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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow ramans love at 1st sight...
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Thank you all for this Wonderful Response

So I am giving this early update
Early plus longer updateπŸ˜‰
Hope you like it
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Bear with grammatical and spelling mistakes
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PART 4



Bhalla Industries
Raman Cabin

Raman was smiling, lost in his thoughts. Mihir entered his cabin.

Mihir - Bhai Please sign these papers.
He forwarded him a file.

Raman was just looking at laptop screen.

Mihir- Bhai He repeated

He spoke louder - Bhai

Raman - Haan Mihir. Tu kab aaya

Mihir - Bhai Whats wrong with you. I m here from past 5 mins. Where are you lost.

Raman - Kuch nahi. Tu yahan

Mihir - Woh Bhai . Sign these papers

Raman - Haan

Mihir sat on chair and was intensly looking at him.

Mihir - Bhai you look different today. Kya hua hai

Raman - Kuch nahi . Tu ja aur kaam kar

Mihir - I m doing my work. But tell me I can see kuch toh hua hai. Bolo na Bhai.

Raman - Maar khayega.

Mihir - Bhai dont you trust me.. He made a sad face.

Raman - Chup Dramebaaz. Ja kaam kar.

Mihir - Fine I m going. But I know kuch toh hai.

He left making faces.

Raman - Ab kya batau ki mujhe kya hua hai. He smiled to himself.



Later he returned home tired, doing nothing in office.

Raman - Maa Ek cup chai bana do.
He left towards his room and but his steps halted hearing Ishita's name.

Toshi - Simmi. Did you call Ishita

Simmi - Haan Mumma. She was in Alpha one, shopping. Usne kaha woh apna bracelet baad mein le legi.

Raman heard this - Alpha one and he smirked.

Few mins later he came out of his room dressed in casuals.

Toshi - Oyye Where are you going again.

Raman - Mum. Mihir called me. He was feeling alone. We two are going out. And I heard some bracelet thing and Dr Ishita name. What happened

Toshi replied casually - Arre Beta Ishita forgot her bracelet here yesterday night. We called her but she is out.

Raman - Oh! Maa give it to me I will return her.

Toshiji looked at him suspiciously
Raman - Maa She has done so much for Simmi. I can do this much. Fine keep it . I was just trying to help.

Toshiji - Nah puttar . Yeh le . Return it to her.

She handed him a elegant diamond studded blacelet. He took it and left.

In the car

Raman took out bracelet from his pocket and kissed it. - Alpha one.

Alpha one Mall

Being 7 in evening it was crowded with people.

Raman - How will I find her here. Yar pura delhi yahi aaya hai. He spoke in frustration.

He took a deep breathe and started looking around in hope of finding her soon.

Raman - Matarani please help.
And next moment he saw standing in Archies.

Raman smiled - Mil gayi

He adjusted his T shirt and entered Archies.

He intentionally went near her and asked the shopkeeper to show him wallets.

Ishita heard his voice and looked in the direction of that voice.

Ishita - Hi Raman You here

Raman pretending - Oh Dr Ishita. Hi . Ap yahan

Ishita smiled - Shopping and you

Raman - Same

Worker - Mam! Your parcel is ready.

Raman - Gifting someone?

Ishita - No its for me

Raman - Then why this gift wrap

Ishita excitingly - Actually I stay alone here. Who will gift me. So I keep myself happy by Gifting myself.

Raman chuckled at her cute antics.

Ishita - So I should leave. You carry on

Raman - Ah Dr Ishita I was thinking can we go out for coffee.
He asked her after gaining some courage.

Ishita - Coffee Now ! How about tomorrow morning. If its okay

Raman - No problem. Tomorrow morning  10 . CCD near your house

Ishita - Great! Bye Raman. See you.

She left collecting her parcel from the counter. His gaze was fixed on her.

Worker - Excuse me Sir wallets . Have a look

Raman - What wallet. I have mine. He left leaving that worker confuse.


Bhalla house

Toshi - Aa gaya. Raman Ruk ! Mihir ka call aaya tha. Usne bola ki tumhara koi plan nahi tha. So where were you.

Raman - Woh maa. Mihir is not well these days. First he makes plan and then cancels it. Something is wrong with him. You leave him. I ll see him tomorrow in office.

He left to his room without turning back.

Toshi - Beta I m your mother. I can see something is wrong. But not with Mihir but you

Next day

He left home early telling Simmi about some urgent meeting in office.

CCD 10 : 30 AM

Raman waiting for her from past half an hour. Still there was no sign of her.

