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BY- AISHWARYA ARORA
DEDICATED TO- SHUBHANGI ARORA
Zindigi main jab kisi cheez ki koi umeed nahi rehti tabhi hame jeene ki ek aas milti hai .
Aisi hi ek kahaani hai inki , MANIK aur NANDINI ki .
JAAN PEHCHAAN (INTRODUCTION)
MANIK MALHOTRA-:
A 21year old rich but not at all spoiled handsome hunk .Uski life mein sabse important kuch hai to woh hai uske dost - THE FAB5 & they are the only one who knows the darkest secrets of his life .Manik is scared of love and does not believe it.
Manik studies in space academy which is owned by his so-called mom Neyonika malhotra.
NEYONIKA MALHOTRA-:
Neyonika Malhotra is the owner of S.P.A.C.E academy the biggest and most prestigious music college of India.
Neyonika was cheated by his husband Ashok Malhotra when manik was only 13years old and from then on she solely handles S.P.A.C.E academy. Although she loves manik more than her life but she only shows her evil side to him as she thinks he is same as his father and would eventually betray her.
Manik hates her to the core of his heart.
NANDINI MURTHY-:
A 20 year old rich and simple and stylish girl. She is an independent girl and lives alone. She was 11 year old when her parents died in a car accident and from then on she lived with her grandma, her Amms, but unfortunately she also died 3years back and from till then she lives alone .Although she's that rich that without working she can live her entire life peacefully but still she prefers to work hard so that she can distract her mind from the emptiness in her life. Nandini also looks after Murthy Industries and visits there twice a week to keep a check on it and to sign some papers, rest all work is done by the management itself and also Murthy industries is one of the top ten companies of India .Nandini is an amazing classical and pop music singer, but since her Amms died she never ever singed infront of anyone, she only sings when she is alone. She does not talk to anyone besides her childhood best friend, her soul sister Navya, only navya has heard her singing. Nandini lives in her big mansion in Mumbai from past 3 years since her Amms died.
NAVYA NAVELI -:
Navya is a 20 year old simple girl. She basically is from Patna but from past one is residing in Mumbai and resides in a flat. She is a full on "DRAMA QUEEN", full-on filmy. She is the only source of smile to her best friend her sister Nandini. She is only one who sees the sadness behind her happiness and her tears behind her smile.
She is from past one year dating CABIR DHAWAN and they both are madly in love with each other . Navya has met FAB5 many times and they also quite like her because of cabir as he is loves her.
CABIR DHAWAN -:
Cabir is also 21year old boy part of fab 5. He is the humdard of manik .He knows him in and out and is bit possessive about him. All in all he is a full on bindass and is a number one prankster of space academy.
Boyfriend of Navya and is madly in love with her and also knows nandini very well, they share a bro-sis bond and even Cabir knows her in and out like navya.
DHRUV & ALIA-:
Dhruv Vedant a 21 year boy and a member of THE FAB5. He is like a small brother to Manik. He is titled as the "SWEET BOY" by his gang .
Alia saxena a 20 year old girl . She is fashionista and the most hot girl of space academy .
Dhruv and Alia are dating each other since 2years and are madly in love with each other.
MUKTI MEHRA-:
Mukti is also 20year old girl .She is of tom boyish nature . She is the evil twin of cabir and is an equally evil prankster like him . She is quite stylish and hot. Mukti is also tagged as "lady hitler" by everyone.
FAB5-:
The most famous band of S.P.A.C.E academy and its music is liked in whole nation .They never talk to anyone except each other in the space academy and are kinda reserved.
But but but when someone messes with them then they are more then ready to show their evil side to them...
HI GUYS...GLAD TO RECEIVE SO MANY VIEWS ALREADY...BUT DON'T U ALL THINK THAT INITIALLY I WOULD LIKE TO HAVE SOME COMMENTS TOO...SO THAT THEY CAN MOTIVATE ME MORE!!!
LOVE- ASHWARYA
PART 1
A NEW BEGINNING
At Mannat Mansion(Nandini's House)- 10:00pm
(Nandini and navya talking on call)
N- Navya tumhare kehne par maine music nahi choda but now I am not going to join this music college.
NAV- Nandu please , tum aisa kyun kar rahi ho apne saath? Kyun apni life ko ek chance nahi de sakti? Nandu yeh teri Amms ,tere amma-appa ki wish thi ki tu apna talent saamne laaye ,please atleast unke liye , please space join karle.
