Ananya ka fast! Comic OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi friends,
How are you all!

Here comes Sagi with the latest comic post on a storyline provided by Mrunmayee (Mrumi)
She has been missing (from the forum) ever since.

Hope she likes this one.

The scene is set on the time when Kabir and Ananya hardly knew each other. Malvika, on the other hand, flirts openly with Kabir, and he, as per his reputation, flirts back. One fine day, Ananya makes a bahana of being on a fast when invited for Lunch...and what happens after that is purely Mrumi's imagination. Of course, penned by me.

So enjoy!
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A typical scene at the Kashyap residence one fine morning.

"Ma...breakfast! I am getting late!" Ananya yelled from the bedroom.

"Ten minutes more, Beta..." Anita replied from the kitchen. That blasted cylinder: why did it have to get over just this morning, right in the middle of the breakfast?

She yelled from the kitchen.

Armaan!

What is it, Ma? And where is my coffee?

That would have to wait. The cylinder is empty. Please get the spare cylinder from the store. And Ananya, if you could help me fix the regulator?"

"No Ma...I am already running late. And we have a new khadoos boss these days. You know what? one can set the clock by his movements! In the office at sharp 9 AM, give or take five minutes..."

Ananya would have continued in her enthusiasm but for a sharp tug on her stole from her mother.

"And now you are not getting late?"

One look at the wall clock and Ananya swore colourfully. She was indeed running late! She turned to her mother with a puppy face.

"Don't worry about my breakfast, Ma. I will have something in the canteen!"

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KKN office, an hour later, the grapevine was buzzing with the happening news of the day.

"Hey...you know what? Malvika is treating everyone today!"

"What?" this was the unanimous response. So far this had never happened in the past.

"But what could be the reason? Some new merger?"

"But that sort of announcement would come from Khalid! Or even KL!"

The quartet of Ananya, Richa, Sunny and Trisha were not immune to the grapevine either. However, the response from each of them was as diverse as the weather pattern across the country.

"What could be the reason? I think she has got a new skirt!"

"Or new spectacles...But the previous pair was better"

"But that cannot be the reason. I am sure, she wants to announce something!"

"But what?"

"Maybe her engagement? She has been going steady with Kabir since quite some time!" Richa interjected, giving a sideways glance to her best friend.

Ananya banged her file shut. Somehow she could never define that feeling of dejectedness whenever she saw them together.

"Ok Guys...forget it. Whatever be the reason, I am not joining in!"

"But why?"

"Samajha karo yaar. Given a choice, even I wouldn't. But then, it looks bad!"

"Ohh I will make an excuse. Of say, a fast?"

"And you will stay hungry the whole day?" Richa had a concern for her best friend.

"Nahi re...I am sure Aunty packed something nice in the box!" Ronnie drooled over.

"That's the problem, Ronnie..." Ananya stared at him. "Today early morning the gas cylinder got exhausted and hence..."

"Awww...tsk tsk! And what about breakfast?"

It was then that Ananya became acutely aware of a gnawing feeling in the pit of her stomach. She shook her head and gathered her purse.

"Nothing since morning. So I am going to the canteen right now for coffee!"

"I think all of us would like to join you!"

And the quartet made its way for coffee. Ananya ordered coffee for all and then strolled over to the snacks bar for some solid sustenance. And to her horror, it was empty! The man at the bar was quite apologetic.

"Sorry Ma'm...the delivery van didn't come!"

Ananya pouted and returned to her friends.

"What happened? Nothing there?" The answer was quite obvious.

"No problem... How about some chhole bature round the street corner?" Sunny drooled and Ananya smacked him neatly.

"Don't forget we have a meeting in ten minutes. You think I can come back in time?"

"No problem...Malvika is treating everyone anyway!" Ronnie quipped and Ananya made a moue. Somehow, she could never get to like that one. Owner's daughter and what not, she threw her weight around the entire KKN office! And now, she stuck to Kabir like superglue...and he was not immune either! Indeed, he was a manipulator and a womanizer on top of that. With a string of girlfriends across the city with the latest tally of Malvika.

Yes, she idolized him...she admitted grudgingly to herself. He was a reporter par excellence. His command on the profession, his ability to make news appear out of nowhere was legendary.

She struggled to appear non-chalent and indifferent whenever he walked by.

A beep on their mobile alerted the quartet about the pending meeting. They all binned their cups and trooped out, Ananya being the last one.

Ok, she could survive for the time being on coffee, and treat herself to Sunny's Chhole bature on her way home.

She was totally unaware that the person on the next table had listened in to their conversation carefully. Manav, while sipping his coffee, smiled in complete understanding. She was in his team after all...fast or no fast, he couldn't let her go hungry!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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great start yaar Sagi
cna t wait for the next one..!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fasting for the next update. Joint venture too good
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Abe...local train main seat reserve kar liya?
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Originally posted by: RaizadaPriya

great start yaar Sagi

cna t wait for the next one..!!!


