ISHRA OS:VALENTINES DAY

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Posted: 10 years ago
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HEY MY DEAR FRIENDS I M BACK AS MY EXAM IS OVER SO I THOUGHT TO WRITE A OS
DON'T BASH ME AFTER READING THIS.IGNORE THE MISTAKES.




raman's pov

taking a gift from a store I got up on a bus. luckily I got a seat.
today is valentines day everybody want to meet their partners and I m not exception either. our relation started on facebook only.she will tell me to meet in this day I didn't think it in my wildest dream also.thinking about all this I notice a girl sitting beside me.I was sitting with a girl and I didn't understand at all.
sitting beside a girl I always feel uncomfortable
today was not exception either actually today I m feeling very uncomfortable.
I just want to get the hell out of this bus.
seeing my uncomfortable face that girl kept smiling. I try not to give her any attention that's why I plugged ear phone in my ear and started to listen song and looking outside of the bus.I sneakily looked at her carefully and saw that she is very beautiful. again saw that she is using mobile very carefully looking like she is chatting with someone. fr showing her that I also use fb I started to log in in my fb ac.again i saw that she is also sneakily looking at my activities. in this hide & sick game I saw a disappointed look in her face.otherside after opening my fb ac what i saw made me very scared I saw 7 msges of ishita.I thought 7 msges in one time that means she is very angry on me. this girl every time become angry on me today we will meet that's why I didn't send her any messages I think that's why she is angry.she is very angry type but funny thing is we didn't seen each other yet .even we don't know the number of each other but live in same city I wanted to meet her many times but she didn't show any interest.we just chat and fell in love.I send her many messages but she didn't reply it.
suddenly a idea strike in my mind
girls always feel jealous of girls only
so in taking the idea I send her message that
"u know I m sitting with a beautiful girl in bus the more I m looking at her I m falling in love with her"
this time she replied
"did u talk with her I m warning u don't look at her"
he reply
"I didn't talk with her yet but if u don't talk with me then I will talk to her"
"u r blackmailing me haa? shaitan (devil)"replied ishu
suddenly the 1000 volt of anger come down to 0 volt.that's why I love this girl madly.
suddenly I look at the face of that girl who was sitting beside me now smiling no hint of sadness.I guessed that someone maybe told her something that's why she is smiling.
I again send mssege to ishita
"where r u? did u reached? if u make me wait then punishment is waiting fr u"
" i reached only just coming I m in bus"replied ishu
"no need to hurry come slowly and u got seat for seat naa??"raman
"hmm but a mad boy is seating near me he is taking mood didnt saw me properly once"ishu
listening this I become alert like someone is hammering my heart.

I tried to see the mobile of that girl girl after seeing it i lost somewhere i saw my profile on her mobile I just can't imagine that she is my ishita only.
after composing myself
"oh so how is the boy ? did u fall in love with him" raman
"don't eat my head but he is not that bad the blue shirt suited him very well" ishu
I look at my shirt and said to myself that "hmm now its confirmed that she is my ishita"
I looked at her narrowing my eyes to scared her off and she look like she is scared.
being unknown its very funny to scare someone who is near our heart I get to know that today.
now I looked at her little naughtily
she messaged me
"that boy is looking at me in weird way now I want to get out from this bus I m getting
irritate pagal badmash lafanga larka kahika "
this time he could not stop laughing he laughed loudly ishu looked at him disgustedly.he messaged her
"accha think that we meet today and u find that lafanga then what will u do"
"u r irritating me now I ll leave without meeting u "
"no no no u calm down now bye OK bye bye"
the bus reached their destination. he log out and he got out from bus little ahead and by running he reached the place till that time bus also reached there she comfortably got down from the bus and started to look fr him and was shocked to find that lafanga here she was abt to say smthing but
raman said to her
I LOVE YOU
she was stunt to hear it before she compose he give her another surprise by showing his fb inbox to her she stand there with a mix of emotions happiness, embarrassing, shyness and what not
but he was looking at her face like there is no tomorrow

THE END


MERI DO GHANTE KI MEHNAT HAI.
PLS GIVE UR REVIEWS BE IT POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cool yaar kimty continue the story we are waiting
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
DAT girl sitting beside raman is ishu only
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shobiya

Cool yaar kimty continue the story we are waiting
update soon


pehle hi Parna shuru kar dia ??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That girl is ishu right
Complete it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh dr it's sooo sweet and lovely os dr.superb writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So beautiful os..
Juz love it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome Back Kimty..
Hope ur exams r good..
Nice OS yaar..
It was simple yet beautiful..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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LOVELY CONT DEAR LOVE IT
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN

Nice start

DAT girl sitting beside raman is ishu only
Update soon


tumne padha kyu yaar

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