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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swriter


Ya i m also thinking same buddy . Will jodha forgive jalal for this mistake 😲
Btw thanks buddy for your comment 😊


but u r the writer , only u can tell us whether jalal will be forgiven or not...😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear
jalal was broken completely
abdul came to know dat jo is pregnent
plz update soon jaanu
thnks fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swriter


<div></div>you r right buddy but tell me when will you give me update yaar sab mujh se mang rahe hain mujhe bhi koi kuch do😳


as soon as i complete it..
5th se mera pre boards shuru h
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Posted: 9 years ago
Scaring twist dear. .. thankfully Abdul got to know about jos pregnancy...hope everything will be clear soon. ...continue soon nd do pm
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Note-> hi dear folks now I am giving 25th chapter of this
ff... I hope you all will be enjoying it... happy
reading 😊

Chapter-25 Part- 1

{Abdul was still standing nearby window. His eyes filled up with tears and his heart ache with guilty ... Because he could not save home of his little one... adhga sahab entered in his hojara ... seeing depressed and sad abdul adhga sahab felt bad in his heart... he slowly- slowly went nearby abdul... And put his hand on his shoulder... abdul knew who was the owner of it... For controlling his emotions which were flowing with his tears, he tightly closed his eyes and gulped his saliva to gulping his pain...}

Abdul( with lots of disappointment)-> " we should tell to jalal about Chanda's pregnancy... Because he is father of her child and he have every right on that child... He should know about this truth ... We are making biggest mistake adhga sahab as hiding this truth from jalal..."

Adhga sahab (sad tone)-> " I know...it is not right abdul... But please think about shahensha , if he got know about that "Chanda begum" is pregnant with his child then his sorrow bigger more than present and it will be not good for us and as well as for "mugaliya - saltnat"... So we can't say anything to shahensha till we will not find out anything about "Chanda begum"... And most important thing if anyone will get know about "Chanda begum and her child then safety of "chanda begum" and her child may in dangerous... So please control yourself not only for shahensha but for your sister and her child also... please don't say anything to shahensha now... Once we will reach to "Chanda begum" then we will both say sorry together to shahensha... but for now it is right for us to keeping this truth between us ..."

{Hearing him, abdul took a deep breath and nodded his head to showing that he understood, what he said... but his heart was continuously screaming that "it is not right abdul... it is not right... you should say truth... You should say truth..." but that time abdul ignored his inner voice without knowing that because of his this mistake, jalal's life would be change forever... But someone right say, who can say anything about future...}

{ After Five days}

{Now five days had left but neither abdul nor adgha sahab could find out anything jodha... Other side because of it jalal was becoming more frustrated and same time tensed... But with passing every day his tension slowly - slowly converting in fear... Fear for loosing someone precious... and his tension was also affecting on his work... Which was not going unnoticed by family and his ministers... Because of it some minister went to "Hamida - banu" for solving this problem...}

Monim khan (in worried tone) -> " "Marriam makkani" what happened to shahensha... Since two days he is not taking any interest in politic work... Today he was sitting in "Deewane Khas" but his mind was not there... when I asked to him that what we should do for "panjaab's farmers" who are facing worst condition of drought..." but after repeating two and three times... He did not listen to me that what I was saying... When Adhga sahab interrupted then he only said that "please do what you want" and walked out from "Deewane -khas" without saying anything..."

"Yesterday when we were talking on "fateh khan's issue" but he did not show any interest in it and did not take any decision himself about it and leaved this matter also on adhga sahab... Fateh khan is biggest problem of Mugliya saltanat... He want that "pathaan" again will be won "Delhi and agra ... But shahensha is not show any interests in this matter and also because of his ignorant behavior people are suffer... They are not getting their justice. If it will be happening in future then it will not be good for us and most important thing it will not be good for " Mugliya - saltanat" ... Please " Mariam - Makkani "... Please talk with shahensha about it ... Because his neglect behavior about kingdom will surely throw us in big trouble... Before it, anyone can take advantage of these conditions...( folding his hand) Please help us and talk with shahensha..."

{ after saying it all ministers took their leave from there... first of all she got know about " Rukaiya and jalal's incident" and now these ministers... hamida was got more tensed for jalal and she decided to meet jalal immediately... so without asking jalal for her hojara (room) she decided to his hojara ( room) herself...}

Hamida (in loud voice) -> " is anyone here?

{ a maid came to her and bending down her head front of her }

Hamida banu (in firm voice) -> "go and see is shahensha in his hojara (room) or not... And return to tell me"

{Hearing her master's order maid run as jet speed and returned after few minutes...}

Maid ( controlling her breath) -> " aadab Marriam makkani... Yes...Shahensha is in his hojara(room)..."

{ seeing her honesty for her work, hamida proudly smiled on her...}

Hamida (firmly)-> " hmmm... Nice... now you can go..."

{ seeing her master's satisfied face , maid took freely breath and slowly walked out from there...}

Hamida( in serious tone)-> " now jalal, you have to give answer for my questions... you have to do this"

{ jalal's hojara ( room) }

{jalal was setting on his couch with holding jodha's beautiful earring which he silently stole from their bed where she forgot it when she went for taking bath... seeing this beautiful ornament jalal's mind got lost in his beautiful memories with his love... remembering his past life in his love's arms, his eyes filled up with tears... his urge to going again in his love's arms was now increased more... Remembering his love's touch, her smile, her innocent face, His heart beat was running fast double speed ... but thinking it was not possible now, his heart again broke in many pieces ... his heart again started cry for his love... now it had impossible for jalal to living without his love...

