MaNanOS-AFTER SUNSET.. ( YOU 'LL LIKE IT )

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys.. I got a very nice idea..
It would be a one shot probably.. Namely..
At least give it a try..

..AFTER SUNSET..

It was a cold winter evening in London..
Everything seemed so pink... Heavenly it feels in London.. Especially the Christmas Eve..
Snow was what i could see from my room's window.. It felt heavenly..
By the way.. I am Nandini Murthy.. Basically from India..

We are in London.. Cause of my dad's job..
I have always been a good student and now i'll take up fashion designing.. My passion..

Hey..!! Guys wait.. I' ve got a mail from my facebook.. Friend..
Yeah, actually we are pen friends.. I've never seen him.. He has never seen me..
But now.. We are like inseperable friends.. May be for than friends..

Actually it had beem three months since we are chatting.. And now.. I feel that i love him.. It feels correct always.. When i talk to him..

Haan so it says..

" dear nandini,

I just wrote to inform that tomorrow.. I am coming to London.. Well yes, you read it right i am coming to Londom.. All the way from Bradford.. I have got an opportunity..a job.. For which i applied.. So i would be happy.. If we could meet..
Do let me know.. I'll reach there by the train at around 5:30 pm..so if you could.. You know.. Let me know.. Bye..!!

Manik.."

And i could feel my cheeks burning by the thought of meeting him.. Yes, i was blushing..
My cheeks complementing the weather outside..

I was always a sober person.. An introvert..
Manik is the first person.. Whom i shated about myself openly..
I immediatly replied him..

" dear manik,

I would be great.. I am really happy.. I would come to pick you.. I would be nice meeting you.. Take care.. Bye.. Have a safe journey..!!

Nandini.."

And went my bed.. For a slumber..

NEXT DAY.. STATION..

MANIK'S POV..

Finally.. I am here.. Its good.. The weather.. Its all so pleasant..
It seems like a heaven..

And i have decided to tell her about my feelings as well.. Today it self..

As the train stopped.. I walked till the gate..
Such crowded place it was.. But still it looked great.. It seemed a great combination of white and pink..

I was standing at the door trying to spot her..
When i saw her.. She was waving her hand.. To gain my attention..
I also waved and walked till her..

She looked like a barbie doll..
Wearing a cap to cover her ears.. Gloves and a coat.. It all seemed beautiful..

"Hey" she said.. Rubbing her palms at her arms.. To prevent the cold..
" hey.." I also wished..

It seemed quite akward.. Nothing to talk.. When face to face..
"So " i said.. As itk was getting weird..

" coffee..??" She asked.. And i noded..
We started walking..." I know a great place for coffee.. Its near by.. We can walk.."
She told..

" achha what about your.. Job..??" She asked..
She was trying to make it comfortable.. " yeah, they are.. The Miller's.. You must have heard.."

" Miller's the enginearing house..?? " she asked stunned
" yup " i said casually.." Are you kidding me..?" God why was it so difficult for her to beleive it..??

" no.. Why..??" I replied.. And she hugged me.. I was although stunned by her sudden step.. But hugged her back..

" oh my god.. Congrats.. It is the biggest.. Enginearing house here.. Out of all working over there.. Only two percent are indians.. I am so happy foe you.."
She said still hugging me..

" thanks.. Waise nandini.. If you want to stand here.. The whole day.. Hugging me.. Then i don't have any problem.." I said in a teasing tone.. And she immediately left me.. Blushing like a newly weded bride..

" achha chalo..abb" she said trying to hide our blush and we went further.. To the shop..
...

After coffe we roamed a bit in the city.. And finally went to the London Brige.. To witness the ever so beautisul sunset..

" it was a great day thanks.." She said.. But on not getting a reply she turnes around..only to get shocked..

I was sitting on my one knee.. With a heart shaped ring box.. With a simple yet elegant ring..in my hand..

NANDINI'S POV..

On my god.. What was he upto.. Was on could 9 thinking whats going to come.. Blushing like a scarlett..

" i don't know nandini.. When it happened..?? How..?? Do you also feel the same..?? But i think its high time..!!! And lately i realised.. How you became a part of me..!!! Those moments.. We spent talking and.. Chatting..!!! It gave me a life..!! Ans i realised that its you..!!! I want to spend my life with you..!!! Marry you..!! Make love to you..!!! Have babies with you..!! And grow old with you..!! I love you.. I really do..!! So will you marry me..!!?? " he proposed me..

I was too numb to react.. I gave him my hand and mumbled a " yes "
He slowly.. Slipped the ring in my ginger nad got up.. I hugged him tighly..and he lifted me a little.. And twirled me around..

He than put mu down.. And i captured his lips.. For a kiss.. A soul searing kiss..
Sucking his upper lip and bitting it.. He also reciprocated with equal intensity..

Breaking apart we touched our foreheads together.. To feel the moment..
OUR MOMENT..

..THE END..

Do leave your comments and tell me how was it..??

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ashi..motu thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey..
Its nice..
So beautiful..
Loved it..
Edited by puccha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...

loved it so much...

that very beautiful proposal by manik...

he is the best at surprising people...

pen pals falling in love...

keep up the good work...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome awesome.
Very sweet and beautiful

Love story of to strangers.

Thanks for sharing.

Stay blessed dear.




Love. .
Jyoti.





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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey adya
Its just lovely
Loved it
Amazingly described
Chatting friends becoming life partner isnt it great
Wonderful concept

Love you
Ekta
Adya05 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I know.. Its quiet aweing types..
dhrits_24 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thats short but such a beautiful piece...
Really beautiful...
Keep up the Gud work😊
APS_AURA thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dat realy was a gud os.. Keeg up d gud work !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear sweet and cute love story thanks for sharing

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