part 48 a


In Malhotra Mansion all friends were chatting when suddenly cabir asked: Yaar yeh Manik ko kuch zyada time nahi lag gya apni laila ko chorne mein.


All others smile on this then mukti said: Arey chor na yaar Cabir tujhe Manik ka to pata hai na.wo kahan itna jaldi Nandini ki jaan chorne wala hai.


Aryaman : You r right Mukti but Cabir bhi sahi hai bht time ho gya Manik ko gaye hoe.


On same Moment they heard: Kis ko gaye hoe time ho gya.



All looked in that direction and found Manik is back with Nandini again.


Cabir with surprise asked: Guys yeh Nandini sirf mujhe hi Manik k sath nazar a rahe hai ya tum log bhi dekh sakte ho isey.


Aliya with a laugh: Cabir stop your drama yaar.Nandini bhi haan yahan.


Cabir came towards Nandini and asked to tease this couple: Kya hoa Nandini ghar walon ne ghar se nikal diya kya.Waise Chachi se aisi umeed to nahi hai... ya phir tum ne hi ghar jane se mana kar diya.


Nandini with wide eyes looked at his face and then understand his tease.


Manik in loud voice while patted on Cabir's chest: Aby saley kya boley jar aha hai.Chachi isey kyo ghar se nikale gi haan?


Cabir with innocent face: Teri wajha se.pura din to yeh tere sath hoti hai. So may be chachi ne kaha ho Ja Nandini jee le apni zindagi ... Ja apney Manik k sath.


He said all this in totally filmy style.Other friends enjoyed this drama.whereas Manik with an irritated face: Cabir band kar apni yeh Drama Company.


Cabir : Ohky as u say Bro but yeh to batao chakar kiya hai.Tu to isey chorne gya tha .to yeh phir se tere sath.Kahen shadi kar k wapis to nahi a rahe.


Now this statement is like a electric shock for Manan.


Manik in irritation grab Cabir's Shirt and said in threatening voice: Kameeney tu bakwas kiya bina nahi rah sakta kya.


Cabir again with innocent pouty face: Arey main ne kya kaha... Gusa to aisey ho raha hai jaise such mein shadi kar k aya ho... Wo kahte haan na "A guilty conscience needs no accuser."



Mukti when saw that now Manik will not leave Cabir .she at once came between them and said: Peace plzzz guys kya kar rahe ho.


She then said to Cabir: Arey cabir tu apni bolti band kare ga to manik kuch batae ga na.Haan Manik ab bata kya hoa.


At same time they heard Mr Malhotra's voice: Manik Nandini Tum dono a gaye. Main tum dono ka hi intezar kar raha tha.


Manik came in his direction and asked; Dad But wo phone and Nandini.


Mr Malhotra placed his hands on Manik's shoulder and said: Relax dear.He then said to others: Come here kids Mujhe tum sub se baat karni hai.


Now all gang members came in that direction and then all takes their seats .


Mr Malhotra: Hmmm to baat yeh hai k as u know New Year is just a few days away aur har saal ki tarahn is saal bhi Space Academy New Year Eve pe Party de raha hai.Tum sub ko invitations kal tak mil jaein gey.


But the point is K new year Eve pe tum sub ko aik special performance karna hogi.Jo k tum logon k concert ki promotion k liye helpful ho sakti hai coz is baar is party mein kuch special guests bhi invited haan.


Manik: Dad but itney kum time mein yeh sub kaise?


Mr Malhotra: Dear isi liye to tum sub ko yahan aik sath rahne ko kaha hai.yahan sub instruments bhi haan aur performers ( he pointed towards all gang members) bhi . aur abhi to tum logon k pass time bhi hai so I think tum log easily manage kar lo gey.Isi liye to main ne Nandini ko bhi wapis bula liya.

Now all got their answer of Nandini's return.


Cabir: Uncle baqi sub to thek hai but 1 problem hai jo sirf app hi haal kar sakte ho plz plz plz.


