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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey i just love this story ... read all parts in one go. .. wow ... Superb. . Grt wrk... u have presented thoughts beautifully. ..
Love is manan. .
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
All the best for ur exams
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Posted: 9 years ago




For your overwhelming response.



Hi Kaise ho app sub.I hope sub thek ho ga.Aur all my busy friends ...Busyness kuch kum hoe ya nahi😉.

Acha Bhai log and bahen log baat aisi hai k is time bhi app logon ko kafi intezar karna para aur next time ka to ALLAH hi Hafiz hai.coz examz 2nd jan tak chalne haan. so in case parhae se bore ho gayi and kuch time bacha to next update is month mein mil jae ga. I hope ab app sub is pe compromise karo ge😊.

Ok to update pe chalein😉.

Sorry In Advance for Mistakes.



Part 44



Next Morning Nandini's sleep broke at very early morning.She opened her eyes and saw Manik was sleeping very peacefully while hiding his face in the crook of her neck and Nandini's arm was around Manik.

She very lovingly ruffled his hairs and then placed a kiss on his head and said very slowly I LOVE YOU.

She then placed his head on pillow very carefully and then without making any noise came out.

Nandini's POV

Manik ne kal ka din mere liye kitna kuch special kiya.itney dhair sare surprises.Kitna pyaar karta hai na wo .But os k itneyyy sare surprises k liye main thank you kaisey kahon.I know osey aisey appreciations and thank you ki zarorat nahi hai aur osey acha bhi nahi lagta but kuch to karna chaheye na mujhe bhi.Kuch special sa jo osey bhi aise hi acha lage.Soch Nandini .Sub k jagne se pahle mujhe kuch na kuch karna pare ga.

After a mint an idea came in her mind. She started searching for her required thing and after a lil struggle she found all those things and then she started her work.

After 2,3 hrs hardwork her work is done and then she left from there with a satisfactory smile.

At 8 Am Manik's sleep broke with an alarm.He rubbed his eyes and then opened them.He looked here and there for Nandini but didn't found her there.Then he felt something under his hand .He removed his hand from there and check what was there.He found a letter.He started reading that letter.

Good Morninggg

Kitna sotey ho tum Manik Malhotra.Chalo ab ache Bachon ki tarhan jaldi se utho aur is se pahle k sare friends Tumhe dhondna start Karen apney room me pohanch jao.Waise bhi wahan koi tumhara intzar kar raha hai.

Chalo jaldi karo.

Muahhh.

Manik while making a cute pout: Nandini Murty ... tum baz nahi ao gi.Aisey koi subha subha gaib hota hai kya.

He then gets up and left from there towards his room.

When he entered there his eyes stopped on the bed where a card was placed on which it was written.

I am Totally crazy in love with you.

And behind this card something was written on white pillows. Manik left that card there and then moved a step forward. He looked at those pillows and read.

"If I had to choose Between breathing and loving you... I would use my last breath to tell you...I LOVE YOU.

Manik with a lopsided smile said LOVE U TOO MY DEAR NANDU.

He then moved towards washroom to freshenup so that he could meet his Nandini.When he came near Washroom something caught his attension. A new collage.

Manik with a smile moved his hands on all pics and when he read You make me super happy.

He said with love: And deserve all the happiness of this world.

After this he entered in washroom and came back after taking bath.While rubbing his hairs with towal his eyes again stopped on something.

He came in that direction and found a bundle of cards attached with a key ring .The title of which is 10 things I love about you.

Manik throw his towel on the bed and then sat on the corner of that bed and read those cards with his cute smile.

Manik's POV

Awww how cute. Nandini ne itna sub kuch kiya wo bhi merey liye... That is the reason I love her. But yeh larki hai kahan pata nahi raat ko thek se soe bhi hai ya nahi.I think mujhe osey dhondna chaheye.

At same time Nandini came in his room with a tray.

Nandini with her smiling face: Good Morning My sleepy head. And with this she placed that tray on table.

Manik hold her hand and pulled her towards himself .He then placed his hand on her waist and then asked: Kahan thi tum subha se.

Nandini make a cute pouty face like a kid and then said: NO HI,,,,,,, NO Good Morning ,,,,,,,, Subha subha hi Monster mood on hai... Aisa kyo.

Manik asked with lopsided smile: Acha g Monster Mood haan?

And Nandini like a kid nodded in yes.

