NIBIR OS - FAMILY WITH K PANTI AND J NESS

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Hello guys me again i know my story phir se is going on but i want write this os so please if any mistake is found
Maaf kar dena
Thank you roopsha for helping me šŸ‘šŸ¼
Ab sab khatam ab os padho

Nibir os - family with k panti and j ness

Nibir house

Nisha was preparing breakfast then kabir came back hugged her and says
Kabir- so wify kya kar rahi hai.
Nisha- chor mujhe kabir breakfast banane de disturb mat kar.
Kabir-idhar pati romance karna chhata hai aur tu breakfast bana rahi hai idhal chal na romance karte hai.
Nisha-kabir no more k panti ab agar kiya na toh tuje parega thappar tu ja academy.
Kabir-tu na bilkul bhi romantic nahi hai.
Nisha-agar mai romantic nahi hoti na vo shaitaan kaha se aata.
Kabir - shaitaan?
(Kabir does not understand what she was saying but after some few seconds he understood what she was saying)
Kabir-oye mere bete ko kuch mat bolna.
Nisha- abey oye vo sirf tera nahi mera bhi beta hai samjha.
Kabir- ha pata hai
Nisha-agar pata hai toh baar baar bolta kyu hai
(Then nibir 6 year old son came aayu)
Aayu-mom dad aaplogo nai phir se apni fight start kardi hai mujhe samaj mai nahi aa raha hai ki mai baccha hai ya aaplog.
Nisha- sorry Junior k hamesha ki tarah galti Senior k ki hai.
Kabir-abey oye mai tera pati hu pati parhmeshwar hote hai samjhi toh meri izzat kar.
Nish-ja ke shakal dekh apni mirror mai jungle se bhaga hua chimpanzee kahin ka.
Kabir-oye(shouting).
Nisha-kya oye (more volume then kabir).
(Kabir understood if he say one more word then he would be served as minced meat today)
Kabir-nahi kuch nahi
Nisha-good
Aayu(monologue)-inka kuch nahi ho sakta hai
He shook his head and goes to dining table
All three of them finish their breakfast and get busy in their work kabir goes to his dance academy and nisha and were in house to do the preparation for new year
Then nisha sees tiffin box in the table and understood that kabir again missed the lunch box so she and aayu goes to dance academy


Dance academy
Kabir enters the academy and all the students wished him and he also wished them with a smile but he noticed a girl standing near his cabin he was guessing who she was till then girl came forward and hugged kabir till then nisha and aayu enters and nisha was shocked and angry too a girl was hugging her kabir.
Nisha(monologue)-yeh chipkali kaun hai jo mere kabir se itna chipak rahi hai aur yeh kabir ka baccha bhi isse rok nahi raha hai k khainka.
Aayu(monologue)- yeh aunty kaun hai jo papa ko hug kar rahi hai. Papa hug break karo jaldi varna aapko save karna mission impossible 6 ban jayega.
Girl break the hug and said
Girl-kaisa hai jojo mujhe bhul gaya kya?
Kabir take sometime for remembering her but then his mind stirked and remembered who she was
Kabir-alia meri jaan tu.
They again hugged each other
Alia-thank god mai tujhe yaad toh hu tu toh suddenly gayab hi ho gaya tha.
Kabir- arey nahi vo baat nahi hai mai apne life mai thoda sa busy hogaya tha.
Alia-thoda sa duffer tune last 7 yrs mai ek baar bhi call nahi kiya.
Kabir - acha sorry please pretty please maaf karde apne ish bestie ko.
(Alia anger melted due to kabir cuteness)
Nisha anger has no bounds and aayu understands that ki uske papa ki aaj kher nahi
Nisha(monologue)-jaan yeh kabir ke bacche nai mujhe 7yrs of marriage mai kabhi bhi jaan nahi bulaaya hai
Kabir beta tu ghar chal aaj mai tera aisa haalat kar dungi ki sab ladki tujhse rakhi bandhigi.
Aayu(monologue)-mujhe papa ko bachana hi hoga varna kya hoga kisiko bhi nahi pata.