N(sobbing)- Navya tum janti ho ki amms ke jaane ke baad main ab kisi ke saamne gaa nahi paati , so how can I join space ? main nahi kar paongi ...tum sahi keh rahi ho mujhe amms aur amma-appa ke liye try karna chahiye but agar main nahi gaa payi toh?
NAV- nandu tu kitni jaldi tension leti h tu tension mat le , u r the best , maine tujhe gaate hue kitni baar sunna h tu ek dam kamaal h , and jahan tak baat rahi nahi gaa paongi and all, tu famous classical singer Kishori Murthy ki granddaughter h and teri amma she too was a playback singer .Tu offcourse gaa payegi.
Aur nandu tu na iss hopeless aur emotional mode mein bilkul acchi nahi lagti tu toh woh ek dum confident aur arrogant mode mein acchi lagti jaise tu apne office mein hoti h ek dum dabangg ke salman khan ke style mein. Sabki boti band kara dene wali ekdum waise
N (happy)- Navya tum bhi na bahut badi drama queen ho aur thanks for everything and I will join space academy with you and haan but tumhe ek cheez promise karni padegi that cabir se zaada mere saath time spend karogi you won't leave me alone. You know na that you are my only strength but don't worry I'll give you you time for your koochikoo also.
NAV(blushing)- Nandu tu na kabhi nahi sudhregi ...Chal so ja kal college jaana h and haan hum tumhare ghar aayenge phir saath mein chalenge . Good night sweet dreams.
N- Good night navya sweet dreams.
(Nandini alone in her room infront of her family picture)
N- Amms Amma-Appa main aapka sapna zaroor poora karungi ab main sirf aapke iss sapne ke liye jiyungi.
(Nandini joins her hands and prays to her aaiappa {god})
N- Aaiappa please give the worlds happiness to navya, cabir and all those who don't have anyone except you in this whole world and are alone like me.)
MALHOTRA MANSION (10:00PM)
(Fab 5 were partying as usual and all of them were fully drunk)
MUK- Guys finally ek aur naya saal and lots of more fun and offcourse our music.
CA- Kya yaar mukti kyun itne zor se gala phad rahi h zara dheere bol na mere sarr mein dard ho raha h and haan why are you so excited fun to hamara dailydose h who is going to stop us and music to humse hi hai its never going to leave us . Hana Manik?
(Manik is lost in his thoughts and Cabir pushes him bring into his senses)
M- Haan kya hua?
CA- Yahi to main tujhse pooch raha hoon kya hua kahan khoya hua h ?
M- Aah...Ummm... Aisa kuch nahi h cabir its just I'm feeling sleepy and headache ho raha h .
AL- Manik why didn't u told us before you are okay na ?
M- Alia I'm fine just need some sleep .I'm going to bed , tum log bhi aaj yahin ruk jao as u all are drunk and kal phir yahin se chalenge college .
DHR-Okay buddy tu ja take rest hum kal baat karenge .
(Everyone leaves to guest rooms while manik goes to his room and stands in his balcony)
M(Frustrated/Angry)- Yeh kya ho rha h mere saath aisa kyun ho rha h ... Yeh feeling yeh ehsaas phirse kyun ho raha h mujhe? Why again?
CAB- Manik !!!
(Manik turns and sees cabir )
M- Cabir tu soya nahi abhi tak?
CAB-Tujhe kya lagta h Manik tu sabki tarah mujhse bhi apni feelings chupa lega? Ab bata kya hua?
(Manik goes and sits on the swing in this balcony and says)
M- Cabir I don't know yaar what is happening to me. Woh same feeling ho rahi h jo pehle hoti thi . I don't know what is it ? But aisa lag rha h jaise sab kuch badalne waala h , aisa lag rha h jaise kuch hone waala h ...I'm totally messed up yaar.
CAB- Manik kab tak tu Soha ke baare mein sochta rahega ? Manik tu usse sacha pyaar karta tha and woh tujhe bas use kar rahi thi jab uska kaam ho gaya woh bina kuch bataye chali gayi. Accept it yaar it's high time now 2 saal ho gaye hain usko gaye ... Move on ... Kab tak tu uska dhokha yaad rakhega aur kab tak apne aap ko ek chance nahi dega.