Jalal ( in teary voice)-> " please return to me love ... please return to me ... I know I badly hurt you ... I broke your trust brutally ... But jaan punished someone without giving him one chance to present his side, it is not fair na... Please give me one chance to present my side front of you and I deadly sure you will be understood that why your jalal did it with you ... but after it if you think that I am wrong then I will be accepting any... Any punishment as you want to giving me ... but please ... please come back to your jalal ... Please return to your jalal only for punishing him ... I beg you... I beg you jaan..."

{Saying it, his tears started to wet his cheeks... hamida banu entered in his hojara (room). Jalal was sitting faced his back toward gate... Sudden he felt a motherly touch on his shoulder ... he knew very well , who was that ... jalal swiftly wiped out his tears and hid earring in his fist tightly ... after gulping his saliva, he stood up for facing his mother...}

Jalal (with fake smile) -> " aayiye aamijaan ( welcome to aamijaan) why you troubled yourself aamijaan... You can called me by sending your maid ..."

Hamida ( in serious tone ) -> " no... jalal if I need you then I have to come you ... "

{ seeing her serious face and talk jalal understood that something wrong there...}

Jalal ( in worried tone ) -> " anything serious aamijaan...?"

Hamida ( in serious tone ) -> " if shahensha start to ignored his kingdom and his people ... if he start to doing carefree behavior about serious politic issues then it will be serous na ...

If husband abused his pregnant wife then this issues will be serious na ...}

{Saying it her serious tone converted in anger tone ... mere thinking that his son slapped his pregnant wife, her eyes became red because of anger ...

Hearing his mother, jalal turned around from hamida ...

Seeing his behavior, her frustration and anger became high one more point...}

Hamida ( in frustrated voice ) -> " jalal... this behave cannot work now... You have to answer me ... Why are you doing such irresponsible behavior jalal...why did you raised hand on your pregnant wife...It is not my jalal ... My jalal always as do what it is right... But this jalal...

( after closing her eyes to controlling her emotions she put her hand on his shoulder and in soft tone ) jalal if any problem is troubling you then tell me beta... I am your mother, son ... I will be surely help you to get out from it ... but if you will not share it with me or anyone then no one can help you ... (Ruffling his soft hair) I have been seeing you since celebration ... you are looking very disturbed and lost ... Son, tell me what is your problem... Because now it is affecting your work and family son..."

{ hearing his mother's worried talk jalal felt guilty in his heart ... but now he was not ready talk to anyone about his heart problem even with his mother... first he wanted to gain forgiveness of his chanda... So for cooling his mother jalal turned with fake smile and lovingly put his hand on his mother's both cheeks...}

Jalal ( in love full soft tone) -> " aamijaan... I am fine and nothing happened to me... I am totally fine... I am only feeling some tiredness and headache... in real sense my body is wanting some rest now ...( with smile ) but I know a shahensha cannot free from his responsibilities ... So don't worry everything ok ..."

Hamida (deeply looking in jalal's eyes) -> " if everything ok then why did you raised your hand on rukaiya ...?"

{ hearing rukaiya's name from hamida's mouth , again all scene flashed front of his eyes and her words started ringing again in his ears...}

Jalal ( in anger )-> " because she dared to dishonored other woman... no one have right to using abusing language for a woman even begum-a-khas or mother of my child have not right to calling a innocent and pure heart woman as wh...re"

{ hearing it that rukaiya called a woman with this type of cheap name... now hamida felt anger for rukaiya and sorry for that woman... Whom rukaiya insulted...}

Hamida ( in sad tone)-> " rukaiya should not used this type of cheap words for a woman... I can't believe it , as woman how she could used such as nonsense words for other woman ..."

{after taking deep breath. She put her right hand lovingly on jalal's right cheek}

Jalal (lovingly) -> " jalal... every single decision or behavior of a shahensha leave deep impact on his whole kingdom ... because his every decision will be decided future of whole kingdom... So he should take decision or doing the act after thinking two times ..."

{ jalal nodded his head as he understood what his mother was trying to understand him ... Hamida lovingly kissed him on his forehead and went away from there, leaving sad jalal behind her...}

Jalal (with guiltiness) -> "sorry aamijaan ... I can't say truth to you ... (With sad full smile) but I promise you ... Once I shell get my "Chanda" back then first of all I shall take her to near you... and trust me once you will meet her then you will be also loved her. Because she is most lovingly and innocent person of the world...

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Edited by swriter - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice chappi
but u still did not unit ja and Jo
please join love birds
continue soon with a positive one
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
Unresss
Amazingly written chappy dear 👏 one of ur best till now 👏
U very well shown jalal's helplessness...
Now he's regretting of his deeds but it's of no use now coz his chanda has left him now...
Abdul and adgah should not hide about her pregnancy...
Jalal has the right to know this...
Areee jaldi se jo ko vapas laao yar...I wanna see jalal repenting his deeds
Thanku for pm
Continue soon
Edited by kajalparijat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
yipppeee you are first 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
yes you are second 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

Scaring twist dear. .. thankfully Abdul got to know about jos pregnancy...hope everything will be clear soon. ...continue soon nd do pm

updated buddy 😉

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