OS-HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey guys
its my first os so plzz ignore mistakes
it is dedicated to my life my jaan shanaya..love uhh😭😭plzz come back
HAMARI ADHURI KAHANI!
JODHA N JALAL BELONGS TO DIFFERENT RELIGION
THERE FATHERS HAVE THERE OWN POLITICAL PARTY
THEY HATE EACH OTHER AS THERE FATHERS WERE EACH OTHER COMPETITORS
CHILDHOOD
when joja were 10 yrs old
they were moving in there school when ja unintentionally pushes jo
jo-uhh dirty dog uhh pushed me
ja-so what
ja-😡
jo-when my father will win the election then i will show uhh
ja-lets see
n then they walked away
WHEN JOJA WERE 16 YRS OLD
ja was talking with his friend
teacher-jalal move out of the class
ja-but ma'am
teacher-i said move out
when ja was moving out jo was laughing
teacher-jo why r uhh laughing?uhh also move out
jo-but
teacher-outtt
n jalal smirks
they both come out
ja-see i made teacher upset at uhh
jo-shut up
ja holds her wrist n say-i will not
jo screams in pain n jalal felt some pain in his heart listening her cry n leave her hand
WHEN JOJA WAS 21 YRS OLD
HUMAYUN WAS TALKING onTHE PHONE N WAS SAYING -YAA THIS TIME BHARMAl'S STRATEGY IS GOOD
BUT WE HAVE TO WIN BECAUSE OUR PRIDE IS AT RISK
N JALAL HEARD THIS SO HE MAKES A PLAN
JO WAS MOVING TOWARDS WASHROOM WHEN JA PULLED HER
N THEN HE SIT ON His KNEES N SAID-JO I LOVE UHH I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT UHH ...UHH HAVE BECOME MY LIFE NOW
WILL UHH MARRY ME
JO WAS SHOCKED N SHE SAID-I NEED TIME
THEN SHE LEAVES
SHE WAS THINKING tHEN HER HEART SAID-SAY YES TO HIM
N THEN SHE DECIDED WHAT SHE HAVE TO DO NOW
MORNING
JO MEETS JA
JO-MY ANSWER IS YES
JA HUGS JO N SAY-I WANT TO MARRY UHH NOW
JO-BUT OUR FAMILY
JA-THEY WILL NEVER ACCEPT OUR RELATION
JO-OK
THEN THEY BOTH GOES TO THE TEMPLE N DO SAAT PHERAS
THEN JA TAKE JO TO A RAILWAY STATION WHICH IS CLOSED
JO-WHERE R UHH TAKING ME
JA-UHH JUST SEE JAAN
THEN JA TAKE HER TO A TRAIN
JA-OUR SUHAAGRAAT
JO BLUSHES
THEN JA START KISSING HER MADLY THEN HE OPENS HER CLOTHS N HIS TOO
THEY MADE LOVE WHOLE NIGHT
MORNING
JO WAKE UP N SEE JA WEARING HIS CLOTHS
JO-WHERE R UHH GOING
JA-UHH R NO ONE TO ASK ME
JO-WHAT BUT M YOUR WIFE
JA-HAHAHAHA..ITS JUST A PLAN
JO-WHAT??😲
JA-YAA I WANT MY FATHER TO WIN THE ELECTION SO I MARRIED UHH N NOW OUR MARRIAGE PICS R LEAKED
JO STARTS CRYING
JA FELT SOME PAIN BUT HE IGNORES N MOVE OUT


