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~TAMASHA~

Hey guys...

Starting a new ss..

From the name u all might have guessed from where the story is inspired, actually from few days i am listening to tamasha songs quite often, while listening and seeing the teasers of the movie.. this story popped in my mind...

Don't know what the actual story of movie is , but here is my version on maaneet.. hope u all enjoy this..😳


INDEX

Prologue-below

Part 1-page 8

Part 2-page 15

Part 3-page 20

Part 4-page 25

Part 5-page 31

Part 6-page 36

Part 7- page 40

Part 8- page 46

Part 9-page 52

Part 10-page 57

Part 11-page 62

Part 12-page 67

Part 13-page 73

Part 14- page 79

Part 15- page 84

Last Part+Epilogue- page 89

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Prologue

Graduation ceremony...

Its our privilege that a brillant student like her has studied here and excelled in every field..not only academically she is a topper but she is as brilliant in sports and extra activities , so we are so happy to give this student of the year award to Geet Handa..

With her name whole hall echoed with huge round appalause for her...

Geet stood from her seat went to her parents and took their blessings, her mon's eyes were filled with happy tears while her father had a proud feeling for her...

With confident steps she moved towards stage and collected her award, teacher asked her to say few words about her achievement, geet obliged him and moved towards mike..

Hello everyone, don't worry i'am not goona bore u all with my long speech .. but just want to thank my mom, dad , my teachers and god for this , thank u everyone!

Everyone was accepting more words from her but she ended it , there only and left the stage and went and sat beside her parents. Geet's dad chided her for this.. geet that's it , u should have spoke few more words

Dad please, i'm not a public speaker.

Geet! ,

but her mom interrupted her dad, rahene doo na, ab aap doona yaha shurru mat ho jaana.. our daughter has made us proud today! She caressed geet's face..

Love u mom! Geet hugged her..

But phir bhi when she will handle business, she have to be more vocal right!

Dad tab ki tab dekhe ge..till then take chill pill.., geet cooly replied..

Ye ladki kab responsible hogi babaji!!!!

Kabhi nahi!!!!!!, geet answered while laughing..

Geet's dad shook his head on his childish daughter...

Another part of the same city..

A man extremely handsome , was sitting silently on his bed His mom entered inside the room..

Maa aap..

Haa.. she went close to him and caressed hid head lovingly..

Maan beta why u always lost dear.. u know na ur dad will never allow all that, still..

Maa i have already accepted that..

I know but then why this dullness..why don't u enjoy life like other boys of ur age.. u have such a bright future ahead .. a big constructing business to handle , all the luxuries of life.. still u behave like some dull person..

Peace maa.. peace.. i don't get that peace while doing all that office work and.. but he was interrupted with the authorative voice of his dad...

Then make it a habit maan, this is ur future and u can't escape it..

But dad...

Enough maan we have discussed many times about this , i will never allow u to do some tamasha and make fun of khurana's name!

Now get ready , we are going to handa's , their daughter have topped university..see they are so lucky to have a daughter like her not like me .. indirectly he taunted maan and left his room..

The silence occupied the room for few seconds.. which was broken by his maa..

Maan now get ready beta , now don't upset him more...

Maa i'm not interested in attending that party , i'm going to adi's house..

But maan.. but he didn't listened and went away..

IN party

Everyone was coming and congratulating geet one by one... all the rich people of the city were invited by Handa's. Handa's were themselves are owners of big companies.

Geet was getting bored now... she excused herself and went to her one n only friend pari, who busy with other aunties of high society..

She grabbed her hand and excused them for aunties..

Geet- kya pari, don't u get bored with these aunties??

Pari- i was just passing time..but why are u getting hyper??

Geet- i'm getting bore yaar..

Pari- oh that's why ms. Handa remembered me??

Geet- now don't u get started.. waise bhi my life is getting boring day by day...ab toh college bhi over !soon dad will start taking me to office..ahh ..

Pari- but u wanted that only right??

Geet- yes! But not now... i'm too bored yaar..kuch exciting chahiye life mein..some fun..some thrill..some advantage..some..

Pari- yaa yaa got it!

Geet- leave it u will not understand, by the way what's ur plan???

Pari- i'm going to Greece..

Geet- greece??

Pari- actually my aunt lives there and she is calling me from many years to visit her before i didn't go..but now decided to go and meet her..

Geet- oh..

Pari- geet..why don't u come with me??

Geet- and get bored with u and ur aunt??

Pari- nahi re.. we will have fun there.. i have heard greece is awesome place for spending holidays..chal na mazza aayega..

Geet- hmm... okay i'm done!

Pari- but how will u convince ur mom and dad??

Geet- u don't worry about that, i'm their darling princess and she winked at her...

KM

Maan's dad and mom were back from party , dadima was there in living area ..

Dadima- u both are back, how was the party??

Maan's dad-yes maa.. party was great! The proud the handas have for their daughter was clearly visible..

Maan's mom- kyu na ho..their daughter is so talented...

Maan's father- hmm.. i wished the same from my son but alas..

Dadima- beta bas..ab phirse mat shrur hoye..anyways i forget to inform , maan left for greece an hour back with adi..

Maan's father- WHAT!! How could he..here i was planning to introduce him in my business world and he!

Dadima- beta..its just for few weeks, let him enjoy for a while uske baad usse kaam hi karna hai..

Maan's father- still maa..

Maan's mom- maaji is right, let him enjoy.. aur waishe he never go against ur wish..aake bhi wahi karega jo aap kahoge..

Maan's father- u both ladies have spoiled him!

okay here the prologue, which looked like a part😆

waiting for ur reviews, next part will be depended on ur response...

Note- Updates will be once in a week..

Edited by GurTi123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congo for new story ..
Eagerly waiting for first part ..
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Do add that heer toh badi sad song in this story ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preeti_Maaneet

Do add that heer toh badi sad song in this story ..

off course dear..
this story is based on movie songs only... so possibly all songs will be added..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely prologue .. Maan's dad is disturbed bcoz of Maan whereas Geet's parents are proud of their daughter.. So Maaneet are going to met in Greece.. Do update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Nice prologue
waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting
maaneet gonna meet in greece
cant wait 4 more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congo on the new story lovely update great prologue one is full of life will the other has jsut abt given up on life all together one gets full suport by their parents while the other not so lucky in that area how they meet and fall in love in love we will see that
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats on the new SS! thanks 4 da pm! fab prologue! well written! Maan's dad angry with him! Geet's parents r proud of her! Maan gone 2 Greece n his dad is upset! Geet also leaving 4 Greece! update soon

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