Manik while gazing her face lovingly asked :Tou is Romeo ko Subha subha Monster banaya kis ne?

Nandini again asked innocently with her pouty face: Kis ne.

Manik with love pinched her nose tip and said: Iss ne... Kya zarorat thi yeh sub karne ki.

Nandini now said with her puppy face: Kal tum ne jo itna sub kiya main ne kuch bola Tumhe... jab k tum achey se jante they k main tum se naraz nahi hoon.

Manik averted his gaze from her face and said:Arey to os mein aisa kya tha.

Now Nandini said in her complaining tone: Like seriously Manik ! Mean tum merey liye kuch special karo to thek hai aur agar main kuch karon to wo thek nahi.

Manik now looked at her sad face and then said: Acha baba Ok I am sorry Tumhara jo dil kare tum merey liye kar sakti ho.Ab thek hai.

Nandini immediately smile on this and said: yes

She again asked in excitement : Acha chalo ab batao k kaisa laga yeh sub kuch.

Manik removed her hair strand from her face and said : Bht Bht Bht acha.

Nandini : Really ?

Manik said with smile: Hmmm really.

He then again pulled her more to himself and said: Chalo ab Jaldi se mujhe merey style mein morning wish karo ta k main apni beautiful morning start kar sakon and Nandini gave a sweet kiss on his lips.and said Good Morning to him.

Manik in reply kissed her on her cheek and said: Good Morning Nandini.

Now Nandini held his hand and drag him with herself towards his bed .Then she placed that Tray infront of him and said: Chalo ab jaldi se breakfast finish karo.Phir Bahir baqi sub k pass chalte haan.

Manik looked at that tray and he found a plate of toasts and heart shape eggs

Manik asked in surprise : Yeh sub tum ne banaya?

Nandini replied : Haan na ab khao b nahi to thanda ho jae ga.

Manik after hearing this make a bite and feed her 1st and then Nandini feed him with her hands.

After Breakfast they left from there towards sitting area to meet their friends.

All Friends were there in that hall after Breakfast.

Mukti was the 1st one who saw these 2 love birds so she told others: Lo a gayi hamari Romeo and Juliet ki jori.

Manan wished Morning to all and then took their seats.

Cabir started his teasing session while saying: Guys lagta hai sub kuch sort out ho gya hai... haan na?

Others except Manan with a smile got his hint and replied:Hmmm lag to raha hai.

Dhruv asked to tease Manik: Waise buddy sub kuch really me thek ho gya na.

Manik with raised eyebrows: Matlab ?

Now cabir came and sit beside Manik. He Held his hand onManik's Shoulder and said: Mtlab yeh k Majnu ne apni laila k liye aisa kya kiya k wo guse ka Lal rang Sharam (shy) k lal rang mein change ho gya...haan?

Manan looked on eachothers face and then averted their eyes else where.

Manik replied in same Naughty tone while grabing his neck: Tujhe janna hai ...?

Cabir innocently nodded in yes.

Manik tightened his grip on his neck and gave him a evil smile: Tujhe abhi bhi janan hai kya ?

Nandini shyly smile on this.

Cabir when felt the strong grip of Manik on his neck .He started his Drama in funny voice: Arey koi mujhe bachao ,Koi police ko phone karo yaar.

Manik gave a devilish smrik to Cabir and cabir after seeing this said: No

Manik with same expression said: Oh yes.

Cabir and while shaking his head in No said: Nahi nahi.

Now Manik pushed Cabir on the Sofa and with his hand Cluched his neck and started tightening his grip.

Cabir again start his Darama : Ahhh koi bacahao.

Manik: Ab bol aur kuch Janana hai tujhe.

Cabir shook his head in No.

Now Nandini said: Manik plz chooro na wo aise hi mazak kar raha tha.

Manik after hearing Nandini's voice released his Neck.

Cabir again said in taunting voice: Arey wah ab hum friends ki to koi Value hi nahi.Nandini jo boley gi sirf wohi suntan hai tu.

Manik again said in anger: Ok Nahi sunnta os ki bhi Tujhe marna hai na ... abhi batata hoon tujhe.

But before he do anything Nandini hold his hand and said: Manik leave him na Pata to hai Cabir yeh sub hamein tang karne k liye karta hai.

Now Cabir gave a smile to her and then gave a brotherly hug to her while saying: Thank you Nandini Hamein itne ache se samajhne k liye.

