SwaSan FF: A Bet Gone Wrong/Chap 4-Pg 24 (1st Nov) - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

hain😕 Where did my reply go? I remember posting it!🤔 Gosh IF and it's vanishing posts! 😡



Anyways will reiterate...


Uppu hun, it was a very cute update!! Loved how Swara said to the so called 'bhooth' that Hanuman ji is on his way!😆 Sanky shud be actually beware coz Godjee might actually turn up and bash him for being naughty on various accounts!😉


And grr Sanky is such a bad boy for scaring Swara!😡 He shud hv asked me too to join him nah?! hehehe I love scaring ppl, we wud hv made a nice team! muwahaha the evil me! 😈 😆 😆


Waiting for next upd nw!


-Luv Nikz

Really 😲 This is a stupid site 😡😆
I also love scarring people re. I am also on the team then 😆
when ever I see you I remember that dada ji k gardan pe bhi same marks hai 😆😆
I am reading ur story tomorrow now, Just completed shruti's 😳
Thank you so much jaanu 😳🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Breezy-

Really 😲 This is a stupid site 😡😆
I also love scarring people re. I am also on the team then 😆
when ever I see you I remember that dada ji k gardan pe bhi same marks hai 😆😆
I am reading ur story tomorrow now, Just completed shruti's 😳
Thank you so much jaanu 😳🤗


@red: Gosh u still remember that?!😆😆 HeheI was actually planning to write a sequel to that but didn't get proper structure... May be will try writing n c whether it shapes itself or not. wanted it to name it the Dadiji debacles! 😆 Btw did u get the tharki OS PM? 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful


@red: Gosh u still remember that?!😆😆 HeheI was actually planning to write a sequel to that but didn't get proper structure... May be will try writing n c whether it shapes itself or not. wanted it to name it the Dadiji debacles! 😆 Btw did u get the tharki OS PM? 😉

I do. I was eating dinner few moments back & I again laughed remembering that 😆 OMG Really Please write it 😈 Title is funny 😆 No re which one? 😲 I don't check PM's much, Abhi karing 😳😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter Four


"Oh my god" I was still relieved that mask man was sanky because I had thought it was someone else who will harm me. Oh god what's wrong with me? He is also a stranger & maybe he will also try to harm me.

"God..Oh crap..Where?" He says & looks around in the search of god. He still has the guts to joke after scaring me and making me almost cry.

"Just don't try to act innocent now. What's your problem? Why did you followed me? You shouldn't have poked your nose" I say with full irritation.

"Listen..First of all I don't care where you go & what you do. If anything happens to you tomorrow then police will attack me because you were last seen at my party. My life is too precious for me." He says mocking at me.

"Yea, Right. Now You saw I'm safe & I can go to dorm by myself. You can go back and kiss that girl whom you were kissing back there."

"You should have just said me to go back, Mrs. India. Why bringing kiss in between? Don't tell me you were jealous because I kissed her & not you? Hawww I can also do that to you too. Just ask for it."

"What..Hello you should come out of your delusional world because kissing a shameless person like you would be the last thing I want to do." I take a step back after saying this & he also takes a step ahead towards me.

He takes another step another step towards me. "If I didn't know any better, I'd say you're trying to get away from me, Mrs. India. That's not very Hospitable. I came all along to save you."

"Yes. I am trying to get away from you. So just go away." After saying this I start to run away from him but he just catches my hand with force with makes me Loose my balance & I end up falling in the middle of the road, taking him above me.

I gasped, I could feel my body pressing against that of the man who was above me. I looked up to see a dark, black eyes of his. His face was inches away from mine, and suddenly the dog barking at the middle of the night also didn't seem quite so Important anymore.

I gulped. What was happening?

"You are hurting me, Just get up..Please." I try to break the silence between us.

" I lost my balance and fell down so don't you dare feel like I did that purposely." Saying so he gets up.

I just roll my eyes.

