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Posted: 10 years ago

Final Chapter.. A


"WE KISSED TODAY..!"She shouted happily and her bhabi stopped where she was..! She look at her with wide eyes..


"So finally you made him fall for you?"Bhabi said in disbelief..


"Of course..! Nandini Murthy k jadoo say koi bach skta hai kya?"She asked munching an apple and Bhabi laughed..


"You are too much Nandu..!"Bhabi said slapping her shoulder...


"Too much? It's his punishment bhabi..! How could he just reject me like this..! Na dekha na naam jana bus bool diya k shadi nahi karen gay?"Nandini said angrily..


"Aray tou is main itna drama karny ki kya zarorat the? Bechara Manik..! Ya gaoan ki gori q bani tu? Hindi ni aati and all..!"Bhabi asked shaking her head..


"Aisy he..! You know bhabi..! Four years say us kay peechy pagal hoon..! Dil say apna maan chuki hoon us ko..! Tarapti hoon us kay liye tou thora usy bhi tarapny dain na..!"She said naughtily..


"Kuch nahi ho skta tera..! Soch lay agr Manik ko sach pta chal gya aur usy gusa aa gya tou? Nayonika aunty bta rahi the kay Manik ko bohat gusa ata hai..!"Bhabi said worriedly chopping some cucumber for salad..


"Chill bhabi kuch nahi ho ga..!"Nandini said munching few pieces.. After Rishab came they had a sweet family dinner and then Nandini drifted to sleep as she had promised to Manik that tomorrow they will see the sun rising together..

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"Rishab ka phone aya tha..! Nandini apny plan main successful ho gai..!"Nayonika exclaimed and Manik's steps froze beside his parent's room as he was passing from there..


"Wah..! Man'na pary ga ap ki honay walay baho main dum hai..! Manik ko kya khoob ullo bnaya hai..! Gaoan ki gori and all..! Main bta raha hoon us ki aur meri khoob jamy ge..!"Manik's heard his dad's voice chirpy and his pupils dilated in eye sockets..!


"Preeti bta rahi the Manik Nandini ko Pari bulata hai..! How cute na..!"Nayonika said laughingly and Manik felt himself a stupid..! Now he get it..! So his PARI was NANDINI..! His fiance? He scratched his head and realized that "usy bohat jam kay bewkoof banaya gya hai"..! He quietly came to his room and fell on his bed staring at the ceiling..! He thought and thought..!


"Pari..! Tmhy games khailny ka bohat shook hai na? So let's see..! Tum nay Manik Malhotra say panga liya hai..!"Manik talked to himself wickedly with tongue in cheek and closed his eyes to sleep..

...


Nandini woke up with the constant buzz of her alarm and she got fresh..! She got ready and after informing bhabi she came out of the haweli..! The dawn was just cracking and she had to reach the riverbank soon..! She was late today and she knew Manik will be angry this time..! She almost run towards the river and finally she reached..


"Manik?"Nandini called Manik as he was nowhere in the sight..! She was late than usual..! But still Manik was not there..! "Ya larka bhi na..! Khud bola tha kal "Pari hum soraj ko niklaty huay daikhain gay..! Aur khud gaib hai..!"She murmured loudly and cursed Manik to her heart content...! Suddenly she heard a hiss and turned to look at the source..! She saw Manik peeping behind a tree and she smiled..!


"Manik..! Kahan reh gaye thay? Dekho soraj bhi kab ka nikal aya..!"She said with a fake anger but Manik didn't replied..


"Pa-pari..!"He stammered in a painful tone and Nandini frowned..


"Manik..! Tum theek ho na?"She asked worriedly and walked towards him.. Manik came out and what Nandini saw was enough to dry her blood in veins..! Manik's crystal white shirt was full with blood and he tripped..! Before he could fall Nandini held him and sat on the grass..! Manik's head was in her lap and he breathing heavily..!


"Manik..! Kya hua? Ya sab..!"Nandini shouted in utmost worry and Manik raised his hand to cup her cheek which was also full of blood which Nandini held near her cheek..!


"Pa-pari..!"Manik whispered..


"Haan..! Main hoon Manik..! Maain hoon na tmhri Pari..!"She said crying badly..


