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Posted: 9 years ago
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its my first time I m writing story here ..
hope u all like it ..

character sketch :

Manik malhotra : A rich brat kind hearted but show aggressive side to world love his family n friends ..
music is his passion love ...

Nandani murty : A rich innocent girl love her family , live in Australia with family...

Cabir : Manik best friend who knw him in and out ..

Dhruv : Best friend of Manik , deeply in love with Aliya ...

Mukthi : Best friend kam sister of Manik , kind hearted but hide her emotions from all ...

Aliya : Best friend of manik , n deeply in love with dhruv ...

this fab5 5 friend r kam friend but a family ..

Navya sehgal : nandani friend ..

index ...
character sketch ...
part 1 - scrool down
part 2 - page 2
part 3 - page 2
part 4 page 2
part 5 page 4
part 6 page 5
part 7 page 6

part 8A B page 7
part 9 page 9
last part page 10 ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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MALHOTRA INTRO :-

Neonika malhotra : A working women manik's mom love her family . trustee of space n some NGO ..
kind women love manik friends as her own childrens.

Raj malhotra : A business tycoon , manik's father love his son ..

manik is only hier of malhotra's empire ...

MURTY'S INTRO :-

Raima murty : live in Australia nandani's mom ..
mom kam friend of nandani ..
love her family so much ...

Sooraj murty : Nandani's father love her daughter so much ...
she grown-up as a princess ..
she is daddy princess ..

Ayan murty : nandani's elder brother love her sis ..


this is a small TS I will complete it in two or three parts ...

its first time can't write a ff ..

do like n comment...
keep smiling

samkhan
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

Manik n fab4 was returning from dehradun after concert.

On Mumbai airport manik saw a girl but can't meet her..
Manik pov:-
Who was that girl she is something ...
I feel like I saw her I meet her but whr she is so beautiful ...

(Manik see a girl daily in dream but always fail to see it clear )...

Manik was lost in his own world ,
Cabir: manik ade sun ,
Mukthi : manik kaha khoe wa hai yaar kab se bula rahe hai hum..

Manik : ha kahi nai kya kuch bolre the tum log ...
Fab4 in unison : kuch nai
Cabir : teri day dreaming hogaya ho tho chale ..

In the car from airport to malhotra mansion.

Manik was so lost in his thought in all the way ..

Mumbai airport :

Nandani first day in India she was waiting for her car driver ..
(Before coming to india Ayan bhai make every possible think ready for her )..

Nandani pov:

I have one some more days for clg wht to do..

I was in my car in the way to murty villa .
Saw a kid want ice cream
Nandani to Ice Cream wender : Bhaiya do ice cream dijiye
Kid : di yeh mere liye hai ..
This duo talk was being watch by one person n he was again lost in her beauty ..

Nandani : yah yeh aap ke liye hai ..
Aap ka naam kya hai ,
Kid : mera naam veer hai .
I lost my mom .
Nandani : aap daro math beta hum dekhte hai aapke mom ko ...
She was seeing here n there and making cute faces ...
Thy come girl in search of a kid she call veer ..
Come near veer n hug him ..
Girl : thnk u so much for taking care of veer .
Nandani : ur welcome but plzz take care of a kid ...
And leave from thr ...

Signal get open..
N manik lost the view of nandani ..

Manik reach mansion after seeing his mom n dad he forget his all sadness ..
He go n hug his mom .
Manik : I miss u mom .
Neo : miss u to beta ..
Raj dramatically say : ha bhai hum me kon yaad karega ..
Only two get a tight hug from his son ..
Manik : love u dad miss u soo much ...

After spending sometime fab4 left thr respective home n went to his room ..
It was
@ ni8
Think abt a day he drove fast asleep only to see his dream girl..

Fortunately or unfortunately he dream abt the girl he saw@ airport n in his away ..( bolna na zaroori nahi hai its our one n only nandani )

Next morning :
Nandani woke up late bcoz of traveling ...

_______
Manik woke up got fresh n went to u washroom to get fresh..
_____
Ayan: whts the plan princess ..
Nandani : nothing bhai lets go out for lunch n do some shopping ...
Ayan : ok good plan princess lets go
______
Manik n fab4 was going out for lunch after lunch aliya n Mukthi plan for shopping ..
Manbirruv in unison : not again guyzz no shopping ...
But who can win over girls so accepting thr defeat ..

