MANAN TS: I MISS YOU - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART:2

Navya!!! Nandini shouted seeing her best friend cum sister in front of her after 2 long years!!!

Nandu!! Navya said and hugged her and praying to god that all will be fine

Tu itni tensed kyun lag rahi hain? Nandini questioned her breaking the hug

Nothing like that..andar chal.!! Navya said while diverting the topic

Omg!!! The fab 5 is here!! What a surprise!! Nandini said with showing her wide smile which was plastered on her face...!! She hugged everyone present in the room to assure that one and each person was there whom she missed these years..!! but where is he? All smiled seeing her excited..!! but some words which escaped from her mouth vanished their smiles

Guys manik kahan hain? Nandini asked while sitting beside navya...

Manik..is not here..mukti said in a-not-to -be-in-a-sad tone

Cabir you didn't called him? Nandini asked looking at cabir

He will not pick up our calls! Cabir said

Why? Fight hui? Nandini asked in utter confusion

fight toh hui thi...esi fight jiske baad naahi usne humara chera dekha nahi...naahi kabi call kiya!! Cabir said as his eyes filled with tears...

Woh tumlog se baat kiya bina nahi reh sakta...nandini said in assurance...

Woh esa kar raha hain nandini...who esa kar raha hain...mukti said while tears trickled down her cheeks

Meine jake usseh samjhaungi...woh jarur tumlog se baat karega...par can anybody tell me where does he stay?

Koi faida nahi hain nandini..woh kisi ki baat nahi sunega!!! Alia said controlling her tears

Of course who meri baat sunega..!! agar nahi bhi suna chah toh bhi usseh suna padega..!! nandini said while standing

He will not...he is not here to listen!! Cabir said shouting!!

But why? What is the reason!!! Where is he? Nandini said while letting out her frustration!!

He was kidnapped by harshad!! Alia said in a guilty voice...

What?!!! Kidnapped.!! Aur who bhi manik..!! I don't believe this!! Nandini said in a unsure voice...

He is nandini..he is...cabir said while sitting in a tearful state

I can't believe this!! You guys are playing a prank on me!! Are you?

Do you feel like that? We will do this kind of joke? And who bhi manik baare meine?! Dhruv said

You guys didn't find the need to search him? Nandini said in a devastated tone...

We searched him...and we founded him...cabir said not looking into her eyes...

Then where is he cabir? Nandidni said while she kneeled down in front of him

He is a breathing dead body nandini..!! a breathing dead body..!! cabir said while letting his tears more rolled down his cheks..!!

A breathing dead body...a breathing dead body...a breathing dead body...she was continuously murmuring these words...she stood up...went towards navya...she was walking like a lifeless soul...she is breathing but didn't wanted to

Is that true? She asked navya in a trembling vice

Navya shook her head in despair and nandini rooted in her place...tears automatically rolled down her eyes...where is he now? Nandini asked looking at cabir

He is now in the hospital which has been his home since two years..cabir said looking down...

Why didn't you guys informed me? Nandini shouted on them...my best friend was in coma...don't know since when!!! And not a soul informed me..!!!why? nandini shouted pouring her anguish...the guilty o not being here when he needed her the most took a troll over a heart...

We couldn't...we didn't had the guts to...mukti said in a low voice

Yaa right...didn't had the guts to..!! nandini said while flying here hands and smiling sarcastically

Nandini we were afraid for you..!! dhruv said!

Chuck that!! Tell me which is the hospital..?!! nandini said in anger tone

I all drop you...cabir said while taking his car keys...

I want to go alone...nandini said

I won't tell you the name of the hospital...!!Cabir said while walking out of the house...while nandini followed him...

He messaged navya..

"Be there in the hospital with all of them...will be in need"

__nidhi__ thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
I am really sorry for this delay!!!
waiting for the tomatoes 😛
tell me hows it!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
wonderful ts
nandu came nd searched sidha for manik
good work
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

awesome update...

loved it so much...

so shocked to know that manik is in an coma...

i am pretty sure that nanduand her presence will bring manik out of the coma...

is this a 3 shot...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update yaar...
What happened to manik...
Waiting to know..
Cont soon..

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
its interesting...cont soon
pm me also
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Awesome nidhoo
Yr please update soon
Asap
Want read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
awesome nidhuuu😃
loved the poem alot😳

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