Fanfic: Dhoka!!!!!!!!!!! FF!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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This Is A Fanfic Called Dhoka Because It Is About The Dhoka You Get In Love!!!!!

Here Is A Description About My 2 Main Chracters😊

Raj- He Is In College. He Is The Nice, Cute, Sweet, Popular, But Still Is Nice And Not Stuck Up Kind Of Boy. He Likes To Hang Out With Friends And Is A Complete Stud. In His Group Of Friends He Has 2 Girls And 2 Boys. The Girls Are Kiran And Priya. Priya Is Pretty And Likes Raj, Who Doesn't Have A Clue That She Likes Him. He Thinks They Are Just Friends. Kiran Is More Of Priya's "Chamchi". She Is Shy And Pretty. The Boys In Raj's Group Are Rishi And Karan. Rishi Is The Flirty Type And Likes Priya Who Obviously Ignores Him Because She Is After Raj. Karan Is Actually Have A Small Little Love Story With Kiran. Kiran And Karan Aren't Dating Or Anything They Just Like Each Other And Keep Blushing.

Raj Isn't Sure Though If He Has Found Anyone Yet.

Riya- She Is In College. She Has Been Out Of College For A While Like About 1-2 Years Because Of Some Reasons You Will Find Out Later. She Is In College Now Though. She Loves To Be With Her Friends But Isn't Very Open To Others That She Is Not Familiar With. There Is Not Much To Say About Her. She Has Been Given A "Dhoka". She Has Three Friends Who Are Very Supportive, Roshni (her best friend), Anjali, And Pooja Who Isn't Much Of Her Friend.

Thats All I Had For Right Now. Sorry For Anything. Just Trying To Give This FF Stuff A Shot. Sorry For Any Typos Or Mistakes.

Please Feel Free To Ask Any Questions.

Will Update Soon!!!!!!

And Please Comment! BTW Sorry For The Bad Entry!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey. great going.. continue soon. dying to read further
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ya Raj Is Hiten And Riya Is Gauri
sry for the confusion
and thx stylishgal and gaurihiten fan 😊 btw wats ur name gaurihiten fan
Edited by kmishra - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi dear nice intro hey can u like say who r playin raj n riya's friends u no suggest some actor's names
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Kiran- Prachi(Bani)
Priya- Anu(IDK Her Real Name...Kutumb's Anu)
Karan- Hiten ( IDK His Real Name..... Kutumb's Hiten)
Rishi- Yash ( Same As Above....Kutumb's Yash)


Roshni- Saakshi Tanwar
Anjali- Shweta Tiwari
Pooja- Swati (Or Something Like That....The Girl Married To Tushar. in KUTUMB)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1:

Raj And His Friends Were Hanging Out In Their College Lounge. Raj Was Wearing Jeans With A Blue Plain Shirt. Raj Says " Lets Go To The Movies. I Heard A Great Movie Has Came Out.... Saawariya!!!" Karan Says "Ok But I Have To Study For The Exams." Rishi Says "Come On Karan.... You Are Turning Into A Bore...You Can Study When We Get Ba- ....Oh I Forgot I Have Plans." Priya Says " We Don't Even Want To Know Who She!!! I Guess Plans Cancelled!!!....Or Only Me And Raj Can Go Cuz I Am Sure Kiran Wants To Study For The Exams Too......Right Kiran?" Priya Widened Her Eyes Which Indicated To Karan To Say That She Has To Study. Kiran Says " Oh Ya I Almost Forgot.....You Both Can Go Raj And Priya!!! 😊" Raj Says "Some Other Day Priya, It Won't Be Fun Without The Others." Priya Agreed But She Really Disagreed. Raj Says " Ok How About Tomorrow" Everyone Said Ya And They Started Talking About Their Classes. Raj Was Listening Until.....A Girl Entered With 3 Other Girls. Raj Just Stared At Her. She Had Black Hair Slightly Passing Her Shoulders. She Was Wearing A Blue Top And White Capris. SHe Looked Absolutely Gorgeous And Raj Just Stared At Her As She Passed. He Had Many Questions Run Through His Mind. He Just Knew He Had To Know Who This Girl Was!!!!!! He Just Knew It!!!!!!..................TO BE CONTINUED!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ya Sorry About That!!!!!! My Sister's Friends Came Over And They Needed To Use The Comp. So I Had To Wrap It Up Soon And I Will Update Soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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superb.. i love the way ur introducing riyaz character. im asuming that girl who entered is riya.. plzz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: stylishgal

superb.. i love the way ur introducing riyaz character. im asuming that girl who entered is riya.. plzz continue soon 😊

thx....and it was riya

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice follow up kalee
i liked it but may i suggest something if u dont mind
can u like pls u no write more freely in the sense that the write up was 2 conjusted
u no jst give some spaces that will be good
hope u didnt mind my suggestion

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