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Hi my lovely folks now I am giving you my 20th chapter of this story I hope you all will enjoy it...happy reading buddies [J]
Chapter-20
{Morning time}
{jodha's house}
{ jodha was almost ready to leave agra sudden she felt dizzy but she ignored. }
Jodha(with smile)-> " I am coming jaan...I am coming..."
{She leaved for agra...other side in agra palace all people were busy in preparation...jalal personally was seeing all preparation.}
{ rukaiya's hojara}
{ jalal was sitting on bed with holding rukaiya's hand. Sudden a maid entered...}
Maid(bending down her head)-> "shahensha ka ikbaal buland ho...shahensha abdul khan have returned from war and now he want to meet you and waiting for you in anguri-garden ..."
{hearing his best buddy's arrival...without wasting any minute he rushed toward "anguri-garden". He wanted to share one of best happiest news of his life with his best or soul brother...abdul was standing facing his back toward jalal , his hand were rested on his hips , his facial expression loudly telling that he was lost somewhere... Seeing his best buddy after one month a happy broad smile spread on his lips.}
Jalal( with smiley face and little loud tone)-> " welcome...welcome...welcome..."
{ jalal's loud voice broke the chain of thought of abdul. He turned around to see jalal.}
Jalal( in same tone)-> " I thing...khuda (god) want to fulfill my all prayer..."
{saying it he spread his arms for abdul...understanding his signal...abdul went toward him and hugged him with half heartily...}
Jalal(with breaking hug)-> " I am so happy to see you now...you can't believe it...now what I am feeling buddy...you...you...you know..."
{ before he could give him news about rukaiya's pregnancy. Abadul congratulate him...}
Abdul( with serious face)-> " congratulation...shahensha...god fulfilled your dream...now your life completed...i am happy to see your complete family...you , begum-a-khash and your baby...and what you want from your life...now everything is here...completed..."
{jalal could feel something missing in his best friend's voice...in first time in his life ...he felt like he was talking with a unknown person...not his best childhood friend. He felt like he was wishing him but his every word was occupied by sharp taunt...}
Jalal( deeply looking in his eyes with serious tone)-> " what happened abdul... are you not happy with this news..."
Abdul(taking deep breath)-> " as a childhood friend and a trustable and honest minister I am very happy for my best friend and shahensha...but as a big brother...how can I happy to see my little sister's husband with another women...tell me shahensha how can I happy after hearing that my brother in law is responsible to pregnancy of other women...and he almost forgot about my little princess like she was only his one night stand...}
{Within completed his sentence, abdul's face received a heavy tight punch from jalal and wanted about to fall on earth but jalal hold him by his jama(upper clothe).}
"How dare you to call my chanda a cheap one night stand...how dare you...she is my jaan...my life...my first and last love...yelled jalal in anger .
{But seems abdul had not any fear of his anger...hearing his words a small careless smile played on his lips.}
Abdul ( in serious face)-> " love...my life...my jaan ha...can you tell me my friend have you remember your promise that you gave to your love...your life and your jaan... "
{Hearing it jalal looked toward abdul blankly...sudden his clutch on him became loose...he felt like someone hit his head with heavy hammer... his felt like his heartbeat became so heavy. In frustration he tightly clutched his hair. How could he forget about most importing thing of his life... now he was hell angry on himself...he tightly closed his eyes in frustration. Abdul also wanted to give some time for his friend... after taking some time jala opened his eyes and turned toward abdul...}
jalal ( in sad tone)-> " i...i...I am sorry abdul...i don't know how did it slipped from my mind...i am so stupid...but don't worry after this function I will be surely go to see my love and i..i know she will be surely forgive me for my sin..."
Abdul(in serious and dangerous tone)-> " what about rukaiya's pregnancy jalal..."
{hearing it jalal looked toward abdul helplessly.}
Jalal(in teary voice)-> " no abdul I can't tell her about rukaiya...if she will be get know about rukaiya...then she will not forgive me...even I can't not afford to tell her about me...because if she will be get know about me or rukaiya's pregnancy...she will be surely leave me and this thing which I do not want to happen...because I can't live without her...i know i am sound very selfish...what can I do...without her death will be more blissful than live"
{ abdul could see easily immense true love in jalal's eyes but... a brother who was breathing under him...was so worried for his little one and he was also feeling like something would be happened very bad...}
Abdu( putting his friendly hand on jalal's right shoulder)-> " jalal...I know you have many wives and you also have to give them your time and love equally...your every begum is perfect in playing politics trick and in using their bran...but my little sister is very innocent and pure soul...if she will be ready to accept you as shahensha then what after it jalal... I am very afraid for her future...i am very afraid..."
{ jalal could understand a hidden mean behind his words...he put down his hand on abdul's shoulder and little squeezed it like he assured him...}
Jalal( confidently)-> " I know what you want to say but please trust me I am truly...truly...truly love her...trust me I will not give her place to anybody or not let to do harm her...she is my queen not only agra but also my whole heart...}
{Hearing his friend's soothing words abdul felt some relief but his heart was not ready to accept that all thing easily would be correct as his friend telling...his heart was yelling that something would be going wrong...something...which would not happened...but that time he could not understand...}
{jodha was leaved for agra...she was so excited to meet her love...her soul mate...her husband...but main problem was it that she did not know how she could reached to agra...sudden she saw some people in way...they were talking about agra. Jodha thought that they surely would know about way of agra... she went nearby them...she asked one of old lady...}
Jodha( in requesting tone)-> " maayi(mother) can you tell me about way of agra..."