Aayu goes to kabir and hugs his leg due to his height and said
Aayu-dad
Alia was shocked
alia - yeh tumhe dad kyu bula raha hai?
Kabir- tu mujhe pehle bata log dad kisko bolte hai.
Alia -apne papa ko.
Kabir- toh mai hi hua na iska baap duffer.
Alia - papa matlab tune shaadi karli hai
Kabir-ha yaar 7 yrs pehle ki hai shaadi ab please mujhe mere beta baat karne de.
Kabir to aayu-beta aap yaha kya kar rahe ho akele.
Nisha-yeh akela nahi hai mai bhi yaha hu.
(Nisha shouted staring kabir like she will kill him right now)
Kabir(murmerring) - isse kya hua yeh mujhe aise kyu dhekh rahi hai jaise mujhe kacha chhaba jayegi.
Aayu(murmerring to kabir)- papa mumma nai sab kuch dekh liya hai aur sab suun bhi liya hai.
Kabir(monologue)-oh teri kabire aaj tu toh gaya bacha le bhagwan please.
nisha folded her hand to her chests and starts moving towards kabir
Kabir - nishu milo alia se yeh hai meri bacpan ki best friend aur alia yeh hai meri sweet si pyaari si meri wife nisha.
Nisha (monologue)- beta jitna makkhan lagna hai laga le lekin kuch kaam mai nahi aayega.
Alia(smiles)-Hi nisha its nice to meet you.
Nisha(smiles)-my pleasure.
Monologue-kahe ka pleasure chipkali kahin ki.
Nisha to kabir- kabir mujhe tujhse kuch important baat karni hai chale cabin mai.
Kabir-tu jaa mai bas 2 min mai aaya.
Nisha and aayu goes to cabin but she do not go to cabin she was standing near them to see what they are doing but she can't listen thems.
Alia- mai toh bhul gayi tuje bolna jiss kaam ke liye yaha aayi thi.
Kabir -ha bol na.
Alia-meri shaadi hone waali hai next month last week hi mera engagement hua hai.
Kabir-oh ho tu toh bari fast nikli.
Alia - mai fast kaha se tu toh mujh se bhi jyaada fast hai tune toh ek beta bhi karliya.
Kabir-ha vo baat toh hai.
Alia- chal kabir mai chalti hu bye.
Kabir-ok bye.
Alia give a hug to kabir and a kiss on his cheek and kabir gave a uncomfortable smile to her and she left and then he turn around and see nisha was giving the angriest look. She takes aayu with her and leaves for home. Kabir also leaves for home.


Nibir house

kabir reached the house and rang the bell many times but the door does not open so he shouted.

Kabir-nisha darwaza khol na please.
Nisha -nahi khulega.
Kabir-kyu?
Nisha - bahar board nahi padha kya.

Kabir then see there was a board hanging in which written "dogs are not allowed".

Kabir- ismai likha hua hai dogs are not allowed mujhe toh entry karne de.
Nisha-Tu bhi toh dog hi hai.
Kabir-aieee mai koi dog wog nahi hu aur vaise bhi dogs bahut wafaadaar hote hai.
Nisha- Ha hote hai lekin tu 21st century ka corrupted doggy hai samjha and now go to hell.
Kabir(monologue)- sahi bolte hai sab aadmi shaadi ke baad biwi ka kutta hi ban jata hai.
Nisha goes to her room and kabir thinking what to do now.

Then he heard his son voice who was calling him through the window then kabir goes to the window.
Aayu- papa aap ish window se aa jau.
Kabir- Good idea tu hatt mai aata hu.
Aayu - nahi.
Kabir (confused)- Nahi kyu?
Aayu- pehle aap meri kuch shart maange tabhi aapka entry hai varna no entry.
Kabir- Wah beta baap hi ke saath aisa karega tu. Tu bhul raha hai maine hi tujhe itna bada kiya hai.
Aayu- mamma nai bhi mujhe bada karne mai help ki hai.
Kabir- ha toh.
Aayu- Aap meri shart maante hai ki ya mai jaun.
Then he starts to leave but kabir stops him.
Kabir- Thik hai beta har kutte ka i mean har puttar ka din aata hai aaj tera kal mera ab bol kya shart hai.
Aayu- Meri three wish hai first aap mujhe ek PlayStation denge, second ek new cycle bhi denge, aur third wish jab mamma ko aap manaa loge tab mai bolunga ok.
Kabir- Ok ab window khol andar aane de.
Kabir enter the house and then goes to his room and see nisha was arranging items in the cupboard. Then he goes to her and back hugged her and says
Kabir- Wifey abhi bhi gussa ho.
Nisha(shocked+angry)- Tu andar kaise aaya jaroor uss shaitaan nai ander aayne mai help ki hogi na.


