Ishra FF - Mast Magan#1 INDEX PG 1 - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago
Later he returned home tired, doing nothing in office.--- hahaha what a contradiction

This Raman ... I wanna give him a name chaalu lol. Kitni jaldi plans everything

Uyiii maa... Twist zor se laga. Son ... Son ... SON ... OK... UPDATE SOON :P
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhi_ishra

Hey Friends

Read each and every comment of yours

Due to lack of time. I cant Thank u all individually

Thanks a lot friends

Keep reading

Will try to update tomorrow

😊



The last line of this whole thing is 😃
Going to get an update tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
THank u for the PM... & nice but ending z so confusing... Ishitha's son... 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi ya, great going.. Loved the story. But now i am sad. I want ishra youth love story.. It was so nice in your story.. But? Why? Pls ya.. I dont want ishu to be married already.. I want only ishra and ishra baby.. Pls take my request..
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Posted: 10 years ago
plz I want only ishra baby..no other..
don't tell me that ishu is already married or divorced..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for late reply
Read both 3rd and 4th part.
Nice.
Love at first sight.
Love ishra accidental meeting.
Love raman.
Nice twist
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi I am back with Part 5

Hope you like it

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PART 5



Raman - Son

Neeti - Sorry Sir! I have to go. Dr Batra is calling me

She left leaving shocked Raman behind.

Raman left from there. His phone rang. He took out his phone, bracelet fell from his pocket.
He bends to pick it up. He answered without looking at screen. He was just looking at that bracelet.

Mihir - Bhai You have meeting with Mehta's tomorrow. Just wanted to remind you.

Raman - Hmm
He ended the call and kept his phone back.

Raman - Son! She is married.
He wiped his tears drove towards her home.

PHOENIX APP

He was standing outside her flat. He rang bell twice.

Ishita- Coming. She opened door. Raman Hi You here. Please come inside.

Raman - I went to your clinic. They told you are on off today. Your son is not well

Ishita- Oh Yes He is not well. I don't know. He has not eaten anything from yesterday. I am trying but he is not eating. Raman Why you went to my clinic.

Raman - I wanted to return this. He showed her bracelet.

Ishita - Oh! That's so sweet of you. She took bracelet from his hand.

Raman - I should leave now.

Ishita - Hey! No. Have coffee at least. And meet my son

Raman - Son

Ishita - Please I insist. Please have a seat

He sat on sofa. She went inside to make coffee.

Ishita - Raman Cheeni kitne chamach

Raman - 1 Spoon

Few mins later she walked with a tray in her hands. Someone was coming along with her.

Ishita- Muttu! No masti Raman have this. She forwarded him a cup.
Kalse tabiyat kharab thi. Now when you came he wants to do masti.
Raman meet my son. MuttuSwami. Muttu say Hi to Raman


Raman - Son. He is your son.

Authors note - Guys I was just doing some masti with you all. Sorry Dont kill me. Muttu is also part of her past😉

Ishita - Yes. Muttu say Hi.
He went near Raman. After roaming around him for sometime he went inside.

Ishita - Cute hai na. I was so worried for him. But I think he is well now.

Raman was still in shock -Just spoke- Yah Very cute

Ishita - Let me show you his childhood pictures. She picked her phone from side table and started searching for something.


Ishita - See he was only 6 days old when I brought him here.

Raman looked at that picture blankly.

Ishita - Let me bring some snacks. Wait

Raman stood up and went near window and looked up at sky and smiled for the first time

Raman as if speaking to God - You are best. You know that. Thank you. Thank You...I don't know how is it possible but I am madly in love with this crazy women.

Soon she came with some cookies and wafers.

Ishita- Raman why are you standing there. Coffee thandi ho jayegi. Have it

Raman - Yah

They chatted for some time. Raman even played with Muttu. Later he left.



PARKING

Raman - I should meet that Receptionist. Ishita's Son. Bewakoof Aurat

He went straight to her clinic. Neeti was sitting on Reception attending some call.

Raman went to her - Hello Madam. What were you saying? Ishita's Son

Neeti - Wait a min. (She ended that call) Yes Sir. Her son is not well.

