MaNanFS:Coz Mama am In Love With a Criminal..!Chp5(Last)/PG116/12-JAN - Page 28

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Chapter 2


"Please..! I beg you go home..! I can't..! I can't lose you too..!"He said painfully he was hearing the shouts of the people fighting near them but luckily they were at a safe place..! Nandini look at him with tears and without warning she held his collars and placed her lips on his..! KISS..! Manik's eyes widened with shock..! She sucked his lower lip lightly and Manik was still unable to figure out how to react.


"Kiss me..!"She whispered against his lips and he shook his head..


"No..!"He whispered back..


"Please..! I will go after that I promise..!"She again pleaded and without a second thought Manik pinned her with the wall and kissed her madly..! Tears were trickling down her eyes and her hands were struggling in his grip. She shivered like a cage bird in his arms his passion was making her feel dizzy. His strong arms were supporting her carefully. He broke the kiss as he felt her out of breath and she look at him with drowsy eyes.. He placed his lips on her forehead and she closed her eyes to feel the moment..! The noise of the fight was becoming faint maybe the intruders ran away..!


"I Love you..!"She confessed with pure heart..! His heart did somersaults as she confessed..! If he would be a normal person he would have said I love you too..! But he was a...


"But I can't love you..!"He replied back as lips were still on her forehead..


"Don't leave me please..! I can't live without you..!"She was begging..


"You have to..! Go..! And please..! Please never come back..! Tmhy meri kasam..!"Manik whispered sadly and left her there..! She tried to stop him but he went...! Leaving her alone..! She kept standing there as she was unable to move a little..! She just kissed her love, She confessed and he left..! She walked like a lifeless body..! She don't know when and how she reached home..! She cried and cried..! She can't break the kasam which he gave her..! Days passed but she didn't went to his adaa. She didn't ate she didn't left her room. Mama was worried but she too was helpless.

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Manik was sitting there sadly leaning with the wall. Suddenly Cabir came.


"Tu ny Nandini ko aisa kya bola hai? Wo aj kal aa he ni rahi..! It's been two weeks..!"Cabir said and sat beside Manik..


"Ab nahi aye ge wo..! She won't come back ever..!"Manik said softly staring at the cloudy sky..


"Why? Manik don't tell me you have scolded the poor soul once again..!"Cabir said worriedly..


"I haven't scolded her..! You tell me..! Boss ka phone aya?"Manik tried to change the topic...


"Haan..! One month more..! Than you have to take the action..! Finish the task and leave forever..!"Cabir too changed the topic and Manik nodded..! One month and he will be gone..!


"Aik baat boloon?"Cabir asked after a long pause..


"Bool?"Manik said softly..


"If you want you and Nandini can be together..!"Cabir said and Manik shook his head..


"No..! Before Nandini Mom was the most important person I used to have but she left..! She left me forever..! One bullet and she was gone..! Do you want me to lose Nandini too like this? Main us say door rahoon ga tou wo har trha kay danger say save rahy ge..! At least I would be satisfied kay wo jahan hai zinda tou hai..!"Manik spoke sadly and Cabir sighed..! Manik too was right on his place..!

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"Nandu..! Come on..! Aryaman bohat excitedly lainy aya hai tjy..! Get ready na meri jaan..!"Sakshi again motivated Nandini..! Aryaman was Nandini's cousin..


"Mama..! Mjy wo acha ni lagta ap ko smj q ni aa ri hai..!"Nandini again said hell annoyed and dug her face in pillow..


"Pta hai..! Manik k ilawa tjy aur koi acha lag bhi ni skta..!"Sahski too was annoyed...


"Haan na..! Tou ab koshish bhi q kar rhy ho?"Nandini's reply was too much cold..


"Nandu..! Uth ja..! Tjy meri kasam..!"Sakshi too was adamant on her place..


"Ma please..! Kasam kasam..! Pehly is kasam ny Manik ko cheeen liya mj say and now..! You..!"Nandini yelled and got up to get ready..!

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"So where you wanna go first?"Aryaman asked in a super flirtatious tone touching her cheek lightly as she sat beside him in the car and she moved away..


