changing realtionship ss arhi

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Naina raizada-a widow who has only one son called arnav

Arnav singh raizadal-a doctor age about 30, lives in Mumbai wiv his mother naina. He was married but her wife is dead(its not khushi).

Khushi gupta-she lives in delhi and works in a big company. She only has a brother and they are settled in delhi. She is 27 old.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing start can't wait for the updates please continue soon thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1


We saw a girl dressed in dark blue patiala salwar kameez, borders were embroided in red. She was lightly made up and had chocolate brown, curled hair. She was wearin big earins to go wiv her clothes and she had a small suitcase which she was carrin. As she gets out ov the train in mi station we saw the station crowded wiv all types ov people. Some of them were there to see off people, some were excited to go on a holiday but she looked much tensed. It looked as if she was waitin for someone but when she found no one there and her hopes gets low she started to walk out ov station. On the other hand we saw a boy standing in hospital's corridor with his friend. He was wearing a collar black t-shirt followed by Armani jeans he had a coat on top and has gelled his hair.

Aman (his friend)-yaar arnavl tu shaadi kyun nahi kar leta...tu kab tak bhabhi ke yaadon ke saharye jiye ga.
Arnav-aman tum jab dekhu yeh baat leke beth jatye ho...abhi to no shaadi.

After his work finished arnav gets in his car and drives towards his home. Let see what is that girl upto. She walked out ov the station finkin 'how could he do that...woh aesa nahi kar sakta uspe maine bharosa kiya or woh...', while thinkin all this she didn't realise how far she walked. She came to very lonely place where she found some badmash guys there...the first one said,
'kia kamal ki cheez hai' (as she looked pretty)
The second one-excuse me madam app ko lift chaye?
The Girl-no thank i'll manage. She sarted to walk fast but the boys followed her. She was very scared. The badmash boys stand front ov her and they started to touch her. They were forcing as the girl shout for help. A car went by stopped on the corner. The man walked towards that girl to help (its none other than arna)...those boys left her and walked away. Arnav came to the gal and asked her if she's alright.
Arnav-aap theek hain', she kept on cryin, 'dekhein app chup ho jaye...chalye main appko ghar chord deta hoon. App ka naam kia hai.
'khushi'she replied.
'Ok khushi aap kahan rehti hain...i'll drop u home' arnav said. Khushi was clueless as how to answer him.
Khushi-main delhi main rehti hoon or kisi kam se yahan ayi hoon per jisye mujhe milna tha woh to aya hi nah
Arnavl-oho ho sakta hai woh late ho gaye ho so would like to wait for him?
Khushi woh late nahi ho sakta. Hamye subha milna tha or ab sham ho gayi hai so...
Arnavl-i see. Ok khushi app mere saath chalye hum unko dhundh ley gain and don't worry main akele nahi apni mama ke saath rehta hoon so u could stay wiv us for some time. Khushi was confussed as what should she do? Will be good to trust a stranger but there was no other way left so she sat in the car and arnav drove towards his house.

Abhi k liye itna hi guys do tell me u lik it or bt
do tell me to continue or nt

Edited by arhi00 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow amazing start loved it can't wait for next part thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice..
Oh no..
Don't say here also she loves someone...
But here she is betrayed I think...
Kyon kushi ko heart breaks...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 2
As arnav and khushi entered they saw nainaa sittin there n havin coffee.
Naina-arye arnav tu agaya (stupied question na well...) or yeh kun...
Arnav mama yeh khushi ji hain, turns to khushi 'or khushi yeh meri mama.'
Khush-namaste aunty.
Naina-namaste beta
After and all that arnavl explained his mom that she came here for some work but the person supposed to pick khushi as she doesn't live in Mumbai, couldn't come and she is tryin to call him from ages but he is not pickin up so she might stay here untill 2moro. Naina agrees to that.
Naina-khushi tum chaye ya coffee kuch lo gi. Khushi was really sad so she could only say
Kh-aunty kuch bhi nahi. Arnavl left to change his clothes as arnavl left naina felt strange because of khush's behaviour. She was very uncomfortable so naina asked
Naina -khushi ek baat poochu mind maat karna...tum kafi udaas lag rahi ho. Koi prob hai tum comfortable nahi ho?
Kh-nahi aunty...aisi koi baat nahi hai...she stops for some tym and finks a while...kia karoon bata doon (to herself) woh aunty main...kia...woh
Naina -mujhe apni maa samajh ke bolo
Kh gets emotional to hear maa because she is Orphan and lives in a orphanage with his brother so she replies...
Kh-aunty main yahan kaam se nahi balke delhi chor ke ayi hoon. Sab kuch yahan tak ke apna bhai bhi waise main usko le ati baad main jab sab settle ho jata per ab kya hoga main jispe yakeen karke ayi woh to aya hi nahi...main wahan delhi main ek ladke se chaat karti thi or humye pyar ho gaya. Humara pyar gehra hotye gaya...main yahan settle honye ayi thi or phir apnye bhai ko bhi le ati per ab main kia karoon kia wapis chali jaon...
There was complete silence but than naina speaks up...
Naina-ho sakta hai ke ussye koi kaam agaya ho or woh nahi asaka...ya koi emergency bhi to...ho sakta hai woh kal tak contact karle...
Khushi's face brightens up and she turns her face around and finds arnavl there. There was complete silence but speaks naina
Naina main chaye lati hoon. She left
Arnav was just starin at khushi and than smiles...
Ar-I think mama is right. Woh zaroor contact karye ga. Acha tum fresh ho jao wahan upper right main ek karma hai tum wahan reh sakti ho...go and get fresh. He walks away. Arnavl goes to his room and pick his wife picture
Arnav with wet eyes-aaj khushi ka pyar dekh kar mujhe bohot akela pan mehsus ho raha hai...tumhe gaye hue 5 saal ho gaye per tum aaj bhi yahin basi ho...tum kyun chali gayi...i love u very much...and keeps his head down khushi heard all because she went to thanks arnavl for what he done as without him she would have been in big trouble but gets really sad for arnavl. Kh went in to console him.
Kh-arnavl, he turns around, kuch mat kehna maine sab sun liya ...main yehi kahun gi dukhi mat ho tumhe bhi koi zaroor milye ga or tum ro ge to ussye bohot bura lagye ga. She takes him near window, "woh dekhu tara woh wahan se tumhe dekh rahi hai or dukhi ho jaye gi tumhe aese dekh ke so smile" he smiles, "thats like a good boy (he's not a boy) friends" she asked gives him her hand arnav thinks for a while and eccept her friendship.!!
Edited by arhi00 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting..
But who is that guy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow beautiful update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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khushi in complicated problem...

arshi friendship..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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