KaYa's Engagement poem..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey girls... kaise ho aap sab??
this is sth I'd written a long time back in fb... I revisited this today so I just wanted to share with u all...

And since the proposal scene is stuck in my head...
like totally stuck... Oh God!!
*hyperventilates*
Kabira was looking shooo... nevermind!
*fan-girl's guilty pleasure*
*lets save the drooling for later*

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Taking my hand,
You go down your knees;
and slide a ring up my finger
On my knuckles, place your lips
and for a while, let them linger.

People around us clap and cheer
And when you embrace me...
I burst into tears...
Is this really happening?
Is this not a dream?
A dream I long wished to be true
A dream I've been weaving
ever since I stumbled upon you.

Yes I know...
Our path is long
and certainly not devoid of hurdles
(And see how Shreya standing is there
Looking like a turtle.)

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lol! I ran out of words to rhyme..
why do I even attempt to write romance... It just doesnt come to me :P
hope u enjoyed



~ Sumaya

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it totally
I tried writing a piece in my SS
Check that out too
That was from Kabirs prespective 😊
Here is what I had tried


"You came into my life unexpectedly,
And everything took a turn for the better.
Your warm eyes, your laugh,
The sincere way you speak,
And the kindness you showed me,
All became a part of my life.

As you unfolded yourself to me,
I discovered more and more beauty.
I have never seen so much
Gentleness in one person.
Without even knowing it,
You were slowly making a place
For yourself in my heart.

It used to seem so hard at times
To feel so close in a relationship.
But it's so easy to feel close to you.
I can't tell you how nice that feels.
I realize now that I had never known
What it meant to be loved
Until I was loved by you."
Edited by chats53 - 9 years ago

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