'Soulmate I Found You Atlast'- SwaSan OS

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Sudha

@Shadow-Fax

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Shivangi

@Annei123

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome OS !!!!

Keep writing more 😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey Sudha... 🤗 🤗

Kudos on your first piece on SwaSan. I really liked this, you had woven in Swara's confession, Sanskaar's anger at her doubting him; and the very effective way Swara handled Ragini and Dadi!

I always felt that the CVs had conveniently forgotten that CD which showed Ragini admitting to such heinous crimes. Lakshya stands accused of attempted murder and kidnap, but Ragini had confessed to drugging, attempted murder, and actually stabbed Swara on the CD with intent to kill (another matter that the knife was fake! 😛) So how come nobody thinks of using this evidence and make her stay within limits...beats me!!

Good that you brought this aspect into your OS.

I just loved the SwaSan reconciliation and Swara's love confession. Echoing everything Sanskaar said in that epic, goose bump inducing confession of his! 😉

Look forward to more from you.

Cheers

Viji