MaYal/RaYal one shot fiction - Darmiyaan- Sequel - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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U r welcome🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay Appyyy! Look who is here 😆
Was reading WU cos no time to watch and happened to see your comment there..and when I scrolled down tadaa I found this 😃
Such a cute shot this ! I love maddy man , he is sweet ❤️.. Haha two spoonfuls lol.. and raj's was very nicely written too :) good job 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -harini-

Yay Appyyy! Look who is here 😆
Was reading WU cos no time to watch and happened to see your comment there..and when I scrolled down tadaa I found this 😃
Such a cute shot this ! I love maddy man , he is sweet ❤️.. Haha two spoonfuls lol.. and raj's was very nicely written too :) good job 🤗

Hey! Harini! 🤗
Look who's here too. 😆 Thank you. 😳
IKR! Maddy! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved both Rayal Myal versions of the same situation.Rayal was more romantic.
loved this part

she wrote the name RAJ in bold letters inside her heart.
"You know that you're drawing the heart in the wrong place." he chuckled. "If one wave comes it'll take my name and your heart away."
"No one can take your name from my heart." She said and placed Raj's hands on her heart.

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