"Ma-main..! Bo-bohat py-pyaar kar-karta hoon tm say..! Tum Meri nahi ho sakti na..! Islye main ab zinda nahi rehna chahta..!"Manik again stammered..


"Main..! Main bhi bohat pyaar karti hoon tm say Manik..! Aj say nahi bohat pehly say..! Please don't leave me..!"Nandini felt like her whole like collapsing in front of her..! Her Manik..! She had waited for him for years..!


"Good bye..! Apna khyal rakhna..!"Manik whispered his last words and closed his eyes..!


"NOOO..! MANIK..! PLEASE..! DON'T LEAVE ME..!"Nandini shouted shaking him badly but he was DEAD(maybe :p)..! "I love you Manik..! Please..! It was just a prank..! Main tmhy sirf apni importance jatana chahti the..! Manik..! We are getting married..! Meri sagai tmhi say hue hai..! Aik baar mj say pochty tou..!"She yelled in guilt crying like a two years on his chest..! "Wapas aa jaoa na..! Main bhi mar jaoan ge..! I will die Manik.! Main bohat pyaar karti hoon tm say..!"She again shouted and hugged Manik..! God knows for how she cried but Manik was gone..! Then she thought of something and got up placing Manik's head securely on the grass..! She kissed his forehead and walked towards the river..!


"Tum chaly gaye tou main zinda reh kar kya karoon ge? I am coming Manik..!"She said in a determined tone crying like hell and stood at the corner of the river..! She closed her eyes and was about to jump in the river when pair of arms pulled her back..!


"Pagal ho gai ho..!"HE yelled and she opened her eyes with shock..!


"Manik?"She whispered in disbelief..


"Mazak kar raha tha main..! Tum sach main suicide karny chali the?"He shouted and Nandini frowned with that she slapped Manik with full force..


"Mazak? Tmhry liye ya mazak tha Manik..! Main mar gai the..! Kaisy btaoan tmhy kay kitna pyaar karti hon tum say..!"She too yelled..


"Pari main..!"Manik stammered..


"Shut up..! I hate you Manik Malhotra..! Nafrat krti hoon tm say..!"She shouted grabbing his collars."Taras nahi aya tmhy mjh pay..? Jab ro rahi the main tmhry liye? Nahi..! Tmhy q taras aye ga..! Tm nay tou bina mjy daikhy bina mery bary main kuch jany decide kar liya kay arrange marriage nahi karo gay..! Tmhy pta hai kitna hurt feel hua mjy? Ni you don't know damn it..! That's why I did all this..! But tmhy kya..! Tmy tou prank karna tha na..! Ja rahi hoon main..!"She yelled again and despite of Manik's pleads she didn't stopped...!


"Kya yaar..! Har prank ulta par jata hai..! Ya Pari bhi na..!"Manik said annoyingly and scratched his head..!

...


Nandini was looking at her hena filled palms and arms...! Manik kay naam ki Mehndi..! It's been fifteen days since she had talked to Manik..! Today was their Mehndi function..! It went awesome..! But MaNan still didn't talked to each other..! Or we can say Manik tried to talk but Nandini refused..! Now she was sitting in her bedroom..! Last night in her brother's house..! Tomorrow will be THE wedding day..! She was still very much hurt because of Manik's prank..! She saw Manik's name hidden in design..! Few tears again rolled off her cheeks..!


"Your tears hurt me..!"She heard his voice from the balcony..! She quietly walked towards it he was standing on the other side of the curtain..! "I came here to see your mehendi..!"He said in a innocent tone and despite of being angry on him Nandini forwarded her hands from the curtains only..! Manik held them..! He kissed her palms and smelt the exotic scent..! He mumbled an "I am sorry" against her palms and left without uttering some other word..!

...