After lunch all left for xyz mall for shopping ..
_______
Manik n nandani came to same mall ...

To b contine...

Sry yaar I knw its small I will try to write long one next time .
Bear it ..

If u like it plzzz do comments ..
Suggestions n advice all r welcome ..

Stay blessed
Keep smiling

Samkhan
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Awsm cs
nice intro
But
I want update
can't wait
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

In the mall .
Fab5 whr busy in shopping .
Mukthi : aliya this look good try this .
Aliya : yah mukthi its good ..
Mukthi aliya has selected some crop top jeans n 1 piece frocks ...

Boys whr waiting for the end of shopping
______
Nandani has done some shopping of top crop tops n jeans n shorts ...
________
Trial room mukthi call manik n gave dress to him and went ...

Nandani came out of trial room n abt to slip fortunately she got hold of a hand n both fall on floor ...
Manik was lost in nandani the he Dnt realised n thy share cute eye lock ...

Thr eye lock was broke by cabir fake cough ..
Cabir : bhai uth tu kahi b apni day dreaming shuru hojati hai ..

Nandani listen this immediately got up in feel embars in say sry n left from thr ...

Unfortunately cabir dnt saw a girl face ...

Nandani pov :
Wht was that nandu u whr so lost in him ..
Ayan: princess wht happened u r so lost ..
R u ok..
Nandani : yah bro I m f9 ..
Ayan : r u done with shopping ..
Nandani : hmmm
Ayan : r u done .
Nandani : yah bhai done.
Lets go ..
Ayan : ya lets go ...
_______
Fab5 whr done with shopping thy whr abt to leave manik get a call so he went left side opposite side of exit ..

Nandani : bhai u take this all I will see u in parking ...
Ayan : ok princess but b careful ..
_______
Manik was getting he ran to lift side n get it on time ..

Lift get stuck in middle Manan got stuck together ...
Nandani got scared n immediately hug manik ...
Manik was lost in her..
Manik : hey relax its ok .
Nandani : mujhe dar lagra hai n u want me to relax ..

Manik was controlling himself not to lose ..

Manik : look@ me its all ri8 in sometime lift will start ...
Nandani get loss in his deep bown eye..
After getting relax ..
Nandani : thnks
Manik : ur welcome ..
Thy come out of lift n went to parking side to avoid awkwardNess..

Manan reach thr respective home ..
After a tiring day ...
______
Malhotra mansion :
Neonika : manik beta I need to talk to you ..
Manik : yes mom he came n lay down in neonika lap ..
Listening to her we have a sweet mom n son time ...
________
Nandani pov :
After taking a quick bath for relaxing after shopping .
Came down for dinner.
After having dinner with bhai I left to my room for sleep ..

Thinking abt manik she drove to sleep ...

Two three days pass

Fourth day :-Sunday it was as usual normal for me n bhai ...
Next was clg first excited n nervous both@ a time ...

Nandani : bhai lets go out for dinner today ..
Ayan : as my princess say ...

Fab5 whr having good time n cabir being cabir doing leg pulling of manik was so lost in thinking abt nandani n his dream girl ..

Cabir : arre yaar humare sath hai baad b tu kaha khoya rehta hai...
Dhruv : aur hum jabse airport aur usdin shopping se aye jabi b yeh aisi hi tha ..
Manik : guyzz its nothing like that ..
Mukthi : chodo yaar yeh kuch batha hi nahi hai ..
Cabir : ha thr is nothing mukthi just leave it yeh aur iski dream girl...
Manik : kaise kahu yaar I saw her I saw my dream girl ..
______
Precap :--
Nandani first day in clg ...

to b continue ...


if u good do like n comment..

keep smiling
stay bless ...

samkhan
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
AWSM PART
WONDERFUK UPDATE
LOVED IT SO MUCH'
WANNA SEE WHAT LL HAPPEN ON NANDU'S 1ST DAY
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part -3

Recap- first meet of manan in mall...

Nandani woke up with the continous ring alarm ...
It was early she get fresh n get ready for jogging ...
________
Manik malhotra was still sleeping and so lost with his dream girl...