Manik removed cabir's hand from her shoulder and said with same evil smile: Yeh mera hai ( like this shoulder belongs to me only and only I have the right to place my hand on it).

Nandini's eyes grew wide on this possessiveness and when Manik looked in her big eyes .He winked at her.

On seeing this wink Nandini shyly started looking on the floor.

Cabir who was standing near Manan. He patted on Manik's Shoulder and said: Carry On Brother ... Hum sub kuch nahi dekh rahe.

Manik replied with attitude: Tum logon ki tension le kon raha hai... Meri GF main jo marzi karon.

Now Mukti said: Manik beta ! Controll kar yeh na ho uncle ko permanently kahen aur shift hona pare tere is PDA ki wajha se.

Manik gave a shy smile to her and said like an innocent soul: Acha ab tu bol rahe hai to control kar leta hoon.

Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago


Part 44 B


Now Aryaman said to nikki: Dekha ! Kal main ne kaha tha na k yeh jis tarhan fight karte haan os se kahen zyada ache tareqe se pyaar karte haan. Dekha ajj subha subha sub kuch Normal.

Niki with friendly smile: yah and bht cute sa couple lagta hai in ka.

Now Manik said to niki: Thanks niki but yeh batao tum yahan subha subha.

Aliya: Wo Manik hum ne kal isey yahan se jane hi nahi diya.and u know what ?

Manik with raised eyebrows: What ?

Navya: Yeh Aryaman ko pahle se jati hai.

Now Manan with surprise: What ?

Navya like a baby nodded in yes

Nandini looked at Arayaman with complaining eyes and Aryaman after understanding this came towards her and said: Nandini.

Nandini like a kid starts her complain: Tum ne mujhe pahle kyo nahi bataya ?

Aryaman : Wo Nandini...

Nandini: wo kya Aryaman bus yehi friendship hai na tumhari...?

Manik looked at duo and started smiling .

Now niki came towards the Duo and said while slapping Arayaman: Haan Nandini sahi se khabar lena is ki.Pahle wahan se ane k baad mujhe bhool gya aur ab yahan Tumhe bhi kuch nahi bataya

Arayaman looked at niki's face with wide eyes and said: Relax girls...Niki plz haan.Tum ne apna badla kal le liya na.Aur Nandini kal tum naraz ho k yahan se chali gayi thi to ab tum hi batao k main kaise batata tumhai haan...?

Nandini again complain like a child : But kal car mein bhi to hum sath they tum wahan bhi to baata sakte they na.

Aryaman: yaar os time main khud shock mein tha is pagal ko yahan dekh k(he said while slapping on niki's forehead).

Niki: Haaa Arayamn main pagal... Mujhe pagal bola,,,,,,,,,,, Tum pagal,,,,,,,,,Yahan a k apney old friends ko bhol gaye ,,,,,,,,, Tum na,,,,,,, Main tumhari shikayat karon gi anty se,,,, tum dekho ab.

Now Nandini said to stop them: Guys plz stop your fight... Aryaman pahle mujhe janana hai tum Niki ko pahle se kaise jante ho.

Then Aryaman explained her about them .

Now Manik said to niki: Aur niki tum ne mujhe kyo nahi bataya k tum Aryaman ko janti ho.

Niki Wo Manik sir.

On this Manik again cut her in mid: Phir se sir bola...

Niki While biting her tongue: Sorry wo Manik ... main kaise batati ,,,,, mujhe to yeh bhi nahi pata tha k tum sub log Aryaman ko jante ho.Yeh sub to mujhe kal pata laga.

Now Cabir said to stop this discussion: I think ab sub ko sub kuch pata lag gya hai...(he then asked) ya kisi ko aur bhi kuch janana hai...?

Mukti: Arey ab to sub kuch bilkul clear hai sirf aik cheez clear karna baqi hai.

All others:wo kya?

Mukti then winked at others and said to tease Manan: K Manik ne aisa kya kiya k Nandini itni jaldi maan gayi.

On listening this all started laughing.

Navya : Ok friends ab agar yeh batein ho gayi hoon to kuch serious baat kar leen.

Cabir: Kya yaar Madhubala ,,,,, har time serious baat hi kyo yaad ati hai Tumhe.

Nandini then said to Navya: Kya hoa Navya sub thek hai na.

