Arhi TS: What the....... Just Imagine !! Part 2 on page 17, note pg 26

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Lol Kavitha I was rolfing from the scene where Arnav started making Jaledi's hehehe I was imagining Jalebi bai song 😆 .

Congratulations on your first TS wish you all the best

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Sarita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Awesome part, this really reminded me of 'A Man's World... '

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cheesemad

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Posted: 9 years ago

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RES

I am here.

I was supposed to get up at your 10:30, I got up at my 10:45 :P

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I apologize for the delay.

Coming to the TS, now you see why was I so excited for this 😆 I just loved it, I have never read anything like this ever. This concept is so new and brilliantly executed. You are not only a great reader here but a wonderful writer too!

Part one was not only funny but thought provoking. Arnav Kumar Gupta and Khushi Singh Raizada, I loved the role reversal. How Akash went to Payal Bhabhi's home, how diligently he works and in-laws still complains.

Vadhu Dakshina 🤣

Can't wait for next part!! AWESOME! 🤗

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Zuriah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Res..

Let me get out of this surprising shock😲😆

Will unres tonight😉

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As promised I m back with my unress..

In manorama mode..dee EEE KA KA THA..HUM KA 420 KA JHATKA LAGAT HAIN HELLO HIE..SAB KI TO BYE BYE😆

Congratulations chechi for starting ur own piece of story ..though its a big blow..but a pleasant one indeed..

Initially how things were going made me conclude something else as I was rejoicing arnavs new bundle of joy..his baby..but the second I read first two lines of flashback..I was

Its a treat to read such Hillarious characteristics of asr..HIM LOVING JALEBIS GOLGAPPAS N SPICY FOOD WAS making fist of giggles leave my mouth..wat an imaginative piece...👏

And name..hayyee..kaha se mila yeh idea..

Arnav Kumar Gupta..haha..indeed has all characteristics of reel ipk khushi...not that khushi is any less with her charming ceo demeanor.

I WAS WONDERING ONE THING HERE..AS THERE IS SWAPPING OF ROLES SO DOES KHUSHI HAVE DIABETES????😲

OH both indeed fell for each other in the very first go..n shyam sounds contended with her sisters happiness. .its good to have charming angelic SHYAM rather than MR POISONOUS SNAKEWA SHYAM😆

Oh..myy..I cant laugh more..the parents of arnav are tensed for dowry😆🤣...usually for girls dowry cases my taunt n cuss would me DOWRY LENE WALE..TERA MUH KALA and I m in delimma. .can the same cuss be used on girls family😆..yaya..I know..have lost it..but its all ur unexpected surprise ka dhamaal😉

Ufff..this just is more intriguing then any other 3s.. I may have said soo much gibberish stuff but I m not the one to be blamed😉😆

Continue plzzz ..I m looking forward for more of this dowry tension😛

Ur nutty nutter

Zee🤗🤪

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Anu567

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Unbelievable! Et tu Kavi?!! IPK Ek Jashn has inspired a lot of readers to turn writers! Love it! Will be back with my comments post the read! 😊

Unres...

Kavi my girl, Kya boloon ab? Chalo, let's start with 'what the..!' This was unbelievable man...I am still chuckling to myself...Kya tha woh! Kavi ne full fledged likhna shuru kar diya...and how!

The amazing reversal of fortunes and traditions and role play...all too perfect...Arnav Kumar Gupta...nahi...yeh kya kar diya Kavi tumne, hamare ASR ke saath...his kumbh mele mein bichada twin...an alter ego to the man...makes jalebis and loves spicy chaat...👏...yes, in another life this might have been their story. Enjoyed the portrayal of the supporting characters...imagine a culture that insists on the ghar jamaayee tradition...and on husbands changing names post marriage...as women these are always our pet peeves with marriage, is it not?! Loved the suljhee huee Khushi who remains sanskaari at heart! ❤️ Loved that you retained that essential togetherness...from holding hands to not wanting to say goodbye...that Arnav and Khushi embody in this story. Super cool effort. Waiting for the next part! 🤗

Hugs!

Anu

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Preet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Reversed roles.
Boys leaving their houses and going to sasural.
Really funny.
But behind the hilarious part there is a message in it
At least this what I get.
The Indian society need to change, why always girls have to leave their house and affections behind.
It cound be also the boy. Or simply both. Like it happens in these wester countries. Where love is the most important and predominating feeling.
Nice concept.

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Jayanthi

@jayanthinag

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

That was one hilarious take. Nicely written..

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sudhareddy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

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Hearty congratulations to the best reader turned writer 🤗 👍🏼

Kavi what a TS and what a wonderful concept 🤣. Loved, loved it.

I was RoFLing entire time while reading this.

Serioysly, It's Arnav Kunar Gupta?😲

When I read about Ghar Jhamai tradition, Aakash marrying Payal and leaving to Sasural, Raizada's seeing Arnav at temple and sending marriage proposal, Arnav making Jalebis, Arnav saying to Khushi that he loves spicy food and golgappas I was literally RoFLing 🤣. My stomach aching😆

Sashi, Garima and mamaji fearing about "Vadhu Dakshina" is so funny😆.

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lala rukh

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hahahaha kavitha it was superb dear...for once i thought i read wrong arnav making jaleebi ...then read the line again and i was like omg..wt a hilarious concept..:)

i loved the way u have started the story with arnav waiting outside the labour room...:)..

some how feeling happiness at heart that instead of girl a boy is going through all typical routines in a marriage proposal ...it was hilarious and u wrote it awesome :)

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Dhruvi Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

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OMG.. what was that ?? i am stunned.. happily stunned to see the revearsal of all those customs :) I cant stop laughing reading things so different..infact a different world:) perfect take hamare new writerji :) i was literally ROFL-ing while reading arnav's name as "Arnav kumar gupta" :) i can never imagine the thingin my head that you have write so amazingly :)

Kya baat hai.. m happy to read your writing as you are one of my favourite reader as i like reading your comments:) today you give me chance to read your writing too ;) thanks alot!! loved it, will be waiting for next part to be up soon:)