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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for the New story dear👏👏👏 AwesomePrologue...Loved it so much...waiting for the update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

It has been two days since geet landed in greece but for the enjoyment for which she was here was still missing..
As said by her, making her parents agree for this trip was not hard for geet , she easily convinced them and now along with pari she is here , right now she was with pari in her aunt's house which was situated in the rural area of Greece , and the beauty of that place was amazing..
But geet is not among those people to stay at one place and just enjoy the beauty , she is the explorer and now she will do what she decided to do before coming..
After resting for whole two days and removing her jet lag, she got up , packed her stuffs which included her night dress and some essential items as other stuffs were still packed! she went took bath and got ready in dark blue short dress with a white shrug , she dragged her suitcase and come out of the room..
Pari was having her breakfast , but stopped in middle seeing geet with her luggage..
Pari- geet, what's this??
Geet- my luggage, i'm leaving..
Pari- leaving!!! where??
Geet- to explore Greece darling..
Pari- explore..but we decided we will do it together..
Geet- so??
Pari- what so , r u leaving??
Geet- pari yaar, see i have never been alone in life, even when we go for vacations my parents used to follow, this time they allowed me because u along with ur parents words assured them.. but.. i want to explore it myself not with guardians..
Pari- but geet..
Geet- pari please please please .. she made a baby face and pleaded to pari..
Pari- but what will i answer ur parents, if they call me for u??
Geet- oye my parents are protective not shaaki , so they will not call u to inquire about me!
Pari- but still what if u get lost here..
Geet- pari darling we are not living in 17th century right??, i have phone with 4g network , she waved her phone infront of pari
Pari- but what will i say to my aunt??
Geet- that's ur problem say anything , bye! she kissed her cheek and left , leaving behind a confused pari !
Geet(st)- finally The Great Geet Handa is alone!!! babaji i'm so excited , 7 days alone !!
The found excitement brought a big smile on geet's face ..
Hmm so first thing is to find a hotel to stay.. she fetched her phone and searched a nice seven star hotel.. oh shit 40kms away.. ye pari ki aunt city mei nahi stay kar sakti thi , how will i reach there now.. yaha toh koi taxi bhi nahi dekhti.. with these thoughts she was moving through the street.. when a street play grabbed her attention..
She along with her luggage went close to the crowd and watched what's going on..
A romeo -juliet play was going on, but the most interesting thing that grabbed geet's attention was the boy who was playing romeo.. he seems to be indian but his accent was quite similar to the people of greece !
Geet observed him carefully or u say checked him out fully , her eyes were struck on him only..
her staring made the guy bit conscious as in between he looked at her but ignored her as, the play came to end , the crowd appreciated the actors and pay them few bucks!
Crowd started disappearing but geet was still there looking at that guy ..
Ignoring geet that guy left the girl whom he was holding till now and said excuse me.. but looks like that girl was too impressed by her new found romeo..
as the guy started to move from there the girl grabbed his hand, the guy turned back and answered yes??
Girl- what are u doing tonight??
The guy gave a confused look to her.. she came more close to him and said.. actually i was thinking why don't we date each other..
Guy- sorry not free actually.. but he was cut in between as geet came there and embraced him from waist..
Geet- actually he is my date for tonight , sorry! u can leave now! , geet gave a sorry look to that girl, that girl angrily left from there, geet giggled a bit..
The guy immediately separated himself from geet
Guy- excuse me miss... the guy tried to leave from there asap.. but geet words stopped him..
Geet- oye romeo , u own me a thanks at least..
The guy turned back and looked at her..
Geet- hayee kya looks hai.. dreamy! dreamingly geet said and ran to him..
Guy- thanks for what??
Geet- for saving u from her , i read ur expressions u were not at all interested in her..
Guy- oh thanks for ur unwanted help ! , the guy taunted her!
Geet- haww!!!! how rude!
Guy- enough of ur tamasha , bye! giving a tight smile he again turned to go..
Geet- romeo ur r indian! yay!!!! i guessed it right!happily geet said...
Guy- insane girl!
Geet- romeo wait.. geet ran behind him..
The guy started to walk more fast now.. but was stopped by an old man..
Old man- my child ur pay, he handed few notes to that guy..
Guy- sir what for??
Old man- u helped us , we are normal street actors here, we do these acts everyday and entertain people and this provides our bread butter everyday but today when we got to know that the actor who plays romeo is seriously ill we thought we will not earn anything today but then u came as an angel and helped us , thank u for ur help and this is ur share..
Guy- sir please, i agreed to do that because i love to act , i should thank u for letting me act.. and i don't need this pay , please distribute this among ur group!
Old man- u r a true angel my child , thank u , god bless u! and he left!

Till now geet reached near him and stood beside him, she too heard the conversation between the Guy and the old man
Geet- hmm angel romeo, interesting!
the guy was shocked and bit scared to see her again..
Guy- not again!
Geet- romeo, at least listen to me na.. please..
Guy- have u ran from some mental asylum or what??
Geet- no..
Guy- then why are u following me , leave me for god sake!
Geet- i can't, i have fallen in love with u at first sight , what can i do??
Guy- u r crazy!!!!!
Geet- but romeo.. she again tried to follow him but the guy has enough of her now!
Guy- stay away or else i will call the cops here! angrily he said, his anger warned geet to stop now..
Geet- okay sorry! i just needed ur help, actually i lost my way here and plus i can't trust any stranger here and then i saw u , u r indian na ,i'm too so thought to befriend u but all went in vain , sorry to trouble u! , geet said all this in one breath..
hearing her the guy brushed his hairs back in frustration..
Guy- u r really an insane girl!
Geet- yes i'm insane, crazy, mad everything but please help me , with this she bend on her knees and joined her hand in front of him please please please..
Poor guy, looked here and there , the people around them have started looking at them now!
he immediately grabbed her and made her stand on her feet..
Guy- stop this tamasha of urs now!
Geet- u will help me na??, with her cute expressions she asked him..
Guy- what will u do , if i deny u??
Geet-romeo i love u.. geet lovingly said... , the guy got her clue that she will again start her nautanki if he deny her.. so he agreed to help her and get rid of her soon!
Geet- by the what's ur name??
Guy- i'm just helping u, so my name does not matter..
Geet- okay then i will address u as romeo only.. won't u ask my name??
Guy- i'm not interested in knowing it..
Geet(innocently)- then how will u address me?? but the guy ignored her question after a pause geet herself said, call me Heer, and mind u its not my real name because u didn't tell ur name then why should i, right!
Guy-whatever!




okay guys here's the first part..
how was it???
geet is full nautanki here😆
eagerly waiting for reviews now
thank you for reading it😊
Edited by GurTi123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
interesting
geet leaves pari's aunt's place but don't get any transport to go her destination n on the street she meet a indian guy ask him to help her
is he maan

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting update yaar.. Geet came to Greece fr vacation with Pari n decided to venture alone.. Coincidently she met Romeo act very inters interesting n knowing the guys good heart decide to seek his help... She is really crazy n making the guys life hell and finally he decided to help her to shooo her away... I think he is maan..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Awesome. Geet is big nautanki. For help he did big drama n Maan had no option than to help her. Waiting for next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
sahi mein nautanki hai yeh...

awesome starting...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb part geet is so crazy and maan is so rude it will be awesome to see them as couple waiting to read it so update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Lovely update
Love it😊
waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
the guy is Maan is i think . Nice start continue soon

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