Swasan OS soulful

Short and sweet😊
Good one

so serene and peaceful and of course soulful OS it is!! :)
Love how you weaved whole scenario from your words so beautifully... really nice.. :)

So sweet...Keep writing more...would love to read your works

awww... So sweet & cute OS...
loved it vry much...

wts ur name ? 😊

It was short and sweet but exuded peace to the core giving us a glimpse of future Sanskaar and Swara which we may see once they are through with this mess..

Thank you all for the encouragement guys. Jus wanted to right away something peaceful and keep it short.

Reserving so I can comment later :)

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Reserving so I can comment later :)

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

Omg to what do I owe his honour..😊

You are a wonderful writer..you are just awesome...

Will be waiting for your suggestions. :)

Your not teasing right?! 😆. I have been meaning to read your work since days but due to my travels things are crazy and I make them worse by trying to write and plus had a deadline to submit something else too:). Hope I'll get some hours over the next few days to catch up on reading I've bookmarked:). Your comments are making me blush! I just write as best as I can; this forum has some really special writers:). I'll let you have my comments, don't think I can suggest anything to already good writers:)!