MaNan FF - EHSAAS..... A love saga {TO BE CONTINUED ON WATTPAD} - Page 5

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PART 4

YAARI YAARI

Kisi bhi relation mein sabse important pata hai kya hota h? Woh h Trust & Understanding. Woh relation chahe dosti ka ho ya phir pyaar ka.

So jab pyaar aur dosti dono ke liye same cheez chahiye hoti hai so we can say that pyaar dosti h aur dosti se hi pyaar h...

MALHOTRA MANSION (5:00 am)

(The sun was about to rise and there was one person in malhotra mansion who was not able to sleep all night, It was Cabir.

Cabir & Navya as usual had a silly fight and Navya angrily blocked Cabir and was not talking to him. Cabir already knew that Navya was staying at Nandini's house so he decided to go there and make-it-up to her. So he quickly got up and went down to go just then he saw Manik sitting beside the pool and he thought of a mischievous plan. He went towards Manik and said)

C- Aaj kumbhkaran itni jaldi kaise uth gaye?

(Manik turned and looked towards Cabir.)

M- Haan to bata na. (he pointed towards cabir) ki kumbhkaran aaj jaldi kaise utha..

C- Haha ... Meri trick mujhi par

(Cabir came and sat beside Manik)

M- Waise tu itni subah kaha ja raha tha.

C- Yaar woh Navya se kal ladai ho gayi ab naraaz h bahut toh bas usse hi manane ja rha tha.

M- Cabir ... Yaar seriously tum dono thakte nahi ho fight kar karke. I mean u fight worst than enemies and when you guys come to love you both are more romantic then Romeo Juliet.

C- Ya you are right. But I think this masti and all is the basis of our love...Chal Manik tu bhi chal na, mujhe help kar dio.

M- Seriously Cabir ...You think I would come!

C(mischievously)- Yaar chal na tu Nandini ke ghar ke bahar ruk jaio...main navya se jaldi mil kar aa jaonga.

M(confused)- Nandini kahan se aa gayi? Tu uske ghar kyun ja raha h? Tujhe to Navya se milna h na?

C(teasingly)- Arre do u have any problem agar main wahan jao toh?

M(irritated)- But tu Nandini ke ghar kyun jaa raha h? Tu nahi jayega wahan.

(Cabir was enjoying this to the core. But he somehow tried to act normal and said)

C- Manik Nandini&Navya usually stay together and aaj bhi they are staying together so main navya se mine wahin to jaonga.

M-oh... haan thik h na...chal chalte hain...

C(acting innocent)- But Manik abhi tujhe nahi chalna tha ...Koi nahi tu rehnde ... I'll manage.

M(stammering)- Cabir ...woh... I mean ...Navya tere se bahut gussa hogi na I'll come with you may be tujhe meri help chahiye ho.

C(teasing)- How sweet manik!!! Tu pakka mere aur navya ke liye aa raha h na ?

M- Cabir ...haan ...umm..aur kyun aaonga .Tum dono ke liye hi aa raha hoon.

C- Thik chal.

M- Haan chal come on

(MANNAT MANSION- 5:30am)

(As usual Nandini woke upto the rays of sunlight entering her room. She woke up and got freshed and sat to do her riyaaz. Meanwhile Navya too came from her room as she wanted to hear her nightingale singing.She picked up her veena and started singing.)

(Meanwhile ManBir to reached Mannat Mansion and were just figuring out how to get in just when they heard a beautiful voice which mesmerized them.)

M (sort of hypnotized) - Who's this?

CAB( he too was in a spell and was only able to speak)- NANDINI!!!!

(NANDINI'S ROOM)

(Nandini was singing)

Mujhe ishq se rehna tha door
Gham iske bade jo hain mash'hoor
Par ye dil hai ki bilkul mana nahi
Mujhe kheench kar dekho le aaya wahin
Jahaan ishq hai, bas ishq hai
Haan ishq hai, bas ishq hai

(Remembering her yesterday's encounter with Manik and his worgs and the strange feeling she felt when he was with her.)

Yaariyan ve.. Yaariyan ve..

Iss dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ke mil jaaye ise woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah (x2)
(Thinking about navya's words of "love")

Tu jo mila to zindagi hai badli
Main poori nayi ho gayi
Hai be-asar duniya ki baatein badi
Ab teri sunu main sadaa

Hmm..
Milne ko tujhse bahaane karun
Tu muskuraye wajah main banun
Roz bitana saath mein tere
Saara din mera
(Thinking how Manik shared his Dadi's thoughts with her...How he became her friend, she smiled thinking this.)
Iss dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ke mil jaaye ise woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah (x2)
( She was scared what if she again lost everything.)
Kya hua asar tere sath reh kar na jaane
Ke hosh mujhe na raha
Lafz mere thhe zuban pe aake ruke
Par ho na sake woh bayaan
Dhadkan tera hi naam jo le
Aankhein bhi paigham yeh de
Teri nazar ka hi yeh asar hai
Mujhpe jo huaa..
(Thought about their hug, how she lost herself in his embrace how peaceful and protected she felt.)

Iss dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ke mil jaaye ise woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah (x2)

{THIS SONG IS FROM MOVIE YAARIAAN- MUJHE ISHQ SE. DO LISTEN WHILE READING.}

(Till the time song ended ManBir climbed Nandini's room balcony and were silently just watching her sing. Then the song ended and Nandini opened her eyes and looked and Navya who was looking at her without blinking her eyes and her mouth wide opened in a O-shape.)

NAV- Nandu zara hame pinch toh karna!

(Nandini pinched her.)

NAV- Ouch!!!! Nandu tum kitna accha gaati ho. Matlab hamne itni baar tumhe gaate hue sunna hai but it's always as if it's the first time hum tumhe sunn rahe h.

N- Navya thanks, its all because of you that I still have music in my life.

(Nandini was saying all this just when she saw ManBir in balcony peeping inside through the glass.)

N- Tum dono? Tum dono yahan kya kar rahe ho?

(Navya turned towards the balcony and saw ManBir standing as statue.Both of them went to the balcony towards them.)

N (angryily)- Manik Cabir!!

(Both came out their trance and said)

ManBir- You were awesome. Once more please!!

NAV(angryily) - Once more hum batate h tumhe. Cabir tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Kyun aaye ho ab yahan par, kal to bad lad rahe the ab kya hua?

CAB- Navu main to tumhe hi manane aaya hoon. (holds his ears.) Sholly baby.

NAV (frustrated)- Tum hamesha aise karte ho Cabir! Iss baar hum nahi mane waale.

(With this she goes out of Nandini's room and Cabir follows her.Now only MaNan were left in balcony.)

M(continuously speaking )- Nandini u were amazing! Tume pata hai maine aaj tak kabhi kisi ko itna accha gaate hue nahi sunna. U sing really well.

N- Manik!!! Breathe ...And Thanks ...But tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

(Saying this she walked towards her room, followed by Manik. Manik entered her room and was amazed seeing her room all red, it was so perfect.)

(NANDINI'S ROOM)

{IN NANDINI'S ROOM}

N (shouts)- Manik!!!

M- Haan ... Kya hua...

N- Manik I'm asking you something.

M- Ya actually Cabir asked me to come with him as he might needed my help to manaofy Navya and moreover I thought to meet my new friend and say her good morning...So yes Nandini...Good Morning.

N (laughs at his antics) - Good Morning Manik.

M- Yes all thanks to you...You definitely made my morning a good one.

N- Hmmm...

M- Nandini your room is really nice.

N- Thanks Manik.

M- Waise Nandini! Whats you favourite colour?

N- Idiot! What kind of question is that? Isn't it obvious that's red!!

M- Well that's good to know that my friend likes red just like me. (He stops for a while and thinks.) Wait a second tumne mujhe idiot kaha!

N- Haan toh tum idiot hi to ho! Can't you see everything is red here so it's obvious that I love red !

M- Nandini Murthy u are going to pay for this!

(Manik starts coming close to Nandini.)

N(stammering) - Manik... yeh ...tuuum...yeh tum kya kar rahe ho.

(Manik comes deadly close to Nandini and starts tickling her.)

N(laughs)- Manik...manik stop...What are you doing?

M- Can't you see tickle kar raha hoon tumhe!

N(laughing) - Manik please stop na! wait let me also show you.

(With this Nandini tries to tickle Manik )
M- Ha..Ha..Ha... I don't feel ticklish!!(And with this he continues to tickle her)

(Nandini constantly tries to get out of his grip and to stop him but all went in vain. With this suddenly both fall on the bed. Manik was above her.He stops tickling and moves him fingers towards her face to remove the hair strands from her face. He takes the hair strands and tuck them behind her ear. Both of them were lost in each others eyes, both were lost within each other second-by-second they were coming closer. Manik's and Nandini's lips were just about to meet when suddenly CaVya came inside laughing. Just as they entered what they saw made them go numb on their places.)

C- What is happening guys?

NAV- Hum bhi same copy paste yahi poochna chahte h... Yeh ho kya raha hai

(Manik and nandini both got up and straighten themselves. Manik knew what Cabir upto now so he to handle the situation said.)

M- Cabir ...Yeh Nandini she said that I am an idiot! Look kis angle se main idiot lagta hoon.

(Cabir came close to him held his face, he first turned his face towards right and then towards left and then left his face and stepped back and said.)

C (innocently) - Manik tu toh har angle se idiot lagta hai. Par aaj tak maine yeh notice kyun nahi kia? Hatts-off to Nandini!

M (angrily)- Cabirrr... Tub hi ruk ja saale abhi batata hoon who is the idiot !

(Manik runs behind Cabir to catch him and soon it turned into a tom and jerry fight. Soon the fight ended and all four of them were rolling on the floor laughing. Later NavNi tells them to go as it was already 7:30am and they have to go to college too.)

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Awesome update
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The song was perfect and then MaNan teasing session was also good.
The pics were so nice
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