Manik was tossing on the bed. He was so much annoyed..! He look at his side and saw a peaceful Nandini sleeping..! It was their first night and Nandini said that she was feeling sleepy..! Without waiting for Manik's reply she changed her clothes and laid down the bed to sleep..! Manik huffed a lot but it proved deaf to Nandini's ears and she dozed off..! Manik wanted to talk her but she was not giving him a little chance to explain..! He knew he was at fault..! Kuch ziada ho gya..! But atleast she should give him a chance..! Both knew that they love each other..! Manik too unintentionally fell asleep..! Next time he opened his eyes on the chiming sound of bangles..! He rubbed his eyes sleepily and saw Nandini rubbing her hair with towel..! Her bangles were carelessly roaming in her wrists. She was wearing a light yellow backless frock which was exposed to Manik..! Her morning beauty was so glorious that Manik forgot to breath..! He quietly got up and walked towards her..!


Nandini sensed him coming towards her and his piercing gaze on her back..! She immediately threw her hair backwards to hide her back and her wet hair splashed on Manik's face..! He smilingly shook his head and pulled Nandini towards himself..! She banged in his chest..! Manik pull her so close that there was not even air passing between her back and his broad chest..!


"You are so pretty Pari..!"Manik whispered seductively in her ear and Nandini felt like melting..! All the anger she was holding seemed like flying away..! Manik gently set her hair aside and kissed her neck..! "Kal raat..! You were sleepy..! But it seems now you are fresh..! So let's continue the task..!"Manik said huskily nibbling her earlobe and Nandini's felt like her each and every cell of the body was deceiving her..! With one swift pull Manik opened the strings of her frock to which she gasped..! She wanted to push him away but she was loving it at the same time..! Manik slid the fabric a little down of her shoulder and Nandini clutched his hand over her waist tightly..! Manik bent down and his next move forced Nandini to moan his name as he gave her a wild love bite..! The first 'symbol' of his love on her body..! Nandini thought she will surely collapse when suddenly someone knocked the door..!


"Manik..! Leave me..!"Nandini's angry mode was back again..! She pushed Manik away and after adjusting her dress,picking up her dupatta she walked out of the room..! Manik was all the time smirking at her and while her cheeks were flushed red..!

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"Manik..! Honeymoon pay kahan jany ka irada hai..!"Mr.Malhotra asked casually munching a French toast and MaNan choked badly as Manik was sipping his coffee and Nandini was drinking the juice..! Nayonika patted Nandini's back and Mr.Malhotra patted Manik's to calm them down.


"Kya ho gya tum dono ko?"Nayonika asked worriedly..


"Nothing Mom..!"Manik tried to act a little cheerful..


"Acha...! Btaoa na kahan jany ka decide kiya hai?"Mr.Malhotra was back on the point and MaNan look at each other..!


"Ab tum dono nay kuch decide nahi kiya tou meri suno..! Shimla chaly jaoa..! Aj he..! I think you both need time to know each other..! Us kay baad out of country plan kar laina..!"Nayonika said in a serious tone as she clearly guessed some kind of conflict between them..! MaNan were still quiet...!


Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Simply a beautiful TS
just loved manik's prank seriously aisa prank The Manik Malhotra he kar sakta ha
poor nandu kitna dar gai & suicide ohhh
snow fight was soo cute
compensation was good.
Their promise in last was beautiful.
Edited by SparklingEyes29 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Final Chapter.. B


The drive was so long and tiring..! They were close to the farmhouse when suddenly driver halted the car.


"Kya hua driver?"Manik asked raising his eyebrow as Nandini was sleeping on his shoulder..


"Saabb..! Mosam bohat khrab hai..! Ap ko farmhouse tak chal kar jana ho ga..! Bohat ziada baraf hai..!"Driver said obediently and Manik sighed..


"Pari?"Manik patted Nandini's cheek to wake her up..! She sleepily woke up and rubbed her eyes like a kid to which Manik smiled..


"Hum poch gay?"She asked casually..


"Almost..! We have to walk a little..!"Manik said zipping up his jacket..! He wrapped a muffler scarf around his neck too..!


"Bahar toou bohat thand lagy ge na?"Nandini's voice take his attention and he saw Nandini her nose was totally pressed with the window and she was engrossed in view infront of her..! Manik smiled and turned her towards him..


"Haan..! Thand tou ho ge but I won't let this cold touch my Pari..!"Manik said smilingly and made her wear a cute pink wool cap on her head..! "Listen baby..! We need to talk..!"He said in a serious tone and held her hands..! Finally..! Like finally she nodded..!