Navya : Nahi Nandini Hamein aisa nahi lag raha.

Now Mukti also asked: Kyo Navya kya hoa?

Navya: Guys tum logon ko yaad hai na kal hum ne O2 k office mein kya kiya?

Cabir: Haan to ?

Navya : Tou yeh Cabir k O2 pe case file karne k baad kyat um logon ko lagta hai k hamara concert ho paye ga ?

Aliya : Y a Right guys... Ab agey kya karna hai.

Aryaman: Guys tum log agar chaho to main Dad se baat kar sakta hoon is bare mein.

Now Manik said to Aryaman: Thanks Aryaman but pahle Mujhe apney Dad se baat karni pare gi is bare mein kyok main ne abhi tak un ko kuch nahi bataya but I am sure lawyers k through un tak yeh baat pohanch chuki ho gi.

Aik baar Dad se baat ho jae then dekhte haan kya karna hai.

Arayamn : Ok dude as u say.

Manik left from there and then talked with his Father.who told him that he is coming tonight then they will discuss this matter.

Night Time

Mr Malhotra returned from his tour and now after freshening up he is sitting with Manik and his fellows.

Manik explained him all the situation. And also about what Aryaman said to him.

Mr Malhotra listened all this and then said: Mujhe kal hi kafi kuch pata chal gya tha but main chah raha tha k tum log khud mujh se baat karo.

He Then said to Navya: Navya beta app ne yeh sub pahle kyo discuss nahi kiya sub se .kahir ab jo ho chukka hai thek hai aur tum log concert ki tension nahi lo . Mujhe kal tak ka time do phir dekhte haan k kya karna hai.

Manik: No Problem Dad.

After this Manik and Gang members again got busy in their fun and Mr Malhotra while sitting there observed their Bond.He also Observed the eye talk of Our Love Birds.

After seeing this he thought: Hmmm Lagta hai ab Manik se baat karni hi pare gi.

At Night after dinner

All others left for their rooms in the Hall.

Nandini: Manik I think ab hame bhi ja k sona chaheye.

Manik whose head was on Nandini's lap said: uh huh.Itni jaldi kya hai.(While saying this he hold her hand and gave a kiss on it.

Nandini: Manik kya kar rahe ho hum Hall main haan kisi ne dekh liya to aura b to uncle bhi yahan haan.

Manik: Tou ? Main kisi se nahi darta... U know na

Nandini while ruffeling his hair: Yah Mr Mosnter Manik Malhotra I know k app kisi se nahi darte. But mujhe yeh sub aise acha nahi lagta... To plz control.

Manik: Aisey Matlab... Open mein ,,,,,,,, To Chalo room mein chalte haan( He said this while gazing in her eyes).

Nandini placed her hand on his eyes and said like a plead: Manik pls na tang nahi karo.

Manik hold her hand and removed from his eyes and then gave a kiss on it.

At same time his cell phon rings.

Both love birds starteled on this sudden voice.

Manik: uh huh yeh is waqt kon phone kar raha hai.zaror Cabir ka bacha hoga osi ki itni wrong timing hoti hai.

Nandini: Manikkk ! Acha hai main kab se Tumhe kah rahe thi k ja k sote haan.

Manik said to tease her: Haan to main ne kab kaha k nahi sote .Chalo na merey room me jate haan.

Nandini slapped him on his shoulder and said: Manik Phone uthao pahle.

Manik after watching the caller Id sit straight and attend the call.

Mr Malhotra: jnr Malhotra romance khatam ho gya ho to merey room main a sakte haan app.

Manik while thinking(yeh Dad aise kyo baat kar rahe haan) replied: G Dad Ata hoon.

After the call Nandini asked : Kya hoa Manik?

Manik: Uhhh kuch nahi wo bus Dad ne bulaya hai kuch baat karne k liye.

Nandini: Ok chalo acha hai ab main bhi ja k aram se so sakti hoon ( She said this to tease Manik).

Manik: Ohkkk Ab tum yehi chahti ho to aise hi sahi.Waise bhi I know tum kal raat ko bhi sahi se nahi soe.

Nandini while making an innocent puppy face: Yaaahhh

Manik: Ok then GOOD NIGHT NANDINI and with this he kissed on her forhead.Chalo main Tumhe Room tak chord eta hoon.

Nandini: No Manik Tum jao uncle intezar kar rahe haan. Main chali jaon gi.

