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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Khushi96

Such a cute,naughty romantic start to the honeymoon

Update soon plz loving it.


thanks dear 😃

coming soon 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Renu111

sorry for late di.. i was busy in my house .. lovely update d wating for next .. and congo di for 100th chapters



Thanks dear 😃


updating soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Uor cming soon is soo late 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shona1teens

Uor cming soon is soo late 😕



so sorry dear ... had to go out of town urgently 😳


now i am back n will try to update more often 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 2


Pratigya stretched sensually over the bed , moaning slightly ... her every fiber ached , sweetly though... She opened her eyes , blinking against the sunlight ... it looked as if it was going to be noon soon... she smiled , rubbing her eyes n sighed , feeling blissful ... She could feel his arm over her waist n her smile widened ... then she blinked ... she caressed the sheet over her n turned her face to watch him sleep , cuddled to her ... They were on a bed ! n a cot! ... She didn't quite remember how exactly they got there! ...



a gentle breeze caressed her n she inhaled in shocked surprise ... it seemed that the sheet barely covered their bodies ... she gently removed his hand from over her waist n sat up pulling the sheet over her in trepidation, blushing red ... She looked around for her clothes n could find none ... She tried to think , about what exactly happened ...maybe too much wine!... They were all wet n kissing in the middle of waves n his naughty n impatient fingers had ripped at the zip of her salwaar n... oh! ... she mock glared at his sleeping form , as she saw what remained of her salwaar next to the shore ... her glare turned to a sweet smile as her eyes took in his calm face , his hair sticking out weirdly ... she swooped down to kiss him over the side of his forehead , her fingers caressing his hair ... he smiled in sleep , murmuring her name n then turned to the other side , still sleeping soundly ...she could feel her heart jump in joy as it heard him murmur her name... her eyes raked his broad shoulder n majestic back n her blush deepened ... her finger n nail marks were all over his back she could feel an increasing urge to just pull the sheet off him ...n ...n take a good look at his back ... N thighs ... n...his front , below his waist ...stop! ... she blushed , biting her lower lip n shaking her head ... she had been way to shy all these time to actually take a good look at him ...well, not now! U have all the time in the world pratigya! ... when? Surely she would die of shyness if she were to try it when he is awake! ... This is the best opportunity! ... she continued to smile , her fingers itching to pull the sheet off him...



another gentle breeze blew n she sighed , looking around ... the sea seemed breathtaking ... the waves , the sound ... the noise! ... now that she was completely awake , she realized that the sound of waves was actually too loud ... yet pleasant ... she didn't know why n how but she could feel n increasingly stupid feeling to just get out of the bed n chide those waves to keep their sound low ...he is sleeping! ... she made to get down from the cot, trying to keep the sheet over her , n found her thighs n legs aching sweetly ... she could feel her body still singing in pleasure ... her heart beat spiked up as some of the night's events rushed to her mind... they have made love all night ... n then again in dawn ... n .. 'uh!' she let out a sensual moan as she remembered how he had made love to her from behind! ...for the first time! ... She twirled her hair in coyness , biting her lower lip ...she caressed her neck , feeling his love bite over there ...she stood up n walked dreamily along the shore , holding on to the sheet n she saw his shirt which lay a few feet away n she sighed ... his shirt seemed all right , unlike her salwaar ... she caressed the shirt , n then without out much ado dropped the sheet around her n pulled the shirt on her , hugging herself , a stupid smile on her lips as she gazed at the waves , her heart busy reliving the events of the night



Krishna stretched over the bed , his arm groping for her near him... he blinked n looked around , slowly raising his head ... his eyes met with the most beautiful sight he has ever seen till then... she was walking along the shore , a sheet loosely covering her beauty , her hair flying sensually behind her ... he smiled , lay sideways n propped his head on his arm as he watched her , happiness filling his heart ... his eyes turned intense as he saw what she did ... Which was bending down to take his shirt , inhaling it , letting the sheet around her fall down thus revealing her beautiful back to him ... he smiled slyly as she put on his shirt n then hugged herself ... of what he could see from her frame , she radiated bliss ... He didn't know how long he watched her but before he knew it he was right behind her , a sheet wrapped clumsily around his waist ... he let her hair fall all over his face , inhaling her , before hugging her from behind ...


