#2 FF: 'Love Starts After Marriage' pt.33, pg.143, dt.25/12 - Page 84

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Posted: 9 years ago
unres here :P
Loved the crazy update
Basically I think it is the 1st time where Sultan And sikky both r potraying beautifully
super yaar
love drunk madgu
she is damn cute
keep it up baby
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Originally posted by: noiseygirl

unres here :P
Loved the crazy update
Basically I think it is the 1st time where Sultan And sikky both r potraying beautifully
super yaar
love drunk madgu
she is damn cute
keep it up baby


Thanks dear...
Glad u love this crazy update...
Haha... All r good in this story... Sultan too... Lol
Yes... I loved drunken rishab & madhu in serial too so thought to show madhu drunk...
Thanks fr ur sweet comment dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
gr8 part..
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thanks for pm dear..
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Thanks friends for all your likes & wonderful comments!

[NOTE: Guys! I really don't know anything about North Indian style wedding. Based on the hindi serials I have watched I have written the 'Haldi, Mehendi. Sangeet, Shaadi, Phere & stuffs' so I might go wrong in showing the rituals & I kindly ask u all to ignore my mistakes. Thanks!]

(This is really a short update. Sorry!)

Dedicating this part to - madhumeandyou / Mer baby & ArhamRizwan

Part 31 - Passion!

"They Told Me That To Make Her Fall In Love I Had To Make Her Laugh. But Every Time She Laughs I'm The One Who Falls In Love"

(Rk's POV)

"Ouch!" I wince feeling a sharp pinch on my chest. I was looking away when someone came to apply haldi on me & that was when I felt a hard pinch. Really hard that it pains badly. I know who dared to pinch me.
"Madhu!" I shout.
"Hush! Don't shout." she whispers. I don't know what the hell she is doing here at my house when the haldi function is going on? She should be at her home & once the ladies get over with this ritual of applying haldi (turmeric) on me & send the remaining haldi to Madhu's house so that the same haldi can be put on her & conclude the function.
"What are you doing here?" I ask in a whisper. "You are not suppose to be here. Go to your home" she is wearing a yellow saree & she has put her pallu over her head covering her face so that people won't notice her. All the ladies are busy chatting among themselves & I like a joker sitting in between them, embarrassed of showing my bare chest with haldi all over my face & body. Gah! I hate this ritual.
"Didn't I tell you not to take your shirt off in public?" she hiss. Oh! So that's what the pinching is for.
"Go ask your friend Trishna. She only forced me to take my shirt off & all my stupid friends joined her saying they want to apply haldi on my body." I grunt.
"If they say will you take your pants off too?" she asks pissed.
"What nonsense?" I glare at her.
"Then?" she grits her teeth.
"Madhu don't annoy me. Before some one see you just go to your house" I order her.
"No one will see me" she says confidently. I stare at her confused.
"My slave Sultan is distracting our friends & all the elders are inside"
I sigh.
"All the girls were ogling you & you were sitting here & enjoying those despo girls touch" she accuses. "If my slave didn't spy for me? Then I wouldn't have come to know about this. I should keep you safe from all those woodpeckers"
"Slave?"
"Sultan! He is on punishment. He is my slave for three days" she smirks.
"That Traitor. I am gonna kill him"
"So?"
"What so?" I bark at her.
"Where you enjoying flirting & showing of your abs & biceps?"
"f**k! No." I wanted to get over & done with this ritual but she is pissing me off with her irrational jealousy & possessiveness.
"100 rupees!"
"Get the hell out of here, Madhu" I growl at her.
"Will you come to my house while they apply haldi for me?"
"No. I am not going to come"
"You are so unromantic"
"Oh please. I do romance but I don't do crazy things like you" I state.
"This is fun"
"Baby..." I sigh.
"Okay I will leave but not before..." she says & quickly dips her fingers in the silver bowl of haldi.
"Madhu, no!" I hold her hands knowing her intention.
"Let me put haldi on you."
"No!"
"Why ever not? You are mine & I have the right to put haldi on you." she retorts. I let her hands go so that she will do what she wants & quickly vacate from here.
"Good boy" she says & runs both her hands over my chest, my ribs, my stomach, my arms.
"God! You are tormenting me" I groan loudly. She giggles & rubs her fingers on either sides of my cheeks & looks around & finding no one noticing us, she quickly pecks on my lips & escapes without getting caught. She is unbelievably crazy.