They both got down of the car and Manik was walking a little forward to Nandini..! An evil plan hit Nandini's head and she freed her hand from Manik's grip..! Manik frowned but before he could turn away a snowball hit his head and he gasped..! He angrily turned and saw Nandini smiling naughtily..


"What the hell is this Pari?"He asked crossing his arms on his chest..!


"I am challenging you for a snow fight..!"She exclaimed and Manik raised his eyebrow..


"So that means you are not mad at me anymore?"Manik asked happily..


"Myny aisa tou nahi kaha..! Us kay bary main hum baad main baat karen gay..!"Nandini said in an annoyed tone..


"Ok then..! Challenge accepted..!"Manik too played along and within seconds there started a snow fight..! The whole area was filled with Nandini's giggles and Manik's laughter..! Finally Manik fell on the snow and Nandini over him..!


"Am sorry Pari..!"Manik again apologized holding her close by waist..


"I hate you...! Your prank scared the shit out of me..!"She said angrily..


"But tum nay bhi tou itna drama kiya tha..!"Manik too said angrily..


"Haan tou? You know kitna bura laga tha mjy jab pta chala kay Manik Malhotra hates an arrange marriage..! In four years kay relation me mjy tum say ishq ho gya tha..! Four years pehly when we got engaged na I was so happy..! Pehly myny socha kay tum say contact karoon but phr nahi kiya because I wanted to meet you..! Aur jab Mom nay btaya kay you don't want an arranged marriage and our engagement means nothing to you I felt very hurt..! Then I planned this drama..!"Nandini explained in a sad tone making a pout . Manik smiled and pecked her pout lovingly..!


"I am sorry once again..!"He apologized with pure heart..


"Acha..! Chalo it's ok..!"Nandini said smilingly and hugged Manik tightly..


"It's cold..! Let's go to farmhouse..!"Manik said caressing her back and then finally both got up..! They walked towards the farmhouse hand in hand and seeing the beauty of farmhouse Nandini became so so excited..!




She run towards it and barged in..! Manik too followed her finally she was happy..!


"This is so beautiful..!"She shouted in excitement running here and there..!


"I am glad that you liked it..!"Manik said taking her in a side hug..


"Hmara luggage aa gya hai na?"She asked in a serious tone and he nodded confusingly..! "Ok..! Jab tak main na boloon na tum andar mat ana..!"She shouted excitedly running towards the bedroom..


"That's not fair..!"He yelled with annoyance but she had locked the door..! Almost one hour passed Manik too had changed in casuals as the inside of the house was warm and very cozy..! They had ate the dinner already in their way so atleast Manik was not hungry at all..! He walked towards the bar counter and poured a little brandy in a glass..! He was waiting for Nandini..! Now what was she up to..! Suddenly he heard the door click and Nandini's voice too..! It was "Manik...! Now you can come in..!"


He frowned confusingly and walked towards the room..! He entered inside and what he saw next was enough to stuck his breath in his throat..! Nandini was sitting on the crystal white bed in his favorite red color saree and yeah face covered in veil..!





"Pari..!"Manik whispered in disbelief and placed his glass aside..! He walked towards the bed and sat beside Nandini..! He gently picked up the veil and saw her blushing like hell..! "Ya sab..!"He said in an amazed tone..


"I ruined our first night because of my gusa..! So just a little compensation..!"She said innocently and Manik just wanted to kiss her until she beg for him..!


Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumar aaya hai


"Ooo..! Compensation? I liked the way of your compensation Mrs.Malhotra..!"Manik said huskily bending close to her ear and she shivered badly..! Manik gently laid her on the bed and started taking off her bangles with that he took her lips for a soul searing kiss..! Then he took off all the other jewelry she was wearing while kissing her madly..! Deeply..! Insanely..! Passionately..! Manik broke the kiss and was about to fuse their lips again when she turned..! Now again her back was visible to him..! He smirked and pulled the string open..! He started kissing and biting her bare back..! Nandini fisted bedsheets in her hands and dug her face in the pillow to suppress her moans..! Suddenly Manik roughly turned her and within second he ripped the clothes of their bodies..!


