a love manan ff: tu mera jahan hai part 2 (page 1)

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starssaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey😊😊we are new to this forum...we means me and my best friend..u can call us as SaYa.😊😊

There was a story in my mind from many days so i just wanna pen it down..so ya here i am..

As all, we both are crazy about MANAN..😳😳😳

And m biig fan of parth..and ya niti tooo...

And kyy..

And coming on story so its like MANAN are married but love is yet to be come..😆😆 and it will be fun tooo

I like scenes in which their is pain,hate,which shows your love... So here also love,pain,peace,desires,longing,everything...

Means everything is available in this story😊😊

So guys we need your support..

And i will give introduction soon

And i need your help tooo for Name of my story..😃😃

Please help...

Character sketch : page 1

Part 1 : page 1

Part 2 : page 1

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Character sketch

Raj malhotra: best husband and father... Loves his family so much and pampere his daughter in law the most...

Nyonika malhotra : loves her family so much... Best mother she is..love every children...in her life...

Manik malhotra : hot handsome hunk of 25...he is youngest successful man...loves his family and friends so much... Pampers her sister the most...

Mukti malhotra: engaged to abhimanu..hot and sweet..loves her family and friends so much...and pampers her bhabhi cum sissy a lot..she is of 23

Nandini malhotra : Beauty with brain is what people call her loves her family and work so much she is doctor...

She is an orphan..her parents died in accident...but does not feel like one as

Cabir and Abhimanu loves her like sister

Alya navya loves her like sistes

Dhruv and mukti like bff

Nyonika and raj like parents

She have so much love but still ITS HEARTS...

She crave for love of her soul her jahan her husband bur never got...but still she is waiting from last 6 months...

...

All are same...but

Alya and dhruv are married

Navya and cabir are married

Mukti and Abhimanu are engaged as abhi is busy in his career of doctor

All boys are of 25

Alya navya are of 24

Nandini is the youngest among all and get most pampering...

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starssaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 1

Malhotra mansion

Lot of hustle bustle was going around...it was like some one was coming...

All servants were running to complete their work given by nyonika...

Nyonika was busy in her work when some one from behind comes and close her eyes..

Nyo : muku please leave me bacha mujhe bht kaam hai

Mukti: kya yaar mon aapko kaise pata chal jata hai [pouts]

Nyo laugh on her antics and move towards kitchen while mukti follows her

Nyo : am your mamma..tu bas i knw

Acha chal tu jaa aut ready hoja aaj puja hai aur mera bacha aata hi hoga

Muku : bhai ke liye itni tayari kyun (while thking apple and sitting on slab)

Nyo: kyun naa karu mera manu 1 month ke baad aa ra hai

Itne dino baad

Muku: ohh...is liye ye bhai ka sab favorite khana haann

Nyo: haan...chal ab tayar hoja bhai aata hi hoga cabir aur dhruv use lene gaye hai...

Muku: ok mai jaati hoon

( she starts going but suddenly stops and

Muku: mom...baby doll

Nyo: ( her expression change and) vo tujhe pta hai na vo nhi aayegi...

Muku: mom mai bhi ni aaungi...

( angrily goes from their)

Nyo: sighs and) kaas mai kuch kar paati...bt meri ni suni nandini ne...

Suddenly voice came

V: ye sab manik ki vaje se hai...

Nyo: i knw...usne galat kiya but...

V: bt kya...vo kyun hr baar samjhe is baar vi ni hai yaha puja mein tu sirf tumhare bete ki vaje se

Nyo: ( turns ) vo aapka beta bhi hai...

Mr M: haann lekin vo meri beti hai..mera garv hai..mera ghamand hai vo...mai use dard mein nahi dekh sakta vaise bhi vo yaha rehkar bhi kua karti...milta tu dard hi naaa

( he speak sternly and goes from their...and nyo sighs...and

Nyo: mai kya karu..mujhe pata hai ki glti manik ki hai but beta hai mera kab tak naaraj rahu us se mai...

And she walks from kitchen...

