The Princess and the Pauper (3) Ch 15, pg 53, Epi pg 62 ****

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This is a short story

It is something I was writing for the Kehna hi kya celebration thread but could not finish in time for submission date.

If you guys like it I can expand a little bit

do let me know if you want to read it.


As usual first part will be here, the remaining on the blog

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Congratulations on the new thread..
Waiting for the teaser..
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Congrats for the new thread
Waiting for the teaser
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TEASER


Anything else in life he could have lost for her but not "them".

He would not lose her; he would never let her walk away from his life.

Just as she was about to step out of his room, he said, "Geet, mere "ehsaan" ke badle ek ehsaan karogi mujh par?"


She didn't like that word being used for her.

All through life she had always done what he had asked or planned. Why was he asking?

"Ehsaan kyu kaha aap ne?" she asked with a frown.

"Tum ne bhi toh ye kaha" he argued coming to stand closer to her and staring into her eyes, searching for a response from her to his closeness.

It seemed strange that she noticed him fully then. Her eyes widened at the impact from those chocolate eyes staring meltingly into hers.

She caught her breath getting a close up reaction from Maan.

The hair perfectly gelled back, the eyes piercing yet soft, that proud aristocratic nose and that mouth. Was she staring at it?

She stopped looking then, hurriedly looking away.

He was taller, more perfect than before; she didn't know how exactly but he just was.

She stepped back from him and evaded his eyes rebuilding her boundaries.

Ye kya kar rahi hai tu Geet? This is not your Maan any more jo besharam ki tarah dekh rahi hai unhe.

Iss office ki pagal ladkiyo ki tarah sochne lage hai tu!
Keep your distance and remember who you are to him now.

Since he was waiting for an answer, she answered him, "Aap toh boss hai ab. Ehsaan kyu, hukum kijiye".

His eyes flared.

It took but a second for him to grab her hand and pull her flush against him.

He was breathing hard, fighting with himself, trying to contain his impatience.

He stared into her eyes as she stared back at him.

A/N: Bas aaj ke liye sirf itna tease karna hai

Do like and comment.

Not many people are guessing what Maan would ask. Story kya itni boring ho gayi hai kya?

Can't find pics It is taking so long..
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Teaser
Lovely
Friendship mangega
Bachpan ki
Haq
Pyar
😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ye sarasar nainsafi hai!!!
Itna koi tease karta hai bhala?? 😛

Maan pleading an "ehsaan" from Geet to keep her close.
Kya mangega banda? He needs to buy time and a chance to be near her, to talk freely without the barriers she erected.
[:D/] Umm... He might ask her to relive those innocent days of childhood " friendship ". Phir meri Geet banjao Geet!

Or something naughty. Dunno!!

Geet disliked him asking her a favour but covered it up with the boss card.
Uff... Maan ka gussa! Geet ke haath mei lag na jaye.

Waiting eagerly for the next part.
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omg emotional teasers yar..mummy i cant wait
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Congrats on the new thread..
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Teaser pe u just wrote exactly till the point where we cud break our head..
How am I supposed to wait

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