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"Rishu, leave me. I want to go down. Mom will be searching for me" Madhu tries to escape from my hold but I hugged her tight pressing her back to my front as I lean on the wall.
"No!" I kiss her neck. "Morning you so brazenly came to my house & had fun with me & now its my turn" I squeeze her belly & pinch it gently.
"Ah..." she winces.
"What baby?" I smirk & rub her belly were I pinched her.
"You are looking Goddamn beautiful in this dark green color lehenga" I whisper & kiss her blushing cheek. I couldn't take my eyes off all evening when the Mehendi function was going on & the next moment it got over I dragged Madhu to the terrace for some naughtiness & some revenge.
"Why you are not blabbering anything?" I ask my baby brat as she is resting her head on my chest & looking up at the moon with a smile.
"I am so happy, Rishu" she speaks.
"Me too, Baby" I kiss her head.
"Tomorrow Sangeet & day after tomorrow our wedding & I will be yours forever" she can't hide her excitement & contentment.
"You are already mine, Baby" I tighten my hold around her waist & lean forward & bending my head I kiss her cheek which is glowing in moon light.
"Yes, but soon I will be officially known as Mrs. Madhubala Rishab Kundra to the whole wide world." she says with so much pride. I then turn her to face me & take her lips in mine. I kiss her softly pouring all my love for her. She is so sweet & I love her from the bottom of my heart.
"I love you, Baby" I kiss her forehead closing my eyes. This I bliss. Pure bliss. Holding my baby in my arms, kissing her & loving her.
"Hey! Why are you crying?" I catch & dispatch her pearl like tear drop with my thumb. Then I lean & kiss both her eyes.
"You know? I am one lucky bitch to get you" she says & I flick my fingers on her lips for calling herself a bitch.
"Ahh.." she cries in pain.
"Don't talk like that" I warn her.
"See, what you have done?" she cries & pulls her lower lip out for me to see & its slightly bleeding. I feel guilty for flicking my fingers hard on her lips.
"Aww... I am sorry, Baby" I apologize & kiss her lips softly as if putting balm to her pain. She smiles when we pull away. Then she turns & leans her back on me once again
"How is my Mehendi?" she asks lifting up her hands so that I can see from back. I rest my chin on her shoulder & look her hands closer.
"Beautiful" I whisper & bit her shoulder. She yelps.
"What's this?" I point at her center palm where a heartin was designed & inside the heart shape 'RM' letters were written. "Aren't you supposed to write my name?" I ask her.
"Rishab & Madhu are inseparable. So 'RM'..." she says & kisses my cheek.
"Aww... My baby has grown some brains" I chuckle. She stuck her tongue out like a child, giggling.
"You are such a baby" I pull her cheeks lovingly. She turns & tries to hit me but I stop her reminding her Mehendi.
"Don't spoil my shirt" I warn her.
"You aren't bothered about my Mehendi design getting spoiled but your shirt. Now I really want to spoil your shirt"
"No! Baby. No! You have already spoiled one of my favorite T-shirt & I am not letting you do that again" I stop her.
"What? No! I have never done that" she argues.
"Yes, you have. I still have proof"
"What proof? Show me" she demands.
"Wait here. I will come" I say & quickly jump from her house terrace to mine & went down the stairs to my room.
A minute later I return back to Madhu who is now sitting on the swing.
"See this?" I pull up a white T-shirt between my hands for her to see.
"Do you know whose hand print is this?" I ask
"Is that mine?" she asks wide eyed.
"Yep!"
"But when I did this?" she asks incredulously.