Airport

Cabir: kahan hai yaar ye..aur kitna wait...

Dhruv: saale khaane ke liye tu kitna bhi wait karvaalo wahin ruka rahega aur buddy ke liye tujhe 10 min bhi 2 ghante lag re hai...

Cabir: oyyee vora

Dhruv: kaun????

C: are tera buddy...

Dhruv turns and here he is not looking less than God Greek

In black denims white tee and red jacket...

Cabir: welcome back bro...

And hugs him

Manik: thank you...hey buddy

Dhruv:( hugs) welcome back bro..how r u ????

M : m fine chalein

Cabir: naa naa yahi karenge maa ka jagraata

M: ha ha very funny...ab chalein

And the make their way out to malhotra mansion..

Every one was happy but still their was pain in everyone heart...but no one was showing it...

And that only because of one person who took promise for them to welcome him whole heartily..

Phew ho gyaa, guys it was my first try please ...support..

Comment...and give advice...

I need your help

First how to keep it only members post...do not copy..

Please tell mee

And i need banner for my story if possible

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starssaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey..no response..

Chalo koi ni lgta hai koi problem hai...m new na tu muje shi se ni aara use krna

Guys pls help mee

Aur i need favour

Agar story ke beech mein picture dalna hai tu

How we have ti???

And m posting next part please read it..

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Part 2...

In no time manik dhruv and cabir reach malhotra mansion

Manik: mom m home..

[Nyo come and hugs him and he too...than mukti comes and hugs him than his dad,than alya,navya,abhi...]

Than they all settle down and talks about work and his meetings which was ofcourse successful...

Nyo: acha bht baatein ho gyi u go and freshen up...puja abhi thodi der mein hai aur fir party hai raat ko...abhi ke dad ka call aaya tha...

Listening to this manik make confuse face

M: mom puja????

Nyo: yes maine aaj puja ramhi shuk shanti ke liye...

M: ohhh

Cabir: lekin aunty shukh shanti kaise aa skti hai...

All make confuse face...while cabir frowns

C: ni pata...acha mai btata hoo...

He stands up and hide behind nyo after speaking

C: mukti ke hote hue

Muku: cabiiirr...tu.gaya

And she runs behind him and all burst in laughter..

After a while they stop their tom and jerry fight and muku throw herself on alya...

Muku: m tired...

C: kuch bhi kaho...nandu is onlu peace...

Listening to this manik suddenly remember that nandu is not here so he asks hesitatingly...

Manik: vo..nan nan...dini kahan hai...

Muku: wow bhai...great memory haaann

Manik make confusing face while all become serious ON listening about their little love...

Manik: mtlb

Muku: are itni jaldi yaad aaya ki nandu is missing...mujhe laga use aap bhul gaye...

Maniks understand sarcasm in mukti voice.. And kept mum

Muku: dad chalo...

Mr M: hmm...yaa ...

Manik: where r u going...i mean puja hai...na

Cabir: puja sache man se ki jaati hai...humara man tu yahan hai hi nahin...tu kya fayeda...

Nyo: tum sab jaoge tu puja mein kaun bathega ek tu nandu ni hai..pls don't do it...stay here...

Nyo was pleading and no obe can deny her request so they all stay...they were about go in their rooms as every on have their own room in malhotra mansion...when suddenly they stop listening to..

Manik : mom nandini kahan hai???

Now that was it for nyonika..

Nyo: why manik??? Kyu uske baare mein pooch re ho...u knw what just mind ur own business...

Manik in shock: mom...ye k..kya keh re ho...

Nyo: do as i said...just go and change...

And all from their...

Manik also go in his room and sits in front of mirror..in his room...he take out his jacket...and lay down on bed closing his eyes...and as soon as he close his eyes first face was of her... In this 1 month when ever he used to close his eyes he always saw her face her smile...and most importantly her that crying face...he still remembered the day when she was crying because of him...he quickly open his eyes and realizes that he was crying...

Ho gya 2nd part...

Guys pls help karna...

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