MANAN SS~WHY CAN'T I LOVE MY BEST FRIEND chapt25-144 TYNOTE+LINK-150 - Page 111

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suv-kriyaansh thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
fantastic update
finally manan confessed... yayieee
manan were AWESOME
loved each and every bit of the update
u r an awesome writter
gr8 job
cant wait for the next update
cntinue sooonishhh

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Kavya
So finally read the last 3 parts
SUPERB FANTASTIC FANTABULOUS AMAZING AWESOME GREAT
Simply Awestruck

Chapter 22 - It was superb
The Couple Combo part... Loved it😆
And when that person says ENJOY UR DATE SIR... Hehe...
And also MukBir's idea - 2 seats in extreme corners, and 2 in middle

Chapter 23 - Nandu suffering from Fever
And then her Babu comes and takes care of her. Nice. And then he understood Aryamann too...

Chapter 24- Manik prep for the D-Day
And then, Jaan saying Good Morning and Babu saying Good Afternoon... Role reversals

Who wants to be your shadow...nah not me..
Who wants to be beside you..no not me..
Who wants a part of your heart...never it's not me..
Who wants to be the center of your universe..not me..
Who wants to adore your smile...definitely not me..
Who wants you..yeah not me..
BECAUSE
I want to be your soul always with you..
I want to be within you not jst beside you...
I don't want just a part of your heart...I wanna own it whole like it belongs to me..
I don't need to be centre of your universe cause uh are my universe..
I jst don't want to adore your smile I want to reflect in the shine of your eyes when you smile..
And I don't want you not at all..I need you

Great. Seriuosly

And then MukBir saying "BABIES" Loved this part too
And Manik read her diary. Yaayyy...


And finally Chapter 25- The Friendship Day/Confession Day

Hats off dear

He had gifts and notes hid all over her room
And the confession part MIND BLOWING
Loved each and every bit of the update

YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER KAVYA

And congrats with the new thread. Looking forward to it

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Posted: 10 years ago
cngrtzzz dr...
4 ur new plot...
xcitd n eagrly waitn 4 d nxt prt...
plz updte soon...
Edited by bidisha10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry sorry sorry Kavya
I know u must be mad very mad at me but I have already given u the reason so please forgive me for this time.

Ok now come to the update...
It was the most awaited update and you did it awesomely. The each and every word was so deep and romantic. The way u start about their D-Day and about their feelings was amazing. U described their impatient state and fear so beautifully.

Manik's surprises were so good. The way he instructed her about her dress about her open hair...these all were so magical.

And then my favorite part...jaan babu talk. You know pretty well how much I crave for it. And the best part was when Manik told her to take medicine and said for your babu...I loved it.

Then their bike ride and their magical moment. I loved these lines of Manik ..."Jaan you are not only my jaan..my life..but my Best Friend too..so let's travel our journey.."...it was so romantic.

Then Nandini started to take steps. Each step u described so beautifully that it made me awestruck. It was their whole journey but with a different meaning. Now they were cherishing their BEST FRIEND moments as LOVERS.

And finally their confession. If Manik's confession was amazing then Nandini's confession was super cute. And their kiss ..I was feeling so emotional at that time...hats off baby..I love u for that.

Bracelet scene was very cute. But Nandini Mukti phone conversation was awesome. I enjoyed it very much. It was so natural. Manik said it right..."YES YOU CAN LOVE YOUR BEST FRIEND.."...it was amazing.

Thanks for pm. Eagerly waiting for a new journey. I will be there also with u as I love ur story. I m coming there...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi...came across your story today..and read all the chapters in one go..it is such a lovely story..so adorable..so cute..and your writing..what should I say..Oh MY GOD I'm out of words..loved your story very much..thanks for sharing such a beautiful story with us..:) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesum stry..great feeling wen ur n luv..expressed beautifully...thnk u so mch fr sch luvly stry... keep writing...

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