Arhi TS: What the....... Just Imagine !! Part 2 on page 17, note pg 26 - Page 3

Mind boggled... Imagination ran into a brick wall!!! What the? What the? was chanted as laughter erupted...

Res!

Oh my Kavi, yeh kya tha? That was absolutely hilarious! I had tears in my eyes from laughing so hard, imagining Arnav and Khushi of your story. It was simply superb! 👏

lmao.. K..🤣

There is a girl in IF who writes hilarious stories on another couple . She once wrote something called "Role Reversal" and I laughed and laughed and laughed some more. It was similar to your concept but she went ahead and altered the natural processes too.. so yeah.. men were delivering babies😆😆..

Based on other comments, I take it this is your foray into writing. Congratulations!!
Reading the first part of the story , I expected it to be serious drama but looks like you picked up stumping skills from vanhi😉. Its hilarious to read the opposing views on social customs from the opposite gender. Now where will poor kumar get the vadhu dakshina from? Reminds me of kanyasulkam. Magapaduchu lanchanalu lantivi emi leva 😆?

Arnav Kumar Gupta - 😆.. Wonder how long he will remain 'Kumar' now? would be funny to read the reversed romantic scenes. Please come up with something in the next.

As saying goes..
"Navvadam oka bhogam, Navvinchadam oka yogam, Navvalekapovadam oka rogam".

(To be able to laugh is a blessing, to make others laugh is an art and unable to laugh is a disease")

Comedy genre is my personal favorite.Thanks for making us laugh girl👏.

OMG! Dear...What in the world was that.😆😆😆...
So here I started reading the first part and I was like awww ok, so they have the baby and here I am thinking maybe you would be putting their life with baby in the story here...

But But but...I was not at all prepared to read the next ...I did a double take and read the first part again and could help myself from laughing ...what a googly you threw at us. I was having such a hilarious time with Arnav in Khushi's shoes . Making Jalebi's, worried about seeing the girl and getting rejected...that really blew me hehehe...Arnav like spicy food .
U just created a reverse universe with this and I for a moment thought wow, how would our society be, if something like this happens...Guy change the name after marriage...guys move to their wife's place...and daughters getting preference over the sons. Ahhh! I see Shyam is here Khushis brother😉...Love it...lol!
Their date went well, with Arnav getting ready to meet Khushi and then did I read he blushed...awww. Arnav saying he likes Gol guppa and spicy indian while Khushi likes Italian., Kya dear, now I am really on some other planet, reading that... 😉 Now Arnav's parents worried about dowry...Oh no this nasty custom continues in this other universe too..😲...
Beautiful use of imagination dear...An applaud is not enough for such an effort...U went out with all the imagination and came with a winner here...Eager to read the next part now...👍🏼🤗

Oh! I loved the names also...Arnav's Mamaji's name was so nicely done Madhukar haha! Brillaint dear.

At first, it started off relatively normal. But then, 3 years ago ka part padna shuru karte hi, muh se what the nikla!

At first I thought that maybe my eyes were seeing things and I actually rubbed my eyes to make sure, but then realized it was the real deal. And once I started, I couldn't stop ROFLing while reading it!! 🤣

It has everything from a typical Arnav and Khushi tale or any traditional Desi household for that matter but flipped. Not that it matters though- you captured ALL the nuances of what a girl (or Arnav in this case) goes through when they reach the marriageable age and have to deal with all the rishta stuff so well, that it was like reliving it all over again! Believe me, I've been through it all, so I know. 😛

That said, looking forward to the second part! I hope it's just as humorous as the first! 😆

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