pratigya jumped slightly , startled out of her reverie of the night n then blushed deep red ... 'thinking about me?' Krishna murmured hoarsely in her right ear , his one hand cupping her left breast n fondling it even over his shirt n his other hand wrapping along her waist ... Pratigya , whose body n heart was singing in joy just threw her head back over his shoulder , her arms covering his palm over her breast n other along her waist , stopping him from going further, murmuring a shy 'hmmm' ... They just stood there , enjoying the breeze as krishna fought with his urge to just make love to her again , n again ... n again...till the end of the world , to be precise ... he can't get enough of her , ever ... ! ... he sighed against her ear as her stomach rumbled ... 'breakfast time, I guess' he chuckled n pratigya turned in his arms to face him , smiling shyly ... Krishna caressed her right cheek with the back of his palm , tucking a loose strand of hair behind her ear , smiling back ... 'u look so ravishing in my shirt' he said , picking her up n cradling her in his arms as he walked ... 'I know' she giggled , her arms hugging him along the back of his neck n batting her lashes at him ...' do that again till u eat something n I promise u won't be leaving the bed the whole day ' Krishna said , a note of naughty warning in his voice as he paused in his walk n made to turn towards the bed ... 'no ... I won't' pratigya gasped , looking away from him n stifling her shy smile ... Krishna chuckled n continued to walk up, away from the shore ...


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Renuka n sumitra were arranging the pooja thaal , both happy n praying for their kids ... One servant came n called renuka ..'renuka ji , someone has come to see u ...' ... renuka smiled at sumitra n went to see who it was ... all color drained from her face , fear gripping her as she saw manjula sitting on a couch in the hall...manjula smiled evilly at her ... the memories of the hell she went through all these years bombarded renuka's weak mind , her eyes dilating in fear ... She gathered herself as she heard sumitra's voice behind her ...' isn't she your sister-in-law renuka ji? The one who was politely asking u to mop the floor during holi?... glad chandu have that video ! or else I would have completely misunderstood u , mrs manjula'... sumitra said, her tone sharp ... manjula blanched , her evil smile flattening ... 'I came here to talk to my brother's wife ... If u please excuse us!' she said , not looking at sumitra ... 'ofcourse ...' sumitra smiled mockingly at her n turned to smile at renuka , squeezing her palms assuredly ... Renuka nodded in gratitude , taking a deep breath as sumitra walked away ...



'why don't u show me ur room here?' manjula said n renuka reluctantly lead her to her room near to a corridor ... 'enjoying ur life here , aren't u? in your daughter's house? manjula mocked , closing the door... 'why r u here ? what do u want?' renuka asked , her tone brave ... 'oh , I want nothing ... just came to see how u r enjoying ur life in ur daughter's house! ...or how u r living in a false dream land , to be precise !' smiled manjula ... 'what do u mean?' renuka asked , confused ... 'I am sure ur precious daughter haven't told u about it , but did u know that u were being drugged for a week , before ur dear son-in-law brought u here to live with ur daughter?' manjula smiled evilly ... renuka looked at her , shocked , fear gripping her every cell... what? She was being drugged ? but ... but why? ... she tried hard to remember ... Ofcourse ...shailendra wanted some file ... Was that the reason? She can't remember correctly ... manjula looked at her closely ... their plan will work... Renuka's mind was so weak they could easily manipulate her ...