Achha laga?
Posting the update within an hour.
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Originally posted by: sutapabanerjee

Fasting for the next update. Joint venture too good


Thanks. Posting the next one within an hour.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is the second part of the OS. Sorry, but it is not upto the mark.Mrunmayee had a fantastic scene put in front of me and I tried a couple of more extensions to the same. but nothing worked...hence the delay.
Seriously, with fingers crossed, I hope she (& all of you) like this one.

This is the last one.
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A few hours later, lunch time.

"Come on, everyone...lets go to the cafeteria. Malvika is treating all of us!" The announcement from Khalid, as he stood on the stairs, didnt come as a surprise at all.

Ronnie nudged Ananya.

"Abe chal, bura dikhta hain!" But she was in no mood to relent. And the rest of the quartet tried their best, but the no avail.

"Just be there, yaar. You don't have to eat anything!"

"Just hold the plate in your hand, and mingle with others! It looks too bad otherwise!"

Nope! Was the solitary answer from Ananya. The trip of Richa, Ronnie and Trisha finally gave up and joined the cafeteria crowd, casting a long look at their friend.

"Huh...go figure! Ananya huffed to herself. Her friends were more bothered about the visibility factor, eh? What had Ronnie said, it looks bad? To whom? And for what? As if one's professional growth would be decided by these...

"Miss Kashyap!"

She whirled around to the voice of her idol.

"Sir?"

"Not joining for lunch?"

"Ohh...No Sir!" Ananya stammered. Her idol standing within a couple of feet, addressing her...She just hoped her heart would stop its gallop. She clutched her stole with the sole hope that her sweaty palms wouldn't be noticed by him.

"Something wrong? Am I bothering you?"

"Ohh No Sir. Actually..." Wow Ananya. Is that all that you can manage? She mentally cursed herself. For someone who never felt the dearth of words while doing a live interview, and here...all her mental faculties were failing her!

"Actually what?"

"Errr...I am fasting today!" Finally, you could mouth something. Well done, Ananya!

"Fast? And today? Whats the occasion?" dammit. Why couldn't he just go away?

"Nothing specific, Sir". I just do it every Thursday. Or any other day whenever that bitch is gonna treat us. And throw her weight around. Any problem? Now go and wag your tail. She is waiting for you!

"Whats the matter, Ananya?" A new voice intruded. Manav Gupta, the technical director, strode forward with a smirk on his face. "See, Malvika has arranged for a lavish spread. Paneer Butter masala, Lucknow murg tikka, Awadh-Biryani, Raita..."

A person's body language is a strange phenomenon. How much ever she tried to appear firm and disinterested, the drooling and subsequent swallowing made her denials sound hollow. And she hoped against hopes that it wouldn't be noticeable.

"Ohh Nothing, Sir. Kabir Sir wanted to know about the..."

Manav waved an impatient hand. "OK, fine. But don't delay further. And see you there!" Smirking his indifference, he quickly left the scene.

Ananya sat down heavily, beads of perspiration breaking on her head. Why did the blasted cylinder have to conk off at the opportune moment? And the snack bar...damn the vendor.

OK, back to work. Ek din bhooki rahegi to kuchh bigad nahi jayega. Now where is the blasted pen? And the file that I was working on...Her roving fingers encountered something alien to her desk: a small parcel.

She opened it without a second thought. In it were a large chocolate bar and a small handwritten note in a hitherto unknown handwriting.

It is not wise to stay hungry for long. Even while fasting. You tend to put on weight!' a friend.

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Night at Kashyap residence.

Anita opened the door to a persistent ring of the doorbell. Ananya walked in, totally drained.

"You are back! How was your day?"

"Fine Ma. But first things first. Could you get the cylinder fixed?"

"No...The regulator is a bit of a problem. I have called the mechanic, he would come tomorrow!"

"And till then, how do we manage?"

"No problem. A couple of food parcels were delivered from your office sometime back. Someone by the name of Manav Gupta called up before that. So we can manage for today..."

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really Manav?? He didn't let her to be hungry in the office and at night also. What a twist...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That is super cute
Can't wait to read the next part
Mrunmayi and Sagi great job together 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hii Sagarika... firstly thank you so much for this OS..
Please don't give me jyada credit.. i gave you only idea and plot.. but you have packaged it and presented it in SAGI's own style.. i know, you turned that plot little bit but that it is writer's right... that much freedom is needed to every writer.. you added Manav tadka in storyline .. wow.. this is something called Sagi's magic.. i loved it.. waise bhi Manav petpuja karne toh cafe jata nahin , sabki batein sunna hi toh Manavdharm hai..😆

BTW i was not missing okay... i have commented on each and every story and VM... even i PM you on your birthday and on Good bye's epilogue also.. remember??? as you know i am not a writer like you all so mujhe toh comments deke ki kam chalana padta hai...😛 and most important.. exam season.. pan tarihi mi roj ekda online yet hote.. mi tar mhante ki tuch gayab nako hous.. waiting for your new story...😃

once again thanks
lots of love and hugs...😊


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