Raman - That's a dog. Not her son

Neeti - Sir please don't call him dog. I once told her that. She almost killed me. From that day maine mazaak mein bhi usse dog nahi kaha.
She spoke in a tensed tone.

Raman thinking - Yeh pura clinic pagaloon ka hai. Doctor Receptionist Patient sab pagal hai. God save me.

Neeti continued - Sir We even went to Muttu's birthday last month. How's he now.

Raman was now amused - What. Ahh . He is fine now. Birthday party Actually she can do that. I forgot she is Dr Ishita. She can do that. Sorry I overreacted.

Next day Raman called her from office after his daily meetings.

Raman - Hello Doctor. How are you

Ishita - Good. How are you

Raman - I m good. How's your son. He asked smiling

Ishita - He is good. He ate today. In fact we just came from walk.

Raman was enjoying her talk.

Raman - Ishita. You own me a treat. Remember

Ishita - Yah Off course So where you want to go.

Raman - I don't know. You decide.

Immediately He hit his head as if knowing what was coming next.

Raman ( thinking ) - Now you are gone. Matarani save me.

Ishita - Great. Then let me take you to my favorite place. Tomorrow is Sunday Catch you tomorrow near noida crossway. From there we will go together. Come on time. I hate late comers. Sharp 8 AM

Raman - 8 Isn't it too early

Ishita - You just now told me to decide. And actually you are right. I should decide it

Raman - Yah. Maine hi toh kaha abhi

Ishita - See you tomorrow Bye

Raman - Bye

NEXT DAY

As expected Raman was waiting for her. She came on Activa.

Ishita - Raman we are late. Quickly park your car.

Raman - Then how will we go

Ishita pointing towards her Activa.

Raman - No way Ishita. You park this.

Ishita - Raman it's my treat. It will be of my way. Now please park your car.

With no option left, he parked his car. Raman sat behind her.

Raman - Ishita are you sure. We can still go in my car. See I own a company. What if someone spot me here sitting behind you on this Activa.

Ishita - Raman so what. Main bhi Doctor hoon. Waise I have a solution to your problem. Wear this. She handed him a helmet. Now no one will see your face.

Raman took that helmet and wore it.

Ishita - Ready Shall we go.

They chatted while driving to their destination.
Soon she drove to outskirts of Delhi. Raman didn't realize this. He was busy chatting with her.

After driving for an hour She stopped.

Raman - Ishita where are we.

Ishita - Patience Raman

It was small hill with few stalls around. There were very less people who were busy in their own world.

Raman - Wow its beautiful

Ishita smiled.

Ishita - Chalo.. Let's have some tea. It's cold here.

Raman - Hmm Chalo

They had tea and fresh pakoras. They chatted for some time. It began with general talk, their childhood experiences, and their likings.

Raman - It's so peaceful here.

Ishita - I know

Raman - Tumhe is jagah ke bare mein kaise pata.

Ishita -Woh !! After a pause Its a secret.
So do you like this treat.

Raman - I love it. Ishita tum apne sab friends ko yahan lati hoon.
He asked possessively.

Ishita - No You are the first one. Actually let me tell you the truth. I wanted to come here and have this tea from long time. But I stay alone. Yesterday when you asked me for treat. I don't know I thought why not here.

Raman - Ishita You didn't tell me how you discovered this place.

She looked that him - I told you it's a secret. She looked away. I want to have one more cup of tea. Let me bring it.

With that she excused herself. Raman saw something in her eyes. She was trying to hide something. He held her hand

Raman - Ishita Itni dosti toh hai tum mujhe yeh bata sako

Ishita (without turning) - Itni dosti nahi hai Raman ki sab kuch bata saku.

Raman - Then I will wait for that day.

He left her hand - Let me bring tea for us. At least I can do this much.

She smiled and he left her standing alone.

Ishita was just looking at him. Something in her changed in past few days. She touched her hand where he held her with her other wrist.

Ishita - Why I brought him here. What's happening to me God No Please!!!

Her trance was broken by his voice. He came with tea. They enjoyed it and drove back.
This time he was driving and she was sitting behind him.