M(Angry)- Stop it Cabir ... I know she was a bitch ...but all I know is she has really hurt me and I have forgotten her but the way she cheated on me and broke me ,it still haunts me ... darr lagta h yaar ki koi phir ... Koi phirse sab khatam kar dega. Aur this feeling that I'm having right now it's a bit different it's a bit strange.
CAB- Manik relax sab theek hoga kuch nahi badlega teri life FAB5 hai and hum sab kabhi nahi badlenge .Never ever. Aur haan tere saath jo bura hona tha hogaya h ab j bhi hoga accha hoga .Be positive.
M- I hope so. Chal lets sleep kal college bhi jaana h . Good Night.
CAB(looks at the sky)- Bhagwaan ji aapka bahut bahut dhanyavaad apne mere buddhe hone se pehle isse dimag de dia nahi to mera kya hota?
M(holds him from his neck)- Saale drama company ke saath rehte rehte tu bhi drama seekh gaya .
CAB(smiles and blushes)- Meri navu hai hi aisi !!!
M- Oye ...Navu ke Cabu chal so ja ...Bye.
CAB- Bye.
NEXT MORNING
MANNAT MANSION (5:00AM)
Nandini woke upto the sound of her alarm and as soon as she opened her eyes she saw the most beautiful view infront of her captivated her as a matter of fact her favorite view from past 3years since she came to Mumbai, just infront of her bed was the way to her balcony from where the sky was clearly visible and the sight infront of her was none other than the sight of sunrise ,sun peeping out of the horizon and brightening the whole world.
She woke up with a small smile on her face and went to freshen up.
She came back to do her regular morning riyaaz(singing practice).
Seeing the sunrise she started singing while playing her guitar.(nandini is both classical and western music singer thus she knows playing both veena and guitar.)
Suraj tera gardish mein hai
Dhalte huaa keh gaya
Phir laut ke aaunga main
Nazdeek hi hai subah
Gaaye jaa, gaaye jaa
Gham mein hai sargam
Gunguna ye dhun, gaaye jaa..
Gaaye ja, gaaye ja
Raat ke dhaagon se savera bun, gaaye ja..
Gaaye ja, gaaye ja
Gham mein hai sargam
Gunguna ye dhun, gaaye ja
(Her eyes are closed and she is remembering all the good times spend with her family. She is thinking of navya's words that she has to keep moving on that she has to live for her amms and amma-appa.)
Apna hi apna kyun kehlaaya hai
Kaise koi tay karta hai kaun paraaya hai
Ek wohi rishta teri kamaayi hai
Dard ke pal mein jisne tera saath nibhaya hai
Toota huaa to kya sitaara tu
Kisi ka bann sahara tu..
(She remembers all the bad times she has gone through since her Amms died, she remembers all the loneliness she has gone through all these years .She remembers her bong with navya , the only relation she has now and how she has become an important part of her life..)
Mmm..
Gaaye ja, gaaye ja
Raat ke dhaagon se savera bun, gaaye ja...
Gaaye ja, gaaye ja
Gham mein hai sargam
Gunguna ye dhun gaaye ja
(By this time tears start flowing from her eyes)
Ho.. aankhon mein rakhna sapne tu kal ke
Tujhko lekin un tak jana hoga khud chal ke
Majhdhaaron se tu, haar nahin jaana
Saahil tujhko paana hoga lehron mein dhalke
Hai zindagi wohi jo chalti hai
Yeh girke hi sambhalti hai
(She remembers her promise she has made to herself last night to fulfill her family's dream and she is ready to face any obstacle to reach it. She imagines her amms and her amma-appa giving her blessing and are feeling proud of her.)
{Song above is from movie BROTHERS (2015) - GAAYE JA (FEMALE VERSION}
She opens her eyes and start sobbing silently. Suddenly she hears a sound and looks toward it to see Navya their with tears in her eyes opening her arms saying through her eyes to come and hug her.
She without wasting a second hops in her arms and start crying. After sometime Navya composes herself wipes her tears and breaks the hug and wipes Nandini's tears and says-:
NAV- You know what I am proud of you!
(Nandini through her eyes ask her why?)
NAV- Because I saw all your expression while u were singing and tum janti ho hamne kya dekha , hamne dekha ki tumne apni takat pehchan li h nandu. Tum jaan gayi ho ki tumhe kya karna h aur kaise karna h .
