Swasan OS soulful - Page 2

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

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This was truly special. It's incredibly hard (well I think so anyway) to write a love making scene that is beautiful intense, passionate and yet truly classy, not descending to vulgarity. You truly nailed that here. Your words have an almost poetic flow, the images were conjured up instantly for me and such glorious images they were too😳, full to tenderness and love, morphing with the passion of soul mates. Despite its brevity, it covered the full spectrum of emotions and it made me feel so contended and happy to imagine SwaSan having such blissful moments after all they have been through.

What's your name btw? I am obsessive about Pride and Prejudice (have often referred to it on the forum to bore all😆) so your UN made me smile a lot! Eliza Bennett happens to be my favourite heroine of all time, possibly bar none!

Love and wishes, Shruti

Quoting back to the previous message..no I wasn't teasing.. Your works.. There are a treat...candy store. There was not one place where I couldn't imagine what was happening.. It just flows infront my eyes.. That's a quality I really strive to achieve. To make the reader see, feel and listen all at a time. You simply make people walk through it.

Coming back to mine. I have been trying to write a love scene yet couldn't. This is simply an outcome of that's amazing episode we had. It all goes to the show makers. They nailed the scene so well. To write out something that speaks volumes even when it not intending to. I think this is the first of mine that I actually liked. I really cant accept all the compliments you are showering on me. But coming from you. Itr great to know that you are impressed. And I would really try to do that a lot to you wonderful writers on this forums..
Viji, you shruthi, sparkler 8 , sakura..i don't know you personally guys but you rock ...


Oh I'm Nalini bdw..
Nice meeting you shruthi..
Enjoy your holidays.
Merry Christmas!!!

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

Quoting back to the previous message..no I wasn't teasing.. Your works.. There are a treat...candy store. There was not one place where I couldn't imagine what was happening.. It just flows infront my eyes.. That's a quality I really strive to achieve. To make the reader see, feel and listen all at a time. You simply make people walk through it.

Coming back to mine. I have been trying to write a love scene yet couldn't. This is simply an outcome of that's amazing episode we had. It all goes to the show makers. They nailed the scene so well. To write out something that speaks volumes even when it not intending to. I think this is the first of mine that I actually liked. I really cant accept all the compliments you are showering on me. But coming from you. Itr great to know that you are impressed. And I would really try to do that a lot to you wonderful writers on this forums..
Viji, you shruthi, sparkler 8 , sakura..i don't know you personally guys but you rock ...

Oh I'm Nalini bdw..
Nice meeting you shruthi..
Enjoy your holidays.
Merry Christmas!!!

Beautiful OS