OS: Na Umar Ki Seema Ho, Na Janmon Ka Ho Bandhan - Page 5

Originally posted by: maanvir

As I already mentioned this was the first OS i read frm u...

Wat attracted me to the OS was its title...

Na Umar Ki Seema Ho, Na Janmon Ka Ho Bandhan...

PS: Mujhe lagta tha YHM forum pe ab tak ka sabse lamba title meri story ka hai Juda Hoke Bhi Tu Mujhme Kahin Baki Hai...But tune to isme bhi mujhe maat de di😉😆🤣

taareef kar rahi ho ya uda rahi ho 🤣🤣🤣 please specify so that i can decide if i have to sulk or fly 😆😆😆

Before I begin to comment on this OS I need to address some people who MUST have read this OS

Dear...scratch that...Hateworthy CVs!

🤣🤣🤣 scratched

Agar aap logon ko ye samajh na aaye ke kisi bhi crucial track ko end kaise karna hai to kripya forum pe aake ek msg chod dein ke u need ideas...Aur dekho ke yahan ke amzaing writers apko kitne badhiya ideas denge...Har baar Tragedy ko Comedy me badalne ka stint kripya karke chod dein...

Aur haan FYI we are very generous people and when it comes to IshRa hum muft me ideas baant te hain...

Kaash ek baar aapne ye OS padha hota to pata chalta ke ek track ko close karne ka sahi tareeqa kya hai...

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣di explaining CVs is like bhains ke aage been bajana...khair bhains ki kyun beizatti karni cvs se compare karke...they are even worst

Hmmm...Now I am feeling better...

good 😊😊

Haan ji to ab OS pe aate hain...

ji aa gaye

Mai kya bataun ab?

Is tarck ko tumne itni intelligently aur maturely handle kiya hai na ke mera to dil garden garden hogaya...

aur aapka comment dekhke mera dil garden garden ho gaya...so SP SP again

Show me to aisa hone se raha...So I am grateful to u k tune ye likha...

😳😳😳 hum forumwasiyon ne bada kuch aisa likha hai jo show mein kabhi na hua hai na hoga

Ishu ka plan...Raman's worry filled fury...And the conversation that followed everything was just beautifully crafted...

thank you so much di 😊😊

I loved every bit of it and especially the ending

copy cat behna 😛

And his mission was accomplished. She laughed making him laugh and both spent a beautiful evening in each other's arms.

"Na Umar Ki Seema Ho

Na Janmon Ka Ho Bandhan"

These lines have so much depth in it...

aww thanks a lot di...so happy to know you liked it

But my fav lines are going to be these:

Earlier when life was there, his true soul mate wasn't there and now when he had finally found it in Ishita, god was separating them. But thankfully it was all clear now.

His love for her is totally evident in these lines and it was heart-touching

eeshh thank you thank you thank you...me sharmaying 😳

Beautiful write-up yet again...

And I totally love it

PS: I love the author more😳

and i love the commenter more than anything else ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: kras

Awesome one