Later that night.

Raman was sitting alone in his room remembering full day events. Mihir entered his room and saw him smiling looking at fan.

Mihir - Who is that girl

Raman subconsciously - Ishita
Next moment he realized what he spoke - Kaun ladki

Mihir - Ishita Nice name

Raman - Who Ishita! Whom are you talking about.

Mihir - Raman Stop it. I know you are in love. I can see that. So please stop hiding. It's of no use anymore.

Raman knowing he was caught this time - Fine Yes I m in love

Mihir came and hugged him - I am so happy for you. Why were you hiding this from me

Raman hugged him back - You are my brother cum best friend. I wanted to tell you. But you know na...

Mihir - Acha bas bas.. Tell me about her.

Raman - She is Simmi's doctor. Dr Ishita.

Mihir - Oh! She is psychiatrist. Wow

Raman - Don't say that . Usse khud ek psychiatrist ki zarrorat hai. He smiled

You know what Mihir. She is like a small child. I don't know how will she react next moment. Kabhi bhi kuch bhi karti hai. Hamesha late. And most recently she has a son.

Mihir - What

Raman - Exactly I reacted the same. But it's her dog. Muttu Swami. She showed me his childhood pics. Sachi Pagal hai woh.

Mihir smiled

Raman continued - We went out today. And we went on Activa. Can you believe it. Raman Bhalla on Activa.
Lekin Mihir Aj main khud se mila. Becoming the elder son I lost myself in this journey. Businessman RKB bante bante Main Raman ko kahi peche chod aaya. But from her I learned to keep that child alive in you. She is doctor still usne kabhi apne ap ko nahi khoya.

Sabke liye shayad ek attraction hoga but I feel connected to her. Yeh koi physical attraction nahi hai. I think I have some long lost relation with her from our past birth. I just love being with her. I love her. I can't explain you but I feel protected towards her. But

Mihir - But

Raman - Par kuch hai, which is stopping her. She is hiding something. But I will wait for that day when she will feel me worth enough to share her thoughts with.

Raman hugging Mihir again - I won't let her go away from me.

To be continued

Precap - Ishita ignoring Raman 😲

NEXT PART



Okay that's it for today. Friends I have posted a long update today. Please give your 2 mins in replying and giving your views. I have tried to give justification for Raman's Love in this update. Hope you like it.

Waiting for your replies. Next update will be late. Probably this weekend. I am busy for next 3 days. Sorry but bear with it. Love you All.

Edited by ruhi_ishra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
RES
UNRES

sorry for the delay yaar

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update ke baare mein kya kahun

i so want to say i hate you but i will not...i actually love you

yesterday when i read about the son i kept on thinking yeh son kahan se aaya...is she a widow of Subbu or Subu ditched her leaving pregnant

par son nikla koun...Muthu 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

like seriously muthu 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

sahi mein hi readers ki bhawnao se khel liya tumne toh

but acha prank tha...mujhe TMLS ki Divyanka wali series yaad aa gayi

best part of the update and hilarious at the same time 👏

Raman and receptionist scene again 😆 poor Raman

the phone convo of Ishra was so cute

actually the whole update was cute

and then Ishra meeting was again so cute and unique
i am in love with this carefree Ishita seriously

below two lines were just too beautiful...cannot resist myself from copying❤️❤️❤️❤️

Raman - Ishita Itni dosti toh hai tum mujhe yeh bata sako

Ishita (without turning) - Itni dosti nahi hai Raman ki sab kuch bata saku.



Mihir Raman convo again was brilliant 👏


Mihir toh bada intelligent nikla yaar sab samajh gaya


good hai ji...i have a feeling that he will play an important role in the lovestory

this was a beautiful update Sapna...loved it totally


waiting to know Ishita's past because I can feel that she too has feelings for Raman


3 days without updates makes me sad 😭😭😭


please come back soon and update sooner

Edited by DivanIsh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Supperbbb yar can't explain... u write very well keep it up.. n waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice suprised her son muttu is a dog awww i love dogs n ramam loves her hayee n but ishi has a past waiting for it

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