Mr Malhotra 1st look at Manik's face to know the matter but when he shurged his shoulder then he asked: Hmmm bolo kya baat hai?


Cabir: Uncle New Year Eve pe kum se kum hamein drink karne ki permission de do plz plz plz.



Mr Malhotra with a laugh: Bus itni si baat.


Cabir with puppy face: Itni si baat nahi hai uncle 4 to 5 months Without Drinks ...main kaise raha hoon main hi janta hooon.aur abhi bhi app ne restrict kiya hoa hai. Plz na ab yeh zulm khatam kar do plz.


Mr Malhotra laugh on this drama and said: Ok But pahle mujhe tumhare Doc se confirm karna pare ga . agar wo permission deta hai to ... mujhe koi problem nahi hai.


Cabir at once said in Excitement: yayyy Uncle u r great.I love you.mujhe pata hota app itni asani se maan jao gey to main kab ka app se poch chukka hota .Thank you. Thank you... Thank you very much.


Manik now said a lil loud: Cabirrr ! Khatam ho gya tera darama.

Cabir with scard puppy face nodded his head and others started smiling.








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Part 48 b

Days were passing like sand from one's hand. All day Fab 5 along with other friends prepare for that performance and In breaks they spent their time with abeer or doing chit chat on different topics.


Niki was appointed as a manager by Mr Malhotra.Her duty is to look after their preparation status.


With these preparations Cavya, Dhryliya,Manan,Maddy and mukti was also enjoying some sweet private moments.


One day Manik said to others: Guys I have an idea


Cabir who was very tired at that time asked: Idea for What?


Manik: Guys agar is performance main song k sath Dance ki addition bhi Karen to.


Mukti and Nandini said in union: Nice Idea.



Maddy: Bro Sorry yeh Dance vance mujh se nahi ho ga. Aur waise bhi os din GD bhi wahan hoon gey to Song pe hi mera band baj jae ga. Agar dance bhi hoa to meri to chute ho jae gi.


Mukti looked in his direction and then said to Manik: Arey Manik tu Maddy ki tension nahi le is ko main dekh loon gi


and then she turned towards Maddy and said: Maddy kya problem ha. Tumhare G D ne waise bhi to naraz hi hona hai chahe wo dance ho ya song to itni tension kis liye.Aur waise bhi yahan sub hi couple dance Karen gey merey sath koi nahi hai so mujhe nahi pata tum mere sath dance kar rahe ho.


Others notice this change in Mukti and Manan thought hmmm to lagta hai gari track pe a gayi hai.


Maddy looked at her face and then said to irritate her further: Arey dance aur wo bhi jungle billi k sath.Na Baba Marna hai kya mujhe.


Mukti turned into her Pholan devi's style and said: Merey sath dance kar k to tum bach sakte ho but agar nahi kiya to I swear main apney in hatho se tumhe qatal kar doon gi meri new year eve kharab karne k liye.


Cabir came towards her and said: Shant Lady Bhem Shant. Itna darao gi to wo bechara pahle hi bhag jae ga.(He then winked at Maddy and said) Kyo Bro.



Maddy again said to irritate her: Yaaa Kitna darati hai yeh.


Mukti now gave evil look to both of them and said: Main darati hoon... Acha bachu ab dekho tum dono .


She then started beating them.


Manik with a smile said: Cabir u to deserve this treatment.


Maddy after 1 mint grab her hands . she tried to release her hands but his grip on her hands were tight.


Mukti looked in maddy's eyes and then a spell created around them.they both lost in that magic spell.


Manik when saw this he cleared his throat and Maddy came back in this world.He released Mukti's hands and again said to tease her again: Arey jugli bili kya har waqt mrne maarney pe tuli rahti ho. Thora thand program rakha karo.


Mukti gave an angry glare to him on which maddy's smile became widened.


Other gang members except Manan didn't notice this new love story among them coz they were busy in their own world . They only consider it their friendship.

But Manan again observe this change and with lopsided smile looked at eachother.


After this day pass with the same routine.