"When you were 5 years old for the first time you kept mehendi on your palm after crying a lot & forced your mother to keep it for you & then you came to show me you hand but I was sleeping so you just laid beside me & fell asleep..." I tell her remembering the incident. "...in your sleep you messed your hand on my favorite white shirt" I say pouting.
"You look so cute when you pout, Rishu" she says & I pout again & she kisses my pouting lips.
"But do you remember what you did when you woke up?" I ask her. She shakes her head in negation.
"When you woke your mehendi was almost wiped out & it didn't turn red & you couldn't see the design properly as it was messed so you started screaming bloody murder & started hitting me thinking I did that... then you turned really nasty as you started throwing all my stuffs in my room at me, you even broke my video game & once you got tired you laid down on the floor & cried throwing your hands & legs. God! could any 5 years old kid behave so violent?" I shudder remembering the horrid incident while Madhu laughs.
"Then what happened?" she asks controlling her laughing.
"Then what? Once you had calmed down, I slowly explained you that 'Baby, in your sleep you splayed your hand on my shirt & it got messed'... but still you blamed me saying 'Rishu, if you weren't sleeping then I wouldn't have slept beside you & my mehendi would have been nice'... and I didn't argue with you as you were already upset so I just took you to the park & we played & while returning I brought you an ice cream cone & in return you gave me a kiss" I finish the story & Madhu kisses me on my cheek like how she did at that time.
"You know? I couldn't use this shirt after that day" I tell her sadly.
"Then why you still have this shirt" she asks, giggling.
"I like this shirt so much" I shrug.
"No! You love me so much & this is one of your museum collection" she says grinning. True! I preserved this shirt just because it has my Baby brats palm print.
I laugh & hug her close to me minding not to mess her mehendi & face her wrath.
"What else you have of mine, Rishu?" she asks leaning her head on my chest & I play with her silky hair.
"A lot! I will show you when time comes" I whisper back.
"Could any body love someone like the way you love me?" she asks in wonder.
"I don't know. But I guess yes" I reply.
"I don't think I could find some one so loving, caring, kind, selfless & sexy like you" she says the last part huskily. I chuckle.
"You are the best, Rishu. A perfect gem & I love you so much" she says looking straight into my eyes.
Then we kiss each other passionately.
"Rishu..." She whines. I know she is going to make some tough demand.
"What??" I ask grumpily.
"Can I sneak & come to your room tonight too?"
"No! Baby. We have guests at home & I don't want anyone seeing us staying together. Then we will be put to answer so many question & that will be really embarrassing"
"But..."
"Just two nights. Then u will be my side forever" I peck her lips.
"I will come once everyone has slept?" She asks. Why she is so stubborn?
"No, Madhu. End of discussion!" I say sternly.
"Okay!" She says & pouts.
"This time your pout is not going to favour you" I smirk.
"Then at least we will stay here at the terrace for long" she says.
"Hmm...how long?" I ask suspiciously.
"Till early morning 4? No! 5?" She asks.
"In this chill climate you wanna spend the night in terrace. No way!"
"Then you tell me how long you will be with me?"
"One more hour maximum."
"But thats..."
"Baby, you should sleep well then only you wont have wrinkles & will look fresh & bright in our Sangeet & Shaadi photos"
"Oh right. Come lets go back down." She says standing up from the swing. Ah! I hit the bulls eye.
"Come" I lead her back to her room.
"Rishu..." She calls me when I turn to leave to my house.
"What baby?"
"Can you do me a favour?"
"Of course. Tell me what?" I ask.