N(smiles)- Haan Navya tum theek keh rahi ho aaj ek naya din hai ek nayi subah h ek nayi shurvaat .(she faces her family picture and says) main jaan chuki hoon ki mujhe kya karna h. Navya ab main har cheez ko face karungi nd I will make my family proud of me .
NAV- Yeh hui na YO waali baat!!
N- Navya waise tum itni subah yahan kya kar rahi ho abhi toh sirf 6:30am ho rahe hain.
NAV- Woh isliye kyunki ,pehli baat mujhe tumhari meethi awaaz sunni thi aur doosra reason kyuki aaj hamara college ka pehla din and ham chahte the ki hum dono saath mein tayaar ho.
N(teasing her)- Navya seedhe seedhe bolo na ki you want to show everyone ki The Cabir Dhawan ki girlfriend kitni hot nd sexy h ! bolo bolo!
NAV(blushing)- Nandu tu subah subah shuru ho gayi ruk ja abhi batati hoon tujhe.
(Navya runs after nandini and both of them fall on the bed and navya starts tickling nandini , while she laughs loud .)
N- Navya stop stop ...haha haahaa... bas na..
NAV- Chalo ab bas bahut hua chalo tum jao take bath main apne kamre mein jaakar freshup hoti hoon.
(Navya often comes to Mannat Mansion for a nightout, thus she has a separate room there with her stuff.Nandini says that the mansion is too big for her so she would like navya to have her own room and stay there more often.)
Nandini wore a black jumpsuit and applied kajal and eye liner and a pink colour lipstic.
Navya wore a royal blue jumpsuit applied kajal and liner and a maroonish lipstic.
N- Navya hum kuch zaada hi dressup nahi ho gaye ?
NAV- Nandu hum toh kuch bhi dressup nahi hue h ,tumhe pata h waha ladkiyan kaisi kaisi dresses pehnti hain. Aur tum bahut pyaari lag rahi ho kahin aaj kisi ko tumse pyaar na ho jaye.
N- Navya tumhe pata h na main iss pyaar-vyaar mein nahi manti. Aur tumhe aur Cabir ko saccha pyaar hua h iska matlab yeh koi h ki saccha pyaar sabko milta h .Chalo ab late ho rahe h breakfast bhi karna h .
NAV- Uff...Theek h baba...chalo ab.
MALHOTRA MANSION (8:00am)
(Cabir is sleeping with Manik and his phone rings and disturbs his peaceful slumber. He picks the phone call and says)
CAB- Jis number se aap sampark karna chah rahe h woh abhi switched off h kripya thodi der baad call karein.
NAV- Cabir agar tum abhi ke abhi nahi uthe na toh tumhe aaj ke baad mera number switched off milega aur nayi girlfriend bhi dhoondni padegi.
(cabir wakes up with a jerk)
CAB- Navu tum ? Good morning
NAV(sweetly)- Cabu tumhari good morning ab hui h ,hum toh ready bhi ho gaye .Its 8:15am tumne kaha tha ki jaise hi hum college aayenge to tum hame receive karoge. Jaldi utho ...warna tumhe pata h tumhare saath kya hoga! Bye.
(She disconnects the call.)
CAB- Shit yaar ready hona padega nahi toh navu madhubhala se mogambo bann jayegi.
(Cabir takes bath and wakes up manik with great difficulty and asks him to take bath, meanwhile he goes down to the hall and sees that rest of them are sleeping there only. Mukti is sleeping on the single sofa and Dhruv&Alia are sleeping on the middle sofa cuddling each other. Cabir tries to wake them up but none of them wakes up.So having no choice left he throws bucket full water on all three of them. Three of them start shouting on them and start running behind him to beat him. Meanwhile Manik comes down and sorts everything and tells everyone to get ready within 15minutes.All head toward respective rooms. Meanwhile cabir and manik talk.)
CAB- Manik tu theek h na?
M(happily)- Ya I'm fine now and actually I'm feeling much better. Cabir today I'm feeling quite different quite relaxed calm and happy.
CAB-Well that's good to hear.
(Everyone comes and they head towards S.P.A.C.E )
awesome update...
loved it so much...
loving this different side of manan...
manik is heartbroken by soha...and nandu misses her family...both will be each other's strength once they begin to love...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...