Asya TS: I am yours, my musibat magnet

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Hii all😆 surprised to see me
Well i m surprised too, to have myself here posting an os😛
My first attempt to write something although its utter rubbish. Wanted to try putting my asya imaginations in words. 😃 and the title😆 i criously couldnt decide so please suggest one
This os is continued after the scene where asad contemplates zoya to apologize for hurling accusations at tanveer.

After unwillingly apologizing to tanveer on asad's insistence zoya felt her insides burst out of anger and sadness, all emotions directed to her Mr.Khan. Why?? Just why couldnt he trust her once. While unknown to zoya, something in asad broke, seeing the love of his life zoya in tears while apologizing to tanveer. Zoya unaware of this left from there wanting to relieve herself from the heaviness she felt in her heart due to lack of trust that she expected from her Mr. Khan.

Wandering mindlessly in bhopal, zoya reached a park wanting to relax her troubled mind. Sitting in the corner of the garden, zoya reminisced all the times asad had indirectly shown his concern for her, though unsaid feelings which could be seen in his oh so expressive eyes. But then how could they maintain their after marriage relation if he could not trust her. She was tired of trying to convince Mr. Khan about his friends trap. But when did he listen to her.

Ultimately after pondering over what could be done, zoya stood up with a determined look and a new found confidence to make Mr. Khan realize that what hurt her, hurt her she was no toy she too had emotions. While in Khan Villa, asad sat in the drawing room continuously gaxing at the door undeterred by the book he had in his hand to mask how worried he was about where his Ms. Farooqui would be. Was she angry? Where had she gone? 'How careless can she be. Cant she make a call' asad wondered, unaware of the fact that his ammi and his sister stood smirking at him understanding his dilemma and tannu getting irritated by his lack of attention towards the kheer she had specially made for him. How badly she hated zoya.
Just then the bell rang, asad wanted to rush to open the door and see his Ms. Farooqui but stopped seeing his ammi and sister observing him. Slowly walking towards the door he opened it and was relieved to see zoya. 'Where have you been zoya have u seen what time is it??' asad asked although trying to sound stern but concern still laced in his voice irking tanveer. Zoya ignored looking at asad and straight away walked to dilshaad. Dilshaad looked at zoya with concern seeing her disturbed. 'Phuppi main aapse kuch baat karna chahti hu' zoya said with seriousness especially asad. Asad had expected zoya to chatter continuously with najma and his ammi as always. But seeing zoya so serious gave him an inkling feeling of something not so good to happen.
Finally dilshaad spoke up ' ha beta bolo na kya baat hai, about the morning incident i know zoya you are hurt beta'. Zoya cut dilshaad's words 'Phuppi i am sorry but i have decided i can no longer marry Mr. Khan, he was right we are a misfit for each other. If somebody he would like to marry would be tanveer i am sure. Am i right, Mr. Khan??' making asad gasp. How could this be?? No, he never loved tanveer. His heart felt heavy listening to zoya's words. Had he hurt her so much that she didnt want to marry him. But as if adding to asad's dilemma zoya spoke up 'Phoopi there's something else i need to tell you. I am moving out of this house and shifting somewhere else.' Everybody stood too stunned to react except tanveer who couldnt help smiling finally what she wanted was going to come true. Now she could easily mary asad and have his wealth.
finally dilshad spoke breaking everybody's reverie ' Zoya beta tell me what's wrong. Why do you want to shift. Is it because of the morning incident zoya. Tell me . We can sit and solve all the issues. You dont need to leave the house, it is your house too.' Asad stood with his back towards the ladies unable to comprehend how things were turning up. How had such a situation occurred.
Zoya unable to see dilshad and najma in tears hugged them both and spoke ' i am sorry But i can no longer stay here phupi. Of course i will meet you outside everyday but please dont stop me. Please dont make this difficult for me please understand. ' Hearing zoya plead dilshaad with tears in her eyes asked zoya ' But where will you stay zoya. You dont even know anybody here except us' zoya smiled through her tears and told her 'You dont need to worry phupi i have already decided a place to stay. I will be fine.' Admist this conversation asad stood too numb to react with tears in his eyes. His worst fear had come true she was leaving him. He wanted to rush to zoya, hug her and not let her go. But boy that was so unlike him how could he do it. Emotionally challenged afterall😕
'but where are you going to stay. I need to see that place zoya before you go to stay there' dilshad exclaimed. Zoya got alarmed and immediately answered 'No phupi you dont need to come there to check i mean its safe. I am going to stay at my friend's relatives place.You dont need to worry' zoya lied well aware that the place she had decided to stay in would never be approved by dilshaad and asad. But she had no option, did she? Thinking about it she excused herself in her room feigning tiredness ignoring Mr. Khan who stood there motionless.
Asad was too shocked to react. Dilshaad glared at him and left. Tanveer placed a hand on asad's shoulder , but asad ignored her and left for his room, leaving behind a frustrated yet happy tanveer in the drawing room. Everybody in the house spent a sleepless night well aware that the new dawn would mean zoya would leave. Asad grew restless of what could he do to stop her. He paced his room the entire night. A little before dawn asad drifted to sleep on the couch in his room. Zoya tiptoed to asad's room and giving him one longing look she left. Bidding dilshaad and najma goodbye, she also promised to call them and keep them regularly updated.
Dilshaad walked to asad's room and seeing him sleeping with a frown on his face. She woke him up, asad whispered 'Zoya' as soon as he opened his eyes wanting to think of yesterday's event to be a nightmare. Dilshaad felt helpless seeing asad, she told him zoya had left. Asad felt a pang of pain in his heart how could she really leave him. He cursed himself for the turn of events. He promised his ammi and himself, he would find zoya and get her back afterall how could he live without his Musibat Magnet.

To be continued...😉


Okay okay i know that was pathetic terrible and what not😕
all tomatoes are welcome
no proof reading dne.
Just went with the flow
Couldnt help trying a hand in writing
I would like to appreciate all the writers who write and entertain us😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love this...
Why did you stop there...?
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it's absolutely amazing please continue soon asad aargh he used to go nut case when it came to his pyaari tehzeeb wali tanu i just wanted to bang his head somewhere poor zoya left
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for commenting
Actly it was the first time so wasnt sure whether what i was writing was making sense😆
So thot to confirm once😃
Yes ankiecool i too hate the fact that always asad chose to believe tannu over zoya
hpe ds os does overcome it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was a great concept..
I always wanted zoya to react after apologising to tanveer..
thank you for writing on this. .
it was very well written. .!
Update soon..:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice!

Eagerly waiting for the second part
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Well written

Brief

Lovable

Cute

Short

Amazing

Wonderful

Likaeable

Waiting for the next chapter

Do cnt soon n if possible plz pm me dear

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutie15

That was a great concept..
I always wanted zoya to react after apologising to tanveer..
thank you for writing on this. .
it was very well written. .!
Update soon..:)

Thanks for commenting
glad you liked the concept
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it. Why did you stop here. Please make it a long one
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Originally posted by: ashlesha2

Well written

Brief

Lovable

Cute

Short

Amazing

Wonderful

Likaeable

Waiting for the next chapter

Do cnt soon n if possible plz pm me dear

Thanks dear
Glad you liked it will pm you

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