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Posted: 10 years ago
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I don't know how it comes out
ignore mistakes


ONCE A GIRL WAS SITTING ON A BENCH WAITING FOR SOMEONE FOR NEARLY 2/3 HOURS SHE WAS LOOKING VERY PRETTY WEARING PINK KURTI AND PYJAMA LITTLE KOHL IN HER EYES A SMALL BINDI IN HER FOREHEAD LIGHT PINK LIPSTICK ON HER LIPS
SOME BANGLE IN TWO HANDS
GETTING LITTLE ANGRY
AND MURMURING "YE RAVAN KUMAR ABHI TAK NAHI AYA KYA KARU MAI ISS BANDE KA APNE GIRL FRIEND KO KOI ITNA WAIT KARWATA HAI ANE DO ISHE DEKHLUNGI APNE APP KO SAMAJHTA KYA HAI"
AND CONTINUOUSLY LOOKING AT THE ENTRANCE OF THE PARK

A BOY GETTING DOWN OF THE BIKE
LOOKING AS USUAL HOT AND HANDSOME IN