Manik with sad face: Ok Good night.

Nandini with a smile: Good Night .

Nandini started moving towards her room but after 2 steps she stopped and then turned .She take 2 steps back in

Manik's Direction and then pulled him in her level .She then kissed him near his lips and said: Now Good Night Mr Manik Malhotra Sweet Dreams.

Manik with a smile: Good Night.

After this Manik came towards Mr Malhotra's Room.

After the knock he entered and said: Dad app ne phone kar k bulaya sub thek hai na.

Mr Malhotra while showing the fake anger asked: Yeh sub kya ho raha tha neechey?

Manik: Where Dad?

Mr Malhotra: main haal meinn abhi jo kuch tum kar rahe they o ski baat kar raha hoon.

Now Manik which shocked eyes looked at his Father's face.

Mr Malhotra said with a sarcastic smile: Son sub k samne beth k yeh sub karo gey to ...pata to chale ga.

Manik with a shy smile : Dad wo...

Mr Malhotra: Kya Dad wo haan...

: Manik tum Nandini k mamle mein serious ho na beta ?

Manik with surprise looked at his father's face: Dad yeh app kya...?

Mr Malhotra: Manik answer me ! Tum serious ho...?

Manik : Yes Dad.

Mr Malhotra: Pyaar to tum os se karte ho yeh main dekh chukka hoon but shadi bhi osi se karni hai ya os k liye koi aur larki dekho gey?

Manik looked at his father with blown face: Dad yeh app kya baat kar rahe ho.Pyaar Nandini se kiya hai to shadi bhi osi se karon ga na kisi aur se kaise...?

Mr Malhotra now said with a smile: Tou beta g.os se pocha bhi hai shadi k liye ya khud hi sub soch liya.Kya pata won a hi kar de?

Manik : Aise kaise na kare gi.Shadi to meri osi se hogi.

Mr Malhotra: Chalo meri yeh tension to kum hoe .Tou Manik beta baat yeh hai k main chahta hoon ka tum ab apni shadi k bare mein sochna shuru kar do.

Manik: But Dad itni jaldi kya hai?

Mr Malhotra: Arey jab pyaar aur shadi osi se karni hai to Problem kya hai...Aur waise bhi jis tarhan tum ose khulam khula tum osey pyaar karte ho(Mr Malhotra said this while ruffling his hair) ... Main nahi chahta k tumhare is pyaar ko ab kisi ki buri nazar lage.

Manik: Hmmm Dad app thek kah rahe ho.

Mr Malhotra: Tou phir kya khyal hai kab propose kar rahe ho tum ?

Manik with a shy smile: Jald hi Dad.




Ok dear fellows yeh tha ab tak ka next update.Please yaar leave your comments and press like button. Aur agar time Mile to next OS pe bhi nazar dal lena.😆

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Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...
manik was soo happy to see nandini's surprises...
cabira aaj seriously mar jata...
manan r jst amazing..
manik's father is a nice person..
manik is going to propose her..
shadi hm..
luved it...
thnx for pm...
update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow
Loved nandini ke surprises...

Cabira with his awesome witty comments and Manik ka gussa
I so miss manbir!

Manik's dad is back
And unhone bhi manik ki taang khenchi!
Hahaha!

Loved the father son scenes

Manik is blushing!

Looking forward to the THE PROPOSAL

thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
wat a lovely update...
love it 2 d core...
1st manik's surprise...
den nandini's ...awww...love their love...
nd my fav cabir's teasing...
he is d one who makes evryone 2 laugh...
nd aryaman nd niti's part...loved it...
aww...marriage proposal ...
yupieee...
gona love it...
wtng 4r dat...
cont soon...
i know dat...u hve ur xams...
bt in dat hectic period also u gave an update...
thank u sooo much...
love u alot...
nd do well ur xams...
will wait till ur xams...
do well...
nd all d best!!!!


keep smiling!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. Nandinis surprise was too cute and lovely. .
Manik and his dad's convo was fab ...
Now let's see how he proposes nandini for marriage
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow
double updates k sath ek os muft muft muft...hehehehe
awesum updates
nandinis gestures n those lines na were tooo beautifulk
n their khullam khulla pyaar... wah kya baat hai
bt most amazing part was manik n his dad convo
it was sooo gud
continue soon dear
n best of luck for ur exams
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice updates
Thanks for pm
👍🏼

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