After n hour 7:30 cabir came to wake up manik for clg ...
Cabir : abe salle uth kab se utha raha hu clg jana hai ...
Manik : teri tho kamine uthne ki kya zaroorat thi be aaj mai tujhe nai chodoga ( mai uska face dekhne hi wala tha (in mind) )...

Cabir : yeh math bol yaar abi b tu woh dream dekhra tha...
Common yaar leave it and get up ...
Manik : tujhe tho mai dekhluga .
Cabir ha dekhlena mai yahi yu tere dreams me nai ane wala ..
Manik : cabir give him deadly grace ..
Cabir : yeh looks badme de ut ab .
I m waiting in hall for u ...
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Nandani was getting ready after returning from jog ...
Came down stair for breakfast ..
Nandani : good morning bhai .
Ayan : good morning princess ...
Common breakfast is ready we will have it together thn u can for clg ..
Nandani : yah bhai ok ...
Bhai kaka ko boliye car ready rakhe I m getting late ...
Ayan : Ok princess ...
Nandani n Ayan have thr breakfast n left for clg ...
__________
Manik n cabir in hall ...
Cabir : tera kuch nai hosakta jaldi chal. Late hora hai ...
Manik : abe araha hu itni b kya jaldi hai tujhe ..
Chal ab ...
________
Nandani in clg
Nandani to some girl : hii can show me the way to princi office ...
Girl : yah y not its on first floor left side of corridor thy u will princi office ..
Nandani : thnk you ..
Girl : ur welcome ..
Nandani leave from thr ..
Nandani search for office ..
She get irritate ..
Nandani pov
That girl played with me .
Relax relax I controlling myself for not to get hyper ...
________
Manbir reach clg ..
Manik get call of dad ..
Manik : I will b thr dad
Cabir I m going to office see you in two hours ...
Manik leave for office .
Fab3 : yaar cabir tu yaha kya kar raha hai whr is manik ..
Cabir : woh manik office gaya hai he will b in two hours ..
Mukthi : ok
Dhruv : guyzz lets go to class we r getting late ..
Cabir : kya yaar dhruv abi tho aye hai aur class no yaar ..
Aliya : lets go to canteen .. we will do our favorite pass time.

Cabir : kisse banayenge aaj ka bakra dhundo ..

Aliya n Mukthi in unison : woh rahi milgyie ..

Cabir went towards girl ..
Hiii r u a fresher ...
Girl : yah fresher ..
Cabir : welcome to space ...
Nandani : thnks .

Wht she knw that something bad is coming towards her ...

Nandani was sitting in canteen ..
Aliya : hey u fresher get sandwich n a coke.
Nandani : hey u mind ur self I m not ur servent to do ur work do it by urself ...
Aliya : got so angry and throw a juice on her ..
Mukthi : hw dare u talk to us like that ..
Aliya : dnt u knw who we r ..
U dnt do good by messing with us ..
Nandani was abt to leave for washroom she got collide with manik who was coming to canteen ..
After seeing her like that he was got angry .
But before manik should say anything she run from thr ..

Cabir : hey guyzz look manik is back ..
Yaar u miss a fun ..

Manik : shut up cabir .
Who was that girl ..
U guyzz bullie her..

Before manik say thing .
Aliya stop him in between .

Aliya : she mess with me how anyone dare to mess with me ..

Manik : wht ever aliya.

Mukthi : yaar tu itna hyper kyu horaha hai..

Dhruv : ok guyzzz leave this lets go for class ..
___________
Nandani see manik n fab4 entering in class n everyone was seeing thm .
thy occupied thr sits ..

Nandani got confuse by seeing students reaction ..

Navya see her expression n say dnt b thy r fab5 thy rule over here ..
That monster n his friend ..

Nandani after that canteen incident she make manik conception as monster ...

Misunderstood manik.

Manik was constantly seeing nandani .
Nandani can feel his grace on her n awkward ...
________
Manik make navya sit on another sit n sit with nandani ...
Manik : hiii
Nandani :hiii in not at all interestemood ..

Manik : sry , on my friend behalf ..

Nandani : just leave as if I care ..
Tum b unlog ke jaise ho ...

Manik : yaar mai tumse ache se bath kar rahu tum itni rude behave karahi ho ...

Nandani gave deadly glares to manik n abt to get up n leave from thr ..