JA FATHER WINS THE election BUT JA IS NOT HAPPY.HE IS MISSING JO..NOW HE REALIZES THAT HE ACTUALLY LOVES JO

JO IS NOW NORMAL BUT SHE IS STILL SAD
ONE DAY JA COMES TO HER ROOM THROUGH BALCONY
JO-UHH BA****ED
JA-JO PLZZ LISTEN TO ME
JO-GET OUT
JA-JO SRY ...I KNOW ONE SRY IS NOT ENOUGH
BUT PLZZ FORGAVE ME...I REALLY LOVE UHH
PLZZZ
JO-THIS I WILL NOT FALL IN YOUR TRAP
JA-THIS IS NOT A TRAP
JO-LEAVE
THEN JA TAKE A KNIFE N CUTS HIS NERVES N THEN BLOOD STARTS FLOWING
JA-I LOVE UHH JO
JO CAN'T SEE HER LOVE IN PAIN
JO-WHAT UHH HAVE DONE
JA-I REALLY LOVE UHH
JO DO THE FIRST AID
JA-I LOVE UHH
JO-I LOVE UHH BUT PLZZ NOT BETRAY ME AGAIN
JA-I PROMISE
JO HUGS JA
JA- JO PACK YOUR STUFF
JO-WHY?
JA-WE R LEAVING
JO-BUT WHY
JA- WE WILL GO AWAY FROM THIS AREA
JO-UMMM OK
THEN JOJA LEAVES THE HOUSE BUT THERE FATHERS GET TO KNOW ABOUT THIS
ANGER BURNT IN THEM
JOJA DECIDED TO HIDE IN A COLLEGE AS THERE FATHERS R FINDING THEM
JA HAS KEPT TWO GUNS FOR THERE SAFETY
THERE FATHER REACHED THERE WITH 50 MEN
JA-KEEP THIS GUN JO
JO-OK
THEN THEY STARTS FIGHTING
THEY FOUGHT BRAVELY
BUT THEN THERE GOLI GETS FINISHED ONLY ONE GOLI LEFT IN EACH GUN
JO-JALAL
JA-YAA JO
JO-WE CAN'T FIGHT NOW..WE R GETTING WEAKER
JA-DON'T WORRY WE WILL FIGHT THEN WE WILL RAN AWAY N MAKE A BEAUTIFUL LIFE
OUR CHILDREN
JO-NO JALAL..I WANT TO TAKE MY LAST BREATH IN YOUR ARMS
JA-JO
JO-NO JALAL
THEN JO KEEPS JALAL'S GUN ON HER STOMACH N HER'S ON HIS STOMACH
JO-SHOOT ME JALAL😭
JA-NO I CAN'T😭😭
JO-PLZZ
THEN THEY SHOOT EACH OTHER..
JO-LOVE U...UHH
JA-L...LOVE UHH T...OO
THEY LEFT THIS SELFISH WORLD WITH EACH OTHER WITH HOPES IN THERE HEARTS THAT THERE LOVE STORY WILL BE FINISHED IN NEXT LIFE
THEY WILL MEET IN THERE NEXT LIFE N THEY KNOW THAT



DONE GUYS
TOMATOES N ONIONS ALLOWED
LOVE UHH ALL
PRIYU DI FOR UHH ALSO
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Ambidextrous thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
yippe me second
awesome tanu di
poor jalal and jodha the world could'nt see their true love
their fate was too cruel
di 😭 emotional os
Edited by .AKDHASWARA. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Res!!
Thanks for the pm and plz give links of updates in pms.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice os tanu ... Emotional too ... Poor joja .. May ur frnds soul rest in peace ... Thanks for beautiful os ...
Edited by Priyankaakdha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all congratulations for ur first os 🥳
secondly
it was an amazing os 👏
but it was emotional also
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Posted: 10 years ago
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U made me cry
Superb update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome ...yaar ...my poor joja ...
isqkzaade haan...
lovly os ...
super ...duper update...
chlo abb hardship ka update de do
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Awesome OS Tanu di...😃
Nicely written...and congo for ur first os...😃
Very emotional di...frankly speaking..I don't like emotional one shots..I just can't imagine my AkDha like this..😭..agli baar se happy os likhna di...😃

Thanks for pm...😊
Edited by -AkDha.Lover- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow vry different story beautiful yaar ending is very pain. thank you for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo on your 1st OS
Poor Jo & JA😭

Nice n emotional story

Hope they have a happy ending in next life😊

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