{Hearing her first he looked at her face seriously and with searching eyes...but see her beautiful and innocent face...a motherly smile played on her face...}
Old lady (in very lovingly tone)-> " beta(daughter) we are also going agra...if you want then you can join to us..."
{Hearing it jodha was super happy and she nodded in head in approval...they all started their journey again...}
Jodha to old lady-> " maayi(mother) when will be reached to agra...?
Old lady (with smile)-> " seems you are in hurry to reach to agra...ha.."
{jodha bend down her head with shy face...old lady understood her means...}
Old lady (putting her motherly hand on her head)-> " till evening we will reach to agra..."
Jodha(curiously)-> " maayi(mother) if you don't mind then can you tell me why are you all going to agra...anything special because you all seems very happy..."
Old lady (with cheerful voice) -> "yes we are so happy because our shahensh will be going to become father...his first wife begum-a-khash rukaiya begum is pregnant...today is big jashn for it...so we are going to attend this jashn and giving our well wishes to our shahensha, his begum and his child..."
{ jodha gave her also happy smile...now jodha was super happy that after a one month today she would able to see her beloved husband's handsome face...but what she knew that this meeting would be changed her life forever...
Its afternoon time sun was sitting in middle of sky...Sudden jodha felt some dizziness and vomiting ...she run for outside of road for vomiting...seeing her condition old lady and some other women came to see her...after few minute jodha felt some relief...in those ladies one women was worked as hakima(doctor) she told other women to sitting jodha under a tree...they all followed her order after it...they gave to her water. After drinking water jodha felt like her body started to relax. hakima sahiba checked her pulse...after few examinations a naughty smile spread on her lips...seeing her face jodha looked curiously looked toward her...}
Hakima sahiba( cupped her right cheek lovingly)-> don't worry nothing happened you...only you will bring a new life in this world..."
{hearing it all women were became super happy but jodha looked toward them confusedly because she did not understand what did hakima sahiba want to tell her...seeing her confused face...hakima sahiba smiled on this teenager mother...she kneel down front of her and softly put her hand on her belly and told...}
Hakima sahiba(in soft motherly way)-> " after a nine months you will be giving birth to you a new life...you are pregnant beta..."
{hearing it jodha shocked like hell, for a few minute she could not understand what she heard was right or not, her eyes filled up with tears...she slowly put her hand on her belly...as her hand touched her belly she felt a high current in whole body...now her heart filled up with new emotions...sudden eighteen years old teenager girl was feeling like a mature mother...mere feeling of her baby gave a immense peace and happiness to her heart...now she more eager to meet her husband...she wanted to firstly informed him about their baby...because this baby was symbol of love of both of them...}
{Agra palace}
{rukaiya's hojara(room)}
{ rukaiya was busy in selecting her clothes and jewelry...she wanted to look like "mariam-ul-jamani" sudden guard announced arrival of shahensha...hearing it rukaiya sent all maids out of the room...as jalal entered in her hojara he saw lots of cloths and jewelry placed front of rukaiya...}
Jalal( in serious tone)-> " what happened rukaiya...why did you call me here I am hell busy in evening jasn(function)..."
{ sensing some frustration in his words...rukaiya stood up with killer smile...she lovingly hold his hand and took him for royal sofa and herself sat beside him...}
Rukaiya ( in sweet voice)-> " I know my baby's father is busy to making happy his mother...but now baby's mother want that his father select clothes and jewelry for her..."
{jalal was already restless to thinking about jodha...he wanted to finished all work as well as soon...but now rukaiya was wasting his time...jalal somehow control his anger and frustration...}
Jalal( in serious tone)-> " rukaiya...you are much intelligent and minded person... So you can easily decide what suitable for you...please make me leave now I have lots of work for doing..ok sabbkhair..."
{as jalal was about to leave from there, rukaiya hold his hand with sad face...}
Rukaiya(in sad tone)-> " you are angry on me..."
{hearing her sad voice jalal turned toward her...he could not see sad face of his best friend and also tension was not good for her in that condition...after taking deep breath, jalal sat down on the sofa and took a beautiful diamond necklace and told rukaiya...}
Jalal( trying to smile)-> " it is suitable for your neck..."
{ hearing her husband , rukaiya's sad face convert in happy and proud face...she lovingly cupped his face and kissed him on his lips...jalal felt uncomfortable but he did not want to do disappointing rukaiya...}
{Outside of palace}
{jodha's feet touched the land of agra first time in her life...she took some dust in her right hand and put on her forehead...because it was her in-laws's land and she wanted to give respect for it...agra was decorated like a new bride... All people were in jasn mood...and why not their shahensh would received the most desirable gift from god. Jodha and others searched suitable place to taking their lunch because it had some more time in starting of jasn...they found a saraay(lodge) after taking permission of sarray owner...they all opened their home made food...jodha made a strong bond with ladies. so they also served food for her...as she was about to eat her first morsel...she heard announcement of starting of jasn...she left her food and stood up...}
Jodha(in chirpy tone)-> " let's go...jasn have started..."
Old women( softly)-> " first you eat some food then we will go..."
Jodha(with childes face)-> " no maayi...i want to meet my husband as soon...now I can't wait any more please let's go na..."
{Seeing her excitement they all laughed...but they could understand her deeply love for her husband...but did jodha know that her excitement will be turned in biggest disappointment...}
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