The Princess and the Pauper - MG - Ch 6, pg 138, new thread link pg 1*

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Posted: 9 years ago

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CHAPTER 5

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Happy Diwali everyone🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Thanks for the lovely comments and likes.😃

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 9 years ago

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First aane mein kithna sukoon miltha hai😆

jaise kkoi jung jeethi ho meine😆

after reading the teaser i was thinking how maan will get to know about geets miseries... pinky is the answer... wow... her entry has helped to knock some senses on maan... 👏

brij ki khoob dhulaai karwaao... dishum dishum😡

angel ⭐️... will maan bring angel with him to del? am looking forward for that😳

waiting for how maan will search geet now ...

this story is moving on more interstingly avi...👏

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last page par meine comments ki

reply tho door like tak nahi💔

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Posted: 9 years ago

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wow lovely emotional update..te way my maan ki each words was passing lke needle in geet's heart and she shattered was lovely emotional..my maan in his angry didt see his geet's pain, but wen he realize he will curse himself for hurting his angel..who is tat girl came to pour oil in geet's wound..te way geet left everything wat dadi give and left from km as she thought she dont have any rights in my maan ki life.i love te update yar