"Please..! I am here because of Mama..! Don't try to act over smart..!"Nandini said shrugging away his hand..


"Ok ok..! But I must say you are beautiful..!"He was such an ass..


"I know..! Now will you please start the car..!"Nandini's cold expressions were too much rage..! Aryaman sighed and drove the Car Nandini was carelessly looking out of the window when suddenly the car halted..! Nandini noticed the surrounding it was the same pub from where Manik had threw her out almost one and a half past month ago..! All the memories came back and Nandini was in tears again..!


"Come..! Let's go..!"Aryaman said excitedly and got down of the Car..

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"Manik..! Let's go and have party..!"Cabir insisted Manik..


"Yeah buddy...! It's been so long since we got drunk together..!"Dhruv too said as they were on Manik's house..


"I second you both..! Let's party boys..!"Abhi too shouted excitedly and they all dragged Manik with themselves to the same pub...!

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"Oye..! Is she Nandini? Who's with her?"Cabir said in a shocked tone as soon as they sat on the bar counter and Manik eye's shoot towards where Cabir had pointed..! Nandini was sitting with a boy. Manik was seeing her after almost three weeks..! She was looking so dull and weak. But still she was the most beautiful girl for Manik..


"Has she moved on?"Abhi too was shocked..


"She gave up on Manik so easily? I will talk to her..!"Dhruv was angry and was about to walk towards Nandini when Manik held his arm..


"No..! Let her be happy..!"Manik said sadly and turned his face..! Though he wanted her to be happy but seeing her with someone else was not easy for him..! He poured one shot after another but seeing his love with someone else was killing him..! Suddenly he saw her getting up with the boy..! The boy dragged her to the dance floor..


"Haww..! He is dancing with her..!"Cabir shouted worriedly at the same sadly. The alcohol made its way to Manik's head and he was losing it all the way..! Aryaman's hands were on Nandini's waist and his dirty look was making Manik go insane with fury..


"Just look at the way he is looking at Nandini..!"Abhi said dejectedly all three of them were smirking at Manik as they knew it will surely help to ignite the fire in him..! As predicted Manik got up and rushed towards Nandini and that boy..

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Aryaman offered Nandini for a dance..Though she refused but he dragged her with him..He placed his hands on her waist and she wanted to push him away..! When suddenly someone grabbed her arm and she was in his embrace.! The embrace was familiar. Though she had been in that embrace only for once but still the warmth forced tears in her eyes and she clinged to that 'someone's' chest more..! Because it was MANIK...


"She is my date dude..!"Aryaman came and tried to take Nandini with him but she clutched to Manik's shirt tightly. Manik look at Nandini and she look at him..! She shook her head in a no with teary eyes and he nodded in assurance..


"But now she is mine..! f**k off..!"Manik said coldly and Aryaman was dumbstruck..! That 'mine' word made Nandini gasp and she look at Manik in disbelief..! Without waiting for Aryaman's protest Manik dragged Nandini out of the pub towards his Ferrari and drove to his house..! The whole way both were quiet Nandini not for once tried to speak with him as she didn't knew what the hell was going in his mind. He halted the car in his bunglow's parking and again dragged her with him..! She was quietly kept being dragged with and finally he threw her on his bed..!


"You said that you love me..! Then why and what were you doing with that jerk?"Manik yelled and Nandini froze on her place. She had never expected such kind of outburst was he possessive for her? What he wanted now?


"Wow Manik Malhotra..! Like seriously wow..!"Nandini too yelled as her anger too rose the peak..! Manik angrily moved away..


"First you asked me to leave you alone and never come back..! You gave me your kasam and now when I am with someone else still you are not happy? What do you want? Why are you doing all this?"Nandini shouted and Manik turned his face in fury..! She got up and made him face her..


"Tell me? Speak up..! What do you want? Why are you doing all this..! Why are you behaving like this?"She again yelled..