Raman (thinking)- Where are you.


Ishita entered CCD parking her car.

Raman - Hi

Ishita - Hi. Sorry I m late. Parking problem.

Raman - Dr Ishita if you dont mind me asking why are you late always.

Ishita - I dont know . I get stuck with some or other things. You know main der karti nahi ho jati hai. She spoke casually.

Raman shook his head and smiled at her reply.

Ishita - So we order something

Raman - Sure
They ordered coffee with some snacks.

Ishita taking sip from her coffee - Raman why this coffee treat suddenly

Raman - Dr Ishita . We are friends. So I thought of giving treat to my new friend

Ishita - Call me Ishita . Dr Ishita sounds too formal. She spoke in his tone and mimicked him.

Raman - Ok Ishita
So whats your plan for today.

Ishita - Nothing special. Same routine. Clinic from 11-6 then home.

Raman - 11  - 6 But its already 10:45

Ishita - Took bite from her sandwhich. 10:45 .. So what.
Her expression changed from casual to shocked...Oh my God 10:45 baj gaye. Sir will fire me today for sure. I m gone. Sorry Raman I have to leave.I am late actually very late.

She spoke in single breathe.

Raman - Ishita Suno toh.

Ishita - Sorry I have to go. Next time. My treat for sure. She left taking her bag.

Raman - Pagal ladki. He smiled . Still I love her.



2 days past . Raman has not met her. He was getting restless with each passing day. He wanted to see her. Talk to her. Enjoy her cute antics.

He was working on his laptop sipping his morning coffee, Actually doing nothing when Toshiji entered his room.

Toshi - Raman Tune Ishita ka bracelet de diya. Main pehle puchna bhool gayi.

Raman eyes twinkled with happiness - Maa I forgot . Let me go and return it now.

Toshi - Abhi

Raman - Haan Maa its already 2 days . It doesn' t look good. He took his car keys and came out of his room.

He stopped at doorway turned and hugged Toshiji tightly - I love you Maa . And left

Toshiji  was suprised  - Khotha. Pagal ho gaya hai.

Raman at Dr Batra clinic

Reception

Raman - I want to meet Dr Ishita. Is she busy with some patient?

Neeti - Sir She is on off today. Her son is not well.

Raman - SON

To be continued...

Precap - Ishita' s Past

NEXT PART

Edited by ruhi_ishra - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Just luv da update
Raman in luv vd her
Finding ways to meet her
Ishi ka son omg.
Update tomorrow plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
when i saw ur PM i was like 

Mihir Raman convo was so relatable...just like the show 

and the best line 

Later he returned home tired, doing nothing in office.🀣🀣🀣🀣

so right...love just makes you useless πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£


and yeh dekho Raman ko ji...jhuth bolna shuru...yeh na totally madly and full on love mein hai yaar

pyaar ke steps hi yahi hain

pehla usko ghurte rehna
dusra useless ho jaana 
and teesra uske liye jhuth bolna shuru kar dena

good going ji

yaar this Raman is so cute...wahan jiske liye gaya usi se bahane bana raha hai πŸ˜†

btw i loved Ishita's idea of self gifting...will try sometime if needed


excited for coffee date πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

and one liners toh πŸ‘ you are too good Sapna

lo Toshi Ji ne toh jhuth pakad liya...par pakde bhi kyun na Maa toh Maa hoti hai 

and the CCD date was just so cute...kya bolun...brilliantly done

yaar yeh Raman toh pyaar mein deewana hi ho gaya

i am also liking this Toshi ji a lot...she rocks

and the ending was mysterious...Ishita ka beta πŸ˜²


loved the update totally..actually enjoyed it a lot 

please please update soon and solve the mystery

thanks for the PM Sapna

this story is just so cute just like ur previous one 
Edited by DivanIsh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loving and loving more dis story..
Son..! Is she is married or divorc or son of brother/sis..
Waiting 2 read abt her past..
Thnk u 4 pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ishita's Son ???
Waiting For the next update
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Raman you are getting mad in love. Ishita's Son??? You stopped at wrong time. Will wait for update
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Awww raman loves ishita hayee but now new twist ishita have a son ohh waiting for next part pls update soon
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nice dear
raman is mad for ishita
son???
waiting for next one
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Asusual lovely update sap.

Ishita son?
yeh bacha wala tag story?
i know ishu past not revealed so easily.
puttar ka power cut hogaya yeh baat sunkar..bechara..

continue soon.
thanks for pm.