Then nisha turned started beating him black and blue and kabir trying to save him from this beating session. Then he got succeed caught her hands and said
Kabir-Nisha yaar tu kyu gussa ho rahi hai.
Nisha - vo alia tujh se kitna chipak rahi thi and wait a minute tune usko jaan bulayya tune itne saal mai kabhi bhi mujhe jaan bulaya hai kya bol na.
Kabir- Mai tujhe jaan kyu bulao(Nisha gave him a shocked expression then he continued)
Kyuki tu meri jaan hai tu meri life hai tu meri sab kuch hai ab bol mai tujhe jaan kyu bulau.
Nisha anger melt and she hugged kabir
Nisha - tu har bar kuch na kuch bol ke mere gusse ko melt kar deta hai lekin ussne tujhe kiss kyu kiya tha.
Kabir- Aere meri maa vo bol rahi thi ki next month uski shaadi hai ussi ka invitation de rahi thi ab samjhi.
Nisha- sorry lekin tujhe koi hug kare mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai samjha tu.
Kabir - Kyu tu j ho rahi hai.
Nisha- Tu kitna bada k hai.
Kabir- aur tu mere k se kitna j hai.
Both chuckled. Then they started looking lovingly to each other and they started coming close to each other there lips was about to met but their trance broken by there son voice.


Aayu- Oh ho mummy papa romancing ha thodi der baad karna romance usse pehle meri third wish suun lo uske baad no disturbance.
Kabir - ha bolo.
Aayu- Mujhe na ek choti si sister chhaiye jisse mai bahut saraa pyaar de saku.
Nisha blushed heavily while kabir smirked
Kabir goes to aayu and sit besides him and said
Mai bhi toh yahi keh raha tha lekin mamma mannti kaha hai.
Aayu- mumma maan jao na please.
Nisha - Dono abhi ke abhi chup karo tum dono kitne bade k ho.
Kabir and Aayu both said- Aur tum hamaare k se kitni badi j ho gayi ho.
Both father son duo laughed
Nisha - Aayu what did you say i am j na ruk abhi batati hu ruk tu.
Aayu run and nisha runs behind to beat him.

While Kabir laughed and he thought
A family can develop only with a loving women as its centre.
Thank you nisha for coming in my life and making my life beautiful.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful OS, šŸ˜ƒšŸ˜³šŸ‘

P.S.keep writing !

Edited by sam_premc - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam_premc

ab kaahe res kar rahe ho...ek aur story hain kya..?ā˜¢ļø


Nahi ek os hai jo kal tak mil jayega
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky


Nahi ek os hai jo kal tak mil jayega

i knew it...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: sam_premc


i knew it...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†


Aakhir tum annie baba ho toh right hoga hi 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wah wah sujay os
jaldi jaldi update kerdo
RES
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awesome os sujay šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ‘šŸ‘
itna hsaya itna hsaya ki mera pet dard karne laga šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
apki comedy ki dad deni padegi šŸ‘šŸ‘
yeh os toh supper dupper hit hai boss šŸ‘šŸ‘
do write more os of comedy 🤣🤣
Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago
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🤣 🤣 Hasa hasa k marne ka irada hai kya?? 🤣 🤣 Awesome...🤣 🤣
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome šŸ‘
Ayu is too good, 🤣
mumma-papa ka shaitan baccha😈
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aawww sujay kitna cute update diya hai..
Nisha j šŸ˜†
Ayu badmaash šŸ˜†
Kabir bachaara šŸ˜†
Sister 😳
Superb sujay loved it aise hi aur likhte jaao..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update ... ayu apne dad pr hi gya h .. šŸ˜†

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