The Princess and the Pauper (3) Ch 15, pg 53, Epi pg 62 ****

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Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Phew finally got a chance to read and comment.

Pura holiday gaya mera in being sick as a dog

and in singing Jingle Bell Jingle Bell please make me well🤢

Well in any case I got to read and comment before the next chapter was posted. Yay!!!

The one thing that i loved about this chapter was how Maan puts everything he feels out there for her to see. Be it jealousy for Romeo or his sincere apology for his behavior towards her.

As for Geet, I feel like she was shell shocked so far, but now slowly but surely she is back to finding her footing with Maan and her way towards him

There was such a vast range of emotions portrayed in this chapter on both sides. Anger, jealousy, undeniable attraction, caring and nurturing and linking it all was a love for all ages that they both feel towards each other.

A chapter that brings a smile on a sick person's face is a good chapter Avi.😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

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dqno1

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Posted: 9 years ago

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thanks for all the lovely likes and comments😃

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Susegad

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Posted: 9 years ago

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First and foremost I loved the fact that Geet set out to find her self worth and Maan gave her the space she needed to find it.This more than anything showed his selfless love for her.

I am not sure there is an English word to describe the feelings between these two in this chapter

They missed each other, they longed for each other, they yearned for each other, they were strongly attracted to each other. All these feelings and yet there was something more and I think that is where the song came in beautifully to fill in the gap that words couldn't possibly fill up.

The parallel existence that you showed with no sight or touch between them and yet they were strongly connected by what can only be described as Kashish.

They were not together yet they were linked together by their feelings.

The unseen thread that bound them is what finally made their confession all the more beautiful. A clenching of the heart and a sigh of contentment is what I felt, as they finally surrendered their hearts to each other in the rain soaked night😳

Ah I do not want to come down from the bliss I am feeling along with these two, but come down I must and demand at least a few more updates, as just one update ca't possibly do justice to the story these two still deserve.😉

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dqno1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Susegad

First and foremost I loved the fact that Geet set out to find her self worth and Maan gave her the space she needed to find it.This more than anything showed his selfless love for her.

I am not sure there is an English word to describe the feelings between these two in this chapter

They missed each other, they longed for each other, they yearned for each other, they were strongly attracted to each other. All these feelings and yet there was something more and I think that is where the song came in beautifully to fill in the gap that words couldn't possibly fill up.

The parallel existence that you showed with no sight or touch between them and yet they were strongly connected by what can only be described as Kashish.
They were not together yet they were linked together by their feelings.

The unseen thread that bound them is what finally made their confession all the more beautiful. A clenching of the heart and a sigh of contentment is what I felt, as they finally surrendered their hearts to each other in the rain soaked night😳

Ah I do not want to come down from the bliss I am feeling along with these two, but come down I must and demand at least a few more updates, as just one update ca't possibly do justice to the story these two still deserve.😉

🤗

If you can believe it, I was so nervous till I read this

Haiye, that feeling when someone gets u😃 Priceless!

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ja1970

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Posted: 9 years ago

#206

Superb part.Loved the way Geet accepted her love for Maan.

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Kkiran

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Posted: 9 years ago

#207

That was an awesome update! The highlight was definitely geet finding Sweetu and the confessions! Angel is between so much love <3 Geet is doing great for herself and now she is going to have it all her love, success and family!

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Preethi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#208

Nice update dear Mann goes out for site visit at that time angle came to Mann room and searching for Mann geet trying to make her understand that he will come tomorrow as he is out
Adi came to KM and reviled that pinky is his wife and sister of Mann age is very happy listening it and dance in the rain while Mann sees her like that and feel happy seeing her like in childhood and approach her geet confessed her love to him and Mann to

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annirogc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#209

superb part.. geet want to become someone with self confidence.. maan gave her much needed time..now geet know maan only love her ..waiting for next

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Shruthe

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Posted: 9 years ago

#210

Loved the update..

it was good that Geet wanted to prove herself.. first of all she has been hurt and she has assumed that Maan loves another girl.. so to be independent she needed to do things on her own and to move on from Maan, she needed to avoid max interactions with him..

and am glad that Maan too agreed to do as per her wish.. though he didnt know about the reason behind her wanting to avoid him, he understood that she needed that self confidence to prove herself..

and when things went well for her in the professional and education front, the love for maan still affected her much.. and the whole adi blurting out made everything fall in place..

Loved their union and the whole rain sequence..

Are... just now they confessed love and how can you tell next one is last part..

ek extra chapter tho banta hai..

Would wait for the next..