On 31st dec


On breakfast table Mr malhotra asked: So tell me ajj raat k liye kaisi tyari hai?


Manikwhile munching his toast: Thek hai Dad.


Mr Malhotra: To ajj raat kisi ka koi khas plan.(Mr Malhotra said this while looking at Manik's face).


Manik knows that this question was specially for him but to avoide this he asked others: Haan bhi bolo kisi ka koi plan.


Cabir: Mera plan to ajj raat sirf peeney ka hai. Kafi time k baad permission mili hai to ajj mujhe koi nahi rok sakta and others said: Nahi uncle bus party enjoy karey gey aur kya karna hai. Party hi raat dair se khatam ho gi.


Mr Malhotra again looked at Manik's face.Manik didn't look at him.and Mr Malhotra understand k Manik in sub k samne koi baat nahi kare ga.so he left that topic there.


After breakfast Mr Malhotra leave that gang in hall and went towards his room.


All girls were discussing about their dresses and guys about their performance when Manik received a msg. He saw who have sent him msg and then shook his head.


He left from there after saying: Guys urgent kam hai main ata hoon .


He came in his Dad's Room and


Mr Malhotra said: Ayiye jnr Malhotra.


Manik sit with him


Mr Malhotra said again: Haan to beta g kya iradey haan. I know k tumhaara kuch plan to hai.Ab tum khud batao gey ya phir mujhe khud pata karna pare ga.


Manik: Dad yeh app kab se Cabir k jaise behave karne lag gaye.


Mr Malhotra with a laugh patted his shoulder: Jab se mujhe yeh pata chala hai k mera beta Romeo ko competition de raha hai.


Manik: Dad not again plz.


Mr Malhotra : Acha ok but ab mujhe yeh batao k tumhara plan kahan ka hai.Tumhe pata hai na mujhe tumhari security and safety ki kitni tension hoti hai ab.


Manik: Dad don't take any tension about me or my plans.coz main apna plan kisi ko nahi bataon ga.so relax.


Mr Malhotra looked at his handsome son and said: Acha chalo yeh bata do k jahan jao gey wahan koi safety problem to nahi hogi na.


Now Manik placed his hand on his Father's shoulder like a friend and said: un huh koi problem nahi hogi trust me.


Mr Malhotra cupped Manik's face and said : Ok son I trust you.


Manik now placed his head on his father's shoulder and said: Thanks Dad for this love and care.U know main ne is love and care ko bht miss kiya hai.


Mr Malhotra patted his face with fatherly love and said: Don't worry son Ab se har waqt yeh love and care tumhare sath rahe ga mera bhi aur kisi aur ka bhi.

Manik looked in his direction and gave a shy smile: Dad App bhi na.






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Part 48 c


In Evening when all were getting ready in different rooms Manik sneak in Nandini's Room.


He very slowly came in and looked the door. But when he turned himself he stilled at his position.He saw Nandini's Bare back as she was trying to tie the dori of her blouse.Manik's gazed were stilled on her creamy white skin and his steps automatically started moving in her direction.

He reached behind her and hold her hands who were busy in tying the knot of that dories.Nandini who was looking at floor while tying those dories when felt Manik's touch on her hands...

She got a shock.Her eyes immediately moved upward and from the mirror she saw Manik was standing behind her.In nervousness she left those dories and turned to face Manik.

Nandini with red face : Manik tummm...tum yahan kya kar rahe ho.

Manik who was lost in Nandini said in dreamy voice: U r Looking Beautiful.

Nandini looked in his eyes and saw the deep love for herself.she in her shy voice said thanks.

Manik placed his hands on her waist and pulled her on himself.then he moved his face near hers and gave a sweet and gental kiss on her cheek.He moved his face a lil further and nibbled her earlobe.

Nandini felt a chilling sensation on her whole body due to this act of Manik.

She called his name in anticipation and Manik came back to the world.

He moved back his face and saw Nandini's Closed eyes .He observed his effect on Nandini.

