SaHil Snippet : Thirst

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The restlessness plagued him. He couldn't avoid the gnawing feeling. At work he was momentarily distracted, but it was there in the background. He had lived with guilt his whole life, but he couldn't stand it that Sanam wasn't her usual self with him.

He wanted to demand that she forgive him immediately. He thought he had gained forgiveness after saying he loved her at the Kohinoor signing event, and she said she loved him too. But when they got home, she had stayed away from him. Refused to be alone with him, preferring to sleep in Ammi's room to take care of her.

Now he had a thirst. To see her smile, to hear her talk, to feel her touch, to hold her, and Damn it if I need to kiss her! This impatience he had never felt before in his life. She said she loved him, and he didn't want to share her with anyone.

Damn it...


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Hey people !!

I wrote this sometime back and forgot about it... I know I promised to update my SaHil stories.. and i will..

Really..!

But just wanna gauge the readers response.. first..

Do comment please.. It helps motivate the writers..😉

Anisa

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LoveSonu2408 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello,anisa...nice strt.
its on aher track time...poor ahil.
par acha bache aise tease nehi karte...
so jst updt soon & pm me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ah gosh! *old feels* missseeedd you Sage!
Is this a new story based on kohinoor track?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice! Plz keep updating
And u r a gifted writer. ...so keep writing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: flora212

Ah gosh! *old feels* missseeedd you Sage!

Is this a new story based on kohinoor track?


Hi nafs...!

Not an SS, just a snippet from bits and pieces.. from season 2.. i have too many long SS going on, not gonna start a new one yet.!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

hello,anisa...nice strt.

its on aher track time...poor ahil.
par acha bache aise tease nehi karte...
so jst updt soon & pm me.


Thanks Sonu.. This is a short drabble o sorts..
Will update if I have other snippets..😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zoyazrehan

Very nice! Plz keep updating

And u r a gifted writer. ...so keep writing!


Thank you so much !!

You're really sweet..❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😊this was beautiful Anisa, beautiful and cruel like that tiny drop of water on thirsty lips. It leaves you craving for more...
Hope you update your stories. I really love them.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Snippet.

You didn't lie!



In just a few words you managed to bring a truck load of feelings! Overpouring with everything love!


Thank you for this!


:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Now he had a thirst. To see her smile, to hear her talk, to feel her touch, to hold her, and Damn it if I need to kiss her! This impatience he had never felt before in his life. She said she loved him, and he didn't want to share her with anyone.


👏


Beautiful, Ani. All that passion...and this is still Seher?😲😆

Waiting for the rest.





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