"Can you help me change?" She asks shyly. I hesitate for a moment.
"I will call your mom or someone."
"Rishu, please."
"Okay" I know where this is leading to.
I take her to the dressing room & made face the mirror. I take her shawl off her shoulder & place it aside on the dressing table. Then I went behind her & our eyes meet on the mirror while my hands slowly start removing her ornaments.
I take her ear rings off & kiss the back of her ear & nibble it. She groans softly closing her eyes.
I pull her hair pin & her long lush hair cascades down & she shakes her head so her hair fans my face & settles on both sides of her breast. Then I trail my fingers on her back & her body shudders, I have that electrifying effect on her exactly how her touch has on me. I find the string of her blouse & pull it so that I could undo the knot.
"Rishu..." she turns & hides her face on my chest. I slip my hands on her hips & slowly bring my hands up her back to undo the hooks of her blouse all the while kissing her neck & nuzzling her hair. Then slowly & carefully I remove her blouse off her shoulders without messing her mehendi design.
Then I kneel down in front of her & kiss her belly & dip my tongue on her navel. She smacks my head. I laugh. I pull the dori of her lehenga releasing it from hugging her waist & the lehenga pools down her feet. Now she is standing in front of me with her stunning legs, panties, curvy hips, lazy bra hiding her assets, swan neck, beautiful face, dark hair... my eyes greedily trial up her body & I kiss every available surface of her body. When I look up to see her, she has lustful gaze reflecting mine. She has her hands wide spread letting the mehendi to dry but it looks like as if she is opening her arms wide for me & I quickly pull myself up & envelop her in my embrace. I caress her back with one hand & with other I hold her head in place so that I can kiss the life out of her.
"You. Are. So. Sweet." I breath against our lips & kiss her again. "...And f**king delicious" I rest my forehead on her to calm our erratic breathes.
"Oh Rishu, you beguile me" she breaths. With her elbow she pulls me even closer to her & she kisses my neck. I chuckle & step back from her to finish dressing her.
"We couldn't keep our hands off each other right?" I ask chuckling, as I take her night dress out from her wardrobe. She blushes standing exposed only in her bra & panties.
"You know what? That's one fine sight." I tell her smirking. She turns completely pink. "Let me take a minute to feast my eyes" I says & lean back on the crossing my arms over my chest holding her night dress.
"Rishu, Stop" she says shyly.
"Oh Come on, Baby. Don't feel so shy" I tease her. She runs to me & slams her body against mine. Oh my sweet lord! This feels f**king good! This is heaven.
"Rishu..."
"Hmm..." I hum hugging her.
"Why don't you take whatever little cloths I have & take yours too... Then..." she whispers.
"Then?" I ask tipping her chin up to face me.
"You know..."
"No, I don't know, Baby" I tease. She points her chin towards the bed. I burst laughing.
"Oh baby, what am I going to do with you?"
"Love... make love" she says blushing.
"Ahaan" I raise my brow. She nods her head excitedly & bites her lips tempting me. Right then I get a call. Wrong timing.
"Mom!" I answer.
"Rishu? Where are you?" My mom asks.
"I am with Madhu in her house" I tell.
"Oh!" she giggles. Why she is giggling?
"MOM!" I shout.
"Okay! Come home soon" she says.
"I am coming" I say & hang up.
"Baby, gotta go. Come I will dress you up & go home" I say. She pouts. I laugh & quickly put her night dress on.
"Now off you go to bed" I lead her to her bed & tuck her under the covers.
"Good night baby"
"Good night Rishu. I love you"
"I love you, too" I kiss her forehead & I went to my room through her balcony. Easy way!