"Listen, Mrs. India. As I have already said it's not very safe to be walking all alone at the middle of the night, I'll take to you to your dorm. Just don't argue now and follow me.

"What? Follow you? Why? You should follow me. Don't you know ladies first?" I said with full proud on being a girl.

"Yea, I know. Whatever. But in this case, It's you who don't know the way towards your dorm. So you decide what would you like to do?" He says with a smirk on his face because he knows that I don't have any other option rather than following him. So it was basically like Sanky-1 and Swara-0. But no problem, I'll win soon.

We were walking on the street by now and it was very boring and a silent walk. I was never a silent person. Sarla Mausi says that I talk more in a day then she does in a week. I love to talk but here I don't know what to and How to start a conversation.

"So start with some conversation Mrs. India, I'm bored." He says and I was shocked for a moment. What if He is reading my mind. Oh lord, He isn't some vampire to read mind..Haha, swara tu bhi nah. And I laugh at my own joke.

-What's your name? I start with one of the most cutest conversation ever! *Note the sarcasm*

He gives me that..Oh are you serious look but still answers my Question.

-My name, What do you mean? It's sanky.

-But that sounds like a nick name to me.

-Yes. errmm it's a nick name but no one calls me by my name because I don't like it.

-Who doesn't like their own name? C'mon say it.

-It's Sanskaar. Sanskaar means something tradition in Hindi, I guess. That's what mom says, Isn't it?

-Yes, It's means innocent, good and religious.

-Oh. Then that name doesn't suit my personality you know. Me & goody boy? It's sounds like a dream to me.

-Haha, Wahi toh tumhara toh sirf naam sanskaar hai baki kaam toh Lafunge ki tarah hai.

-You said something in Hindi, What's that? What did you said?

-I said that your name is the Sweetest name I've ever heard.

And he just smiles because even He knows that I'm lying. Him not understanding Hindi is the biggest win of mine. So, Basically now it's Sanky-1 and Swara-1 too. The game is ON!

-x-

Sneak Peak of Next chapter:

"what? You have never done it? Like never?" She ask me with full surprise on her face.

"Yes. Why will I do that at such small age. For that also appropriate time is required." I say will full confidence.

And she just burst out laughing and kept me wondering If I cracked any joke.

-x-

I hope this one was good enough. I would've have given romance but now it's not the right time. And there was will very Less POV of sanskaar from now on wards because it's him who has the life filled with secrets and giving his Personal views matlab revealing all his mysteries as well :P His POV will come very late.

I'm free today so some Q/A time. I was not able to answer some Questions but today I will.

1.Sanskaar is an Indian but doesn't know Hindi. Why?

-Because he was born in NYC. He never went to India and he dislikes India for several reasons which will be opened up very late in this fiction.

2. Will swara be pregnant after SwaSan do that?

-Holy crap..This had cracked me up badly.🤣Okay so How are you so sure that they will do THAT? Hahaha, I am writing a teenage Fiction & not a Teenage pregnancy.

3. Sanskaar is a bully? Sanskaar has a past too?

-All these will be answered slowly slowly in chapters. Have some patience.

Some comments are Hilarious but I love reading all of them. Thank you so much for reading and tolerating my bokwass. ILYY Guys so much <3

-x-

Edited by Breezy- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
i like swara teasing sanskaar b'coz he didn't know hindi
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Posted: 10 years ago
All were gr8
Do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh I'm liking the cute sankhi sanky! 😆😆 N swara's monologues are hilarious!😆 😆


But what cracked me up most was ur QnA session!! Ppl really asked those Qs?! 😆 😆 (Gosh I'm missing my tears of laughter emoji here, that is so apt right now!😆)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Uppu, love this part too..
Your sanky, reminds me of lucky of main noon maa..
But love this nok-jok session of Swasan..

Really a new Sanskar, entirely different from our sanskari Sanskar..
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love their cute nok-jhok... nice update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Upama great job dear🤗
Loved it a lot,pls do continue soon,waiting for the next update😃😃

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