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Sudha

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Hey Sudha... 🤗 🤗

Kudos on your first piece on SwaSan. I really liked this, you had woven in Swara's confession, Sanskaar's anger at her doubting him; and the very effective way Swara handled Ragini and Dadi!

I always felt that the CVs had conveniently forgotten that CD which showed Ragini admitting to such heinous crimes. Lakshya stands accused of attempted murder and kidnap, but Ragini had confessed to drugging, attempted murder, and actually stabbed Swara on the CD with intent to kill (another matter that the knife was fake! 😛) So how come nobody thinks of using this evidence and make her stay within limits...beats me!!

Good that you brought this aspect into your OS.

I just loved the SwaSan reconciliation and Swara's love confession. Echoing everything Sanskaar said in that epic, goose bump inducing confession of his! 😉

Look forward to more from you.

Cheers

Viji

Hey thanks a lot, Viji🤗

Glad you liked my os. Well I've various doubts in the logical reasoning of SR cvs, and we all are well aware that RS shows are mainly of family drama and daayans.😆 but their trps are always high, which proves that only drama matters for trp aunties, logic can be forgotten.

Anyways with SR i still have hope that it wont end up with such fate. And with SwaSan around many may bear whatever cvs throw at us, since they're like a lollipop like someone mentioned in a post yesterday.

Very happy you liked my work. 😳

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Sudha

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: aamias
NICE

Thanks😊

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Sudha

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Ovi_Tanni
Very nice n cute os...i so liked it...please keep writing more😊

Thanks, will try to😊

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Sudha

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
Awesome OS!
Loved ur writing style
Do write more

Thanks😊 really glad you liked It!

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Sudha

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
lovely OS

Thanks Prithi😊

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Sudha

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Prizi
beautifully written

Thanks Prizi😊

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Sudha

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
such a awesome os
loved it

Thanks, happy you liked it😊

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Sudha

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: rose1998
So well written.
do write more on Swasan

Thanks rose. Sure i will😊

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-Ros-

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Hey 😳

Awesome OS!

It seems like CVs also suffering from partial amnesia.. they forgot MMwasis can easily threaten Ragini with that video.. . Wish they'd just end the new drama soon like you have here!

I loved the advice Durga Prasad gave to Sanskaar. ⭐️ Swasan are saviours of each other. Such a wise, unbiased man he is. I think him & Shomi are the only two people who can play cupid if Sanskaar keeps running away from Swara.

You portrayed the reasoning of Sanskaar's pain really nicely as well as Swara's feelings towards her new found love. The reasoning for Swara's doubt on Sanskaar is what I'm hoping they will show in the show too- her trusting his certain characterising more than not trusting him at all. I like how she acknowledged she was still stupid not to trust him & wasn't using it as an excuse.

Swara's confession mirrored Sanskaar's confession. That is such a lovely touch. ❤️

You write really nicely, keep giving us more!

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Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

hey, really nice it was!! from Swara's intelligence to trying hard to fumbling to expressing to grinning Sanskaar to Swasan as content Soulmate were so good!!! really like it. :)) keep writing.. 😊

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