Precap - Wedding😆

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Thanks!
Love,
Sudha

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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yahooo. me partying . 1st time i came first in ur update. actually i was sneaking in n out of this most of the time to check. either i get my lappy late or i get 2nd in the post. there's lot of competion for getting first on ur update di, n im so happy to be first.

and thank you so so so so much for dedicating this part to me. ❤️oh! how i would love to see you knw.
ok now my review.

the haldi, oh that was awesome. in meiej, rk was trying to haldi on madhu, here ulta. madhu is so damn posessive , just like rk. rk does not like her wearing short dress and madhu doesn't like him taking of his shirt and other girls drooling on him. the perfect couple. the way you started the update was so nice, 'pinch*', for 1 sec, i thought madhu was pinching him when he was sleeping, but our baby brat was angry on him for letting other girls drool on him. and she again sneaked out but this time to warn rk . he he. rk not liking her accusation retorts "go and ask your friend trishna. she only asked me to take my shirt off"😳 i just loved the way he said that, i could so imagine rk saying it.
and our jungli billy will have ready made back answers in stock always at the right time to stab. the way she got pissed and said "if they say, will you take ur pants off too?😡" just amazing part. im ur great fan di.
and you also granted anish di's wish. sullu became her slave for 3 days and he spying on rk, lol.even i was expecting it. 'sultan traitor' he he when time comes all friends are like that. they would find new ways to pull ur legs. and still rk can never stop using F *** word, and madhu as if programmed to it asks him for 100 rs. but di, she forgot to ask him 100 rs when he used F*** word when they were romancing in the terrace after mehendi. i caught that.
then madhu applying haldi on rk, and peeking to see if anyone was watching and giving him a peck GOD! she's so damn crazy at that.
" GOD! ur tormenting me" i just want to say that when i read this. its so awesome, it gets into my head like that. just loved it. no words to describe.they together looking at the moon, how i wish to see them back onscreen again. it brought out old memories.
after mehendi rk had his fun time and revenge. rk asks her why is she crying ? , every normal girl would say , 'im so lucky to get you' but baby brat being a brat said it in her own way, 'i'm one lucky bitch to get you' lol🤣
rk flicked his fingers on her lips, that was good, right thing to do, but he should've done than smoothly. madhu n rk pouting, both are cry babies, posessive , crazy e.t c they have lots of similiar qualities but rk is the sane one among them. 'RM' written on her hand , oh that was the best. i so wished to see it. and rk admits that atlast she grew some brains ha ha. and here also madhu could't hit rk coz she was wearing mehendi, it so reminded me of rk madhu nok jhok in their room in meiej. awe thank u so much di for this. again she had spoiled his another shirt , that too when she was 5 yrs old and he stll remembers it. and rk has kept that shirt safely among his collection of baby brat's museam . i remember rk showing her nipple she used when she was a baby in one of ur older updates. seriously, he could've never married someone else. the racket madhu created when she was 5 omg, that girl is one notorious chick. rk 's dialogue ' shit, i hit in the bulls eye' was awesome. he wanted to stay with her for one more hour but himself spoiled it. and he reminding her about getting wrinkles and she moves out to leave right then leaving all her stubbornness, you know girls are girls. whatever you do.
' i won't find some one so loving, caring,kind, selfless &' sexy' like you', 😉who would miss that huh?
u got me there di.👏 and rk helping her change the dress, even though it was different, it still reminded me of rishbala mehendi night in meiej.and this one was too hot to handle. love you di. so much. u brought so many good memories of rishbala back along with this wonderful update. love you❤️
waiting eagerly for rishbala wedding
OH MY, I FORGOT. usualy its bittuji who interupts them, now radhaji also started. when u said phone ring, i was actually expecting bittuji
Edited by madhumeandyou - 9 years ago
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Awesome update, I thought Rishu will snek into madhu's house to put mehndi on her but her our Madhu put Mehndi on his soon to be hubby.. He he Madhu is pissed that Rk removed his shirt I laughed when Madhu tells rk that if his friends ask then he would remove his pants too .. Even rk helped his biwi to remove her clothes... just can't wait for there marriage...
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved this part waiting for rk and madhu's wedding
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update,
amazingly written,
madhu is so cute she really made sultan as her slave
loved their romance and the flashback part
rk is so sweet and caring madhu is really lucky to have him as her friend & husband


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Posted: 9 years ago
How many time they kiss yaar???
M jelous of madhu :P
damn good update
hey sudha why rk is saying our favourite word F*** so less??
:D
superb update buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb and awesome part rishbala is supeb couple...

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