"Because I love you damnit..!"He too yelled and finally..! Like finally the truth he was trying to hide every second the jealousy and alcohol helped him to spit it out..! "Sun liya? I love you..!"He again yelled and pushed her on the bed again..! And Nandini..! She was not in her own senses..! She was in the air.! Manik loves her too that was a dream coming true..! She was on the bed and Manik hovered over her..! He forced her tiny hands on the mattress and her breath stuck in her throat..! He was so close to her so close that their breaths were mingling..! His eyes were magical..! His deo's fragrance was driving her crazy..! And Manik's desires were on fire..! He just wanted to rip the clothes off their bodies and make her his Typical-Male-Ego...!


"I tried a lot..!"He whispered huskily in her ear and pulled the earring out off her earlobe nibbling it brutally in between his teeth..! While Nandini was even unable to breath...


"That not to fall in love with you..!"Manik continued with his assaults and whispers in other ear..! Nandini's hands travelled to his hair..


"But I failed..!"He whispered against her throat and she released a heavy breath...! She forgot everything..! Everyone..! The thing she remembered that moment was Manik and his love...! She didn't noticed the chirpy sound when her skirt got torn into pieces..! She didn't noticed when she was tucked in the blanket when he claimed her and when she dozed off in his arms all exhausted..! Manik too dozed off unable to figure when kind of blunder he has committed in that bloody'sharaab-ka-nasha'..

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The next morning the sun rays fall on Manik's face and he tried to hide his face in something..! But suddenly his eyes shoot open..! And BOOOM..! He found Nandini sleeping cuddling to him and he look at themselves..! CRAP..! What he had done to the little soul..! No..! He got up with a jerk and jumped off the bed he immediately wore his discarded pants but this all caused Nandini's sleep to get disturbed..! He was looking at her total horrified and she smiled at him..!


"Good morning..!"She said sleepily and sat up holding the blanket near her chest..!


"Am sorry..!"That's only Manik was able to utter as he sank on the floor in guilt and embarrassment...

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Wohooo..! Itaaa kuch ho gya na? OMG..! Again a nail biting ending hmm..! Now it's a three shot and next will be last happy now? So many things are coming..! MaNan has so much to discuss with but ho ga kya? How will Manik react? Will he again throw her out of his life like he did earlier? Hmm..! Who is the villain? Who is the boss? Ity sary questions? But answers...ummm only I know :p I am really very disappointed from the response on last update sachi..! Hell depressed still I wrote it with a little hope that maybe you all will open up and comment..! Plz comment lamba lamba..! Or else me gaib ho jaoan ge phr say..! Keep smiling..! Keep shining...!

Lot's of Love..

Mawara

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it
Continue soon
Finally manik confessed but In drunken state
Amazing update
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Posted: 10 years ago
HEY DII ...
YAR AAP DHAMKI BAHUT DETE HO...😭...PAR UPDATES VI AWSM DETE HO...😳..

ND UR READERS LOVED UR VWORK YR .👏👏... SACHI MANAN PROMISSH ...😳😳

OK BACK TO CHAPTER..😊.

AS ALWAYS AWSM ... ARYMAN😡... GODD I HATE HIM ND HARSHAD😡... ND SOHA😡...TOO

I KNW FEELINGS R MUTUAL.. 😃
FINAALY LETS SEE WHT STEP MANIK TAKE ... BUT HE LOVES HER TOO 😳..TOH I THINK ISS BAR SACRIFICE NA KRE...😭

LETS SEE WAT U STORE FOR US.🥱..

WAITING FOR NXT .😊...UPDATE SOON 😆

ND YEAH GAAYB MT HONA ..WRNA AAPKE READERS KA KYA HOGA ..YEH VI TOH SOCHO...😲😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it
Amazing update
Beautifully written!!
Update soon please!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
I have a doubt
You have written that aryaman was nandini's cousin,than why would nandini go on a date with his cousin or why will aryaman try to flirt with his cousin?? Pls confirm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Superb
Amazing mawara
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...aryaman I just hate him...finally manik confess his feelings...really want to know what will happen next??
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Posted: 10 years ago
all ur stories r beautiful that what i can say
superb update
finlly manik confessed nandu super happy
dont turn it sad one
ssly so many revelations r pending
waiting for that
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update wa-s amazing di just love it... Finally like finally he said he love her... Jealous manik is so cute... Hope he wont regret
Thanks for update di
Happy Eid-Milad-Ul-Nabi Di

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