Toote toh toote teri baahon mein aise
Jaise shaakhon se patte be-haya
Bikhre tujhi se aur simte tujhi mein
Tu hi mera sab le gaya
Na fiqar, na sharam, na lihaaz, ek baar aaya


Nandini crumbled like an autumn leaf in his strong arms..! She was melting the way he was burning her..! She was molding the way he wanted her to be..! She was all surrendered same like the way he wanted her..! He was going all mad in his passion and desire while Nandini was just moaning his name helplessly..! Begging him to end the torture..!


Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai
Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai


Her pleads were falling deaf to his ears..! He flipped the positions and she came over him..! Manik pulled her closer and left a trail of hickeys all the way down from her throat to cleavage..! She was just pulling his hair..! She was too much drowned in pleasure that she was unable to figure out how to react..! After the hours of passion and intimacy Manik finally like finally claimed her shushing her muffle cries and moans in a slow kiss..!


"I Love you so so much Manik..! You don't have any idea how much I am feeling blessed to have you..!"Nandini whispered emotionally on his chest and he smiled..


"I love you too..!"He said lovingly kissing her hair..


"Promise me..! Promise me kay hum humesha aisy he rahen gay..!"She said hugging him tightly..


"I promise baba..! And I really mean it..!"Manik said hugging her back and she felt contented..!

Another beautiful journey of MaNan began..!

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Please DON'T RES until you are determine to UNRES..!!

So two shots ends here..! I hope acha laga ho..! I am hell tired now myny socha tha aj update nahi karoon ge but phr kar diya because sab wait kar rahy thy meri ankhain band ho ri hain halat huri hai still i am writing for you guys..! Please reward me with your long comment :)

LOts Of LOve..

Mawara

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my my.. 😳 whatta beautiful n romantic ending you hav given.. Total justification done !!
MaNan are sooo cute n adorable ❤️ cuteness personified 😉

Keep entertaining us with such beautiful stories... Stay blessed !! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome story!
So many emotions blended into a short story!😳
It was perfect!
You are indeed a narvellous writer!😃
Thank you for such a beautiful story
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome superb lovely romantic story dea. ...
Loved every bit of it
Beautifully written
Stay blessed❤️
Keep smiling😊
Keep shining fr ur loved ones⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
I was waiting for this eagerly... & finally u updated 😃😃



the update was awesome... it was cute, sweet, romantic, mischievous, full of drama & what not?!!!!!!!!! 😛😛



well done 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all 👏

Only you can do this !!!
Writing about Manan that also so beautifully !! Only you can do it !!!

This was an awesome blssm OS Mawara ...

I tOh loved every bit of it ...
Hope you'll write more and we'll be able read more beautiful imaginations of Manan
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh.. Seriously i dont want this story to end... Superb yrr... amazing...
I are one of amazing writer i ever came across...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally ,...finally u updated..
I loved it..loved it...loved it n loved it alot... It really connected to my heart... As usual u rocked...!!
So it was all nandini's plan interesting..
Hmm jab promo padhaa thaa ab manik dying i was so much in shock... bt again i knew u would definitely not separate manan n wohi hua...it was all manik's evil plan... Seeing him dead nandu also went to suicide.. Haaww..!!!
Bt manik stopped her... Chalo accha hua..
So they got married.. Yipees...!!
Bt still nandini was angry at him... Infct their first night was spoiled due to her anger..koi ni baad mein compensation hogaya..
Honeymoon to shimlaa was hawwttt..!!
They playea snow ball fighting... N enjoyed themselves..
After reaching farmhouse nandu surprised him... Wow...!!
Finally manan became manan forver...HUMESHA...!!

I loved this ts alot... I wish it would hv been more long bt i can understand as u r quite bzy nowadays... Koi ni chota saa story hi sahi bt it was damn awesome... I thoroughly enjoyed it...
It was awesome, interesting, exciting, amazing, mind blowing, romantic,super duper hit...
Would hv loved to see manan journey more ...


Keep the gud work...
Continue ur other works...
Stay blessed...
Loads n loads of love
Myrah...!!!

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