Manik hold her wrist n stop her
Nandani : hey u
Manik : manik manik malhotra ..
Nandani : wht ever leave my hand ..

Cabir : manik chal yaar bore hora ha hai .

Manik in mind : joh phele kiya woh kaam tha ...
Nandani : ha kisi ko bullie karo time pass hojayega ..
Her voice was odable to manbir ...

Manik listening this leave her she went from thr ...

CAbir : yaar yeh hai kon tu isse sry bolraha tha ...

Manik : mujhe kya pata yeh kon hai woh us din I meet her in mall..

Cabir : toh yeh woh ladki jisi mai nai dekh sakha ...

_____
Precap :

Manik clear misunderstanding with nandani ...

To b continue ..

Yaar plzzz do like n comment ...

Stay bless.
keep smiling :)

samkhan ...
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Part 4

Manbir talking abt Nandani ..
Cabir : yaar I we have done to much , par tu tho nai tha na tho phir, why she is soo rude to you n y angry on you .

Manik : I dnt knw yaar, we r friend so I think she misunderstood me ..
I want to talk to her ..
I will b back .

Cabir : ok waise ja kaha raha hai ..

Manik : apne dream girl ke pass.

Navni become good friends .
Navya : so whts the plan for today .

Nandani : Nothing yaar I m so tired I just want to take some rest.

Navya :wht manik was talking you ..

Nandani : he was just saying sry from his friends side.

Manik came to Nandani ..
Manik : Nandani I want to talk to you ..

Navya in mind : yeh yaha kaise agaya if he come to knw why she is so rude on him he will not leave me .

Manik : hi madhubala ji

Nandani : kya hai manik

Navya : hii manik.
I will b back Nandani I have some work ..

After thatnavya left .

Manik : u misunderstood me .
I knw my friends r wrong I sry for thr miss behavior ..

Nandani : manik tum mere piche kyu padeho I dnt wanna talk .

Manik : Nandani r u angry on me maine kya kiya ..
Nandani tumhe kisi ne kuch kaha ..

Nandani : mai tumhe kyu batao .

Manik : that means some one said u something , so bolo kisne kya bola .

Nandani : ok when I came out of canteen n went to washroom navya n become friends in class when u all entry she said me that u r monster n thr r group ..
I got so angry ..

Manik : yeh madhubala ki tho is bar tho mai isse choduga nai ..

Nandani : wht???

Manik : kuch nai
Yeh bath thi Nandani she was joking n we r arogent but never miss behave to this max ..
Sry yaar
Aliya was something just come out on u..

Nandani : its ok ..

Cabir came thr
Cabir : so manik did u talk to nandani..

Nandani n manik in unison : yah we talk

Cabir : sry Nandani we have done to much ..
Nandani : its ok cabir .

Manik : ise Sry boliya ab apni madhubala ko bacha aaj mai usse nai chodne wala ..

Cabir : yaar navya ne kya kiya .

Manik : kya kiya yeh sab uski wajha se hi hua.
She said me monster .

Listen this Nandani was trying to control her laugh ..
Manik was so angry on navya .

Nandani n manbir leave from thr come to canteen ..

Mukthi : lo agaye dekho yeh dono ..

Manbir came n fab3 apologies to Nandani.

Nandani : its ok .

Navya came to canteen manik was deadly grace to her ..

Cabir : are yaar chodna woh mazak kar rahi thi ..

Manik : tu toh bolega hi teri girlfriend joh hai . Lekin isbar nai chodne wala .

Navya : are manik sry mujhe kya pata tha ki yahi she was but to say something but cabir stop her ...

Cabir whisper her in ear : bacha raha hoo marne ka irada hai kya ...

Nandani was so confused by thr talk ..

Manik : Nandani yeh navya iski girlfriend hai aur mujhe irritate karte rahti hai..

Here bond of cavya n manik is so strong thy r so close for manik mukthi n navya is his sis he love thm soo much ..

Nandani : oohk so navya u whr joking abt thm ..
Wht u said is not true ..

Navya : yah sry for that nandu ..

Nandani : its ok..

Precap :
Food fight ..

Guyzzz no response plzzz say me that I should cont or not ..

plzzz like n comments..

Keep smiling

Stay blessed ..

Samkhan
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome... Can't wait for next one 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start

Navya is Cabira's girlfriend.

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