'I know , ur daughter had kept u in dark about all these things ... bec she don't want u to suffer ... Bec she don't want u to know the truth ... Bec she wanted u to believe that she is happy!' manjula continued , sighing dramatically ... 'what ...what r u ..talking about?' renuka stuttered , her heart weighing down ... 'I hope u do remember that ur dear son-in-law was the one who kidnapped ur daughter , months ago?' ... Manjula asked , walking closer to renuka ... Renuka nodded , her mind in a turmoil ... 'n I hope u remember that he wanted ur daughter so bad that she was forced into this marriage?' manjula continued , n renuka nodded , her eyes filling up in hurt n fear ,mashing her pallu ... yes! ...it was all true ... but the boy seemed alright! ...he seemed to regret the kidnapping, didn't he?... Her daughter was happy! Is happy! ... They love each other! Renuka thought , her eyes frantic ...


'tell me renuka, what do u know about ur dear son-in-law?' manjula asked ... renuka blinked ... what does she know about krishna? ... just that he is the heir of one of the most powerful men in the world , hugely rich n... ... n ofcourse , who doesn't really shy away from kidnapping n threatening to put his point across! ...but he loves my daughter! ... n pratigya loves him more than anything, anyone else in the world! ... ...'well, why do u think shailendra continued to threaten n torture u even after ur precious daughter married the ...devil ...as he is known to some?' manjula asked ... renuka looked at manjula , her eyes dilating in fear ... Devil? Who? ... 'I will tell u why! Ur daughter refused to serve ur dear son-in-law n so he threw her out of his room on the first night itself ... later when he had to come n pick her up during the pag phere rasam , to satisfy the media ofcourse, he saw u there ... n the devil knew what to do so that the girl would do anything for him'... manjula said , leering evilly ...



'no! ... no! u r lying!' ... renuka shook her head furiously , stepping backwards n stumbling ... 'ha! I knew u won't believe me... honestly renuka , I don't care ... but truth is truth... ur son-in-law ordered to torture n threaten u , whenever ur precious daughter was being difficult ... the stupid girl tried to escape from here once n it was then he ordered to drug u...n ur daughter was his slave again ... but when she came to know about u bring drugged she pleaded with him like a worm n it was then he decided to bring u here so that he could keep u in his sight n also threaten ur daughter more easily ... his accident was a hoax , a perfect excuse to bring u to the hospital n then to this haveli ... ur dear son-in-law n his friend n his whole family is involved in this , especially his mother n masahib , who just want his carnal appetite to be taken care of ... Which ur precious daughter is doing , only bec she knows that u will be dead the moment she behaves against their plan... ur daughter has been fooling u all the way ... making u believe that she is so happy! ... That the devil is so in love with her n she with him! ...playing along with him so that he won't kill u off in front of her own eyes!...' ...



'No ... I don't want to hear ... U ... u r poison!... u r lying!' renuka wept helplessly , her weak body shaking ... ... 'hmmm' manjula sighed dramatically ... 'I knew it ... u won't believe me ... ...' ... renuka looked back at her , her tone strong n disbelieving ...'why would I believe u? u n ur brother r poison...go away!' ... Manjula sighed again ..' u might be wondering why I am telling u the truth ... well, bec the truth always hurts! ...n u know how much I hate u! ... I wanted to give u atmost pain! Which is to let u know the truth about ur precious daughter n her loving husband n in-laws... ! ... now when u see ur daughter smile u will know that she is bleeding inside! ... that's all I wanted' ... she said , her face twisted in mock sympathy ... then she laughed coldly n walked out of the room ... renuka slumped to her bed , her head n heart too heavy to manage...



Hope u liked it 😳

Edited by dhakarn - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry for late di..quite busy in home... update is really interesting😊 and what is manjula planning now and i hope renukawill nt turned out and go against kriya??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful update

Loved the romantic Kriya😳

This Manjula 😡 how can Renuaka believe her. I hope she confides in P and she tells her mom the way it is, but I think Renuaka will fall for Manjula's lies.

I hope Manjula gets her due soon.

Looking forward to the next update😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Renu111

sorry for late di..quite busy in home... update is really interesting😊 and what is manjula planning now and i hope renukawill nt turned out and go against kriya??



thanks dear 😃

wait n see , more trouble for kriya on the way😳

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