He with a smiling face again came closer to her but this time he moved his hands back and tied the dories of her blouse.

Then he gave a quick peck on her lips and leave after saying:I am waiting for you outside.

When he left Nandini Opened her eyes and again remembered what had happened a few mint earlier.She smiled shyly while looking her image into the mirror.

All gang members reached in space academy with their partners.

Aliya: Look at this.wow dcor kitna acha hai na guys.

Aryaman: Ya Aliya very nice.

Cabir: Ahhh yaar itney dino baad yahan a k maza a gya.

Mukti: Sahi kah raha hai cabir mujhe nahi laga tha k kabhi main is jagha ko miss karon gi but reality yehi hai k is jagha ko main ne bht miss kiya .

Navya: Hum ne bhi.

Nandini: Guys yahan itni dair sari yadein haan hamari k miss karna to banta hai.

At same time they heard Dj's Voice who welcomed all the student and after that he played music.

Cabir saw the corner of drinks and said: Ok bhai main chala wo raha mera thikana(he pointed towards that corner)

Navya held his hand and said: Arey abhi kahan ja rahe ho.New year kya talli ho k manao gey. Abhi kafi time hai.aur waise bhi abhi pahle perform to kar lo then os k bare mein sochna.

Cabir: kya yaar madhubala har baar bech mein a jati ho.

Navya: Acha hum bech mein a jate haan... thek hai jao ab hum nahi rokein gey... aur ainda hum se baat nahi karna.

Cabir: Really Madhubala mujh se baat kiya bina rah lo gi.

Navya in anger replied: Haan rah lein gey.

Now cabir encircled his arms around her and said: Arey magar mera kya hoga.Main tumhari is buk buk k bina nahi rah sakta na.to os ko main baad mein dekh loon ga abhi ka time apni madhubala k nam. Ab khush.

All friends started enjoying their time with dancing in couples.

Manik while dancing with Nandini said to her: Performance k baad ready rahna. Hamein yahan se nikalna hai.

Nandini: Manik aise kaise sub friends yahan haan .aise kahan jaen gey hum.

Manik oski tension tum nahi lo wo sub main dekh loon ga ok.

Nandini: Hmmm.

Time passed like this and then the time of their performance came.

Mukti and aliya takes their position and then for a change all boys came in Punjabi style with Punjabi dhol.

And girls(Navya,Nandiniand niki) and do bhangra step in starting.

Then after sometime Fab 3 (Manik, Cabir and Dhruv ) takes their position with their instruments and Aryaman and Maddy were there with dhols.

Manik

Sar jhuka ke kar salaam hai shaam shaandaar

Maddy

Aasmaan se aa giri hai shaam shaandaar

Cabir,Dhruv and Aryaman

Chak de andhera
Chaand jala de,

Bulb bana ke..

All boys one by one sing and swing with their girls

Fikr na kariyo
Karna bhi kya hai,

bijli bacha ke..
Sar-e-aam pila khushi ke jaam shaandaar
Aasmaan se aa giri yeh shaam shaandaar


Boys changes their position while singing and dancing

Jazbaat ke chillar ko note bana ke
Mehandi raat pe khulke luta
Chingaariyon ko visphot bana ke
Aiyyashi ke tu rocket chhuda
Kaisa darr, tu kar guzar ye kaam shaandaar
Aasmaan se aa giri yeh shaam shaandaar

After this Aryaman and Maddy in full excited mood do a dhol competition. And others enjoyed on dhol beats

Yeh shaam shaandaar
Yeh shaam shaandaar

After the song all others were on stage but Manik holds Nandini's hand and drag her with himself.



Ok g bye bye ab next year milen gey. but plz dont forget to press like button and give your comment.

Love you all. once again thanks you for giving me this continuous support in this year. plz give me your love and support in the next year also.

muahhh remember me in your prayers



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then go to ur planet πŸ˜ƒ
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wow update was really nice.

love to see cabir teasing manan.

manan know there is something between maddy and mukti.

what manik has planed for new year.

waiting for next part.

update soon.

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