NIBIR SS- PHIR SE PART- 4 UPDATED PG-55

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello guys i am sujay kuch log jaante hai aur kuch log nahi jaante
Yeh mera first time hai koi story write karna ka toh please bacha samja ke maaf kar dena
Story start karne se pehle mai sonal and roopsha ko thank you bolunga for helping me
So thank you friends

Scroll down for character sketch

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

Character sketch

Kabir kumar-He is honest humble man who loves his family a lot in college days he has crush on nisha but never confessed to her

Priya kabir kumar- kabir's wife she is good at heart but loves kabir a lot

Vashu and arjun kumar- kabir's mother and father respectively

Pratik kumar-kabir and priya 2 months old son

Nisha gangwal- She is bubbly jolly nature type girl she loves kabir in college days actually she loves kabir actually today also her love for kabir never change

Gangwal family as same as show

Kabir priya and nisha were happily living in there life but one day change everyone's life

Scroll down for prologue

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

Prologue

(A boy in his mid 20's sleeping peacefelly...he is dreaming about her life)

Voice - kabir i love u

Kabir - accha u r again teying to fool me na

Voice - no baby i really love u...u r my life

Kabir - baby u r driving na toh plzz put ur cell down...u just can't talk while driving

Voice - ok ok sir (n that girl smiled she was about to disconnect the call suddenly)no...aahhh

Kabir - piya baby r u ok...piya piya

(That guy woke up with a scared expression n shouted)priyaa dont go

Ok guys this was the prologue pms will be send by roopsha

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

CHARACTER SKETCH AND PROLOGUE

PART 1
PART-2

PART-3
PART-4

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vaishnavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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sabar hi toh nhi hota h na humse 😆
unres it soon
unres
sujay congo shongo for your first story 👏
interesting start
kabir ka beta 😲 😲
continue soonish I can't wait much
thank you roo for the pm

Edited by crazyvaishu - 9 years ago

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1060675

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res...😉

------UNRES-------

Awesome start...continue soon...😊

PS=Hope sabko pms thik se mil gaye...😆

Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago

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oh nakhrewaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res...😉
unres😆
Awesome 👏
just waiting to know what will happen next

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Nimisha

@itznimi003

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Posted: 9 years ago

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unres

Sujoy...yr kya dhasu surprise dia h tune...😊😊

ff k sath kya jhakkas entry mari h tune

nimi shocked sujoy rocked😊

Character sketch...superb👏👏

kabir ko nisha pe crush that...❤️ nisha kabir se pyar krti h

kabir ka baby😊

prologue to full 2 suspense n confusing h yr😲😲

ab jaldi...jaldi suspense khatam kr...mera sar ghum ra h...

update soon😊

PS : ab tak tu update k liye mujhe pm krta tha ab mai tujhe krungi🤣🤣

Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago