MANAN : I Am All Yours updated sorry note on page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Guys I am here with a short short but I will continue this only if I get good response who ever read this plzz do like and comment by that response I can continue

PROLOGUE

Manik : Nandini plzz come back I know I have done a mistake plzz I want u back in my life


Nandini : Manik what do u think of yourself when ever u want I need to come and when u say to go I need to go am I looking like a toy to play

Then suddenly a little girl of age 4 comes running unaware of maniks presence and rushed towards nandini

Girl. : mamma whele ale you ( where are u ) I am waitling (waiting) for u there with papa

Manik was shocked to see the girl calling nandini mamma and someone else as papa and a doubt arose in his mind did nandini move on ? That mere thought is enough to break his heart into pieces and he composed himself and spoke

Manik : Nandini is she ur daughter I mean our Before he spoke he was cut off by nandini

Nandini : my daughter do u get that my daughter and now get lost
And before manik could start he saw a waiter calling nandini

Waiter : mam ur husband Mr. Singhania is waiting for u two plzz come

Nandini : say him that I am coming
Nandini : baby come fast we need to go
Girl : yes mamma
She ignored manik and left from there

Manik to himself : how could u do this nandu u promised me that u r mine and I am ur only owner then how could u do this and remembered something

FLASH BACK

It was wedding night of MANAN and nandini was sitting on the king sized bed then suddenly the door opened she could here the footsteps coming towards her as she know the owner of those footsteps she didn't react but her breathe was uneven due to his presence manik slowly reached and Sat close to her on the bed he touched her hand and she shivered due to his touch and he smirked knowing his effect on her and he started

Manik : jaan open ur eyes and she just nodded. And opened her eyes and he continued looking deeply in her eyes
Manik : jaan I know u r not comfortable with all this I love u a lot I don't want these worldly pleasures I just need u only ur love until ur comfortable with I will not force u for this

Nandini : she just and continued MANI I know u love me more than anything and even I love u to the core actually I am tensed as its my first and I am more than comfortable with u
He just smiled listening her reply and she continued
Nandini : Manik I am all yours only yours only u have the right on me u r my owner only u have the right on me and once again I am saying I Am YOURS ONLY YOURS and u no need to wait for anything
Hearing this he was more than happy that he is the only owner of her everything and crushed him lips on her lips for a passionate kiss and she responded with equal favour while kissing his hands slowly moved to the knot of her blouse and he slowly opened it without breaking the he removed her all her jewellery and they broke the kissing panting heavily as they are in need of oxygen and he removed his and her closed and a blanket over them and he started giving her wet kisses on her naked body and then before he enter inside her and claim her as his he asked her permission and she nodded her head as approval and he enter inside he caught her lips as he know it would give her pain and finnaly after claiming her as his he took her in his arms and pecked her forehead and drank her tears and after chit chatting on various. Topics they. Drifted to sleep


PRESENT
Manik : Nandini u said that ur mine only mine and I ur owner then how u move on and give someone my right which I had on u

Guys how it plzz let me know by ur comments by that I will decide to continue this or not plzz do comment so that I can update nxt part


Jasmine



INDEX

Prologue. Page 1
CHAPTER 1 Page 4
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome yr...
plz continue...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i love it
pls pls continue soon
plsss
love u so much
muhhhaaa
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting story eagerly waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome...
Plz cont soon...
Pm me if u can...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome n interesting prologue as its one shot to everything is gonna clear n I'm sure its manans daughter n she is not married to that man. Pls update soon waiting for manans Milan if possible update tonight.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its very good
awesome yaar
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome prologue...

loved it so much...

manan were married...nandu can't have moved on...she is probably just married for the sake...maybe fake...

the girl is probably manan's...

wondering what happened in manan's life...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome plzzz continue ...and I hope she turned out to be maniks daughter only...it is very interesting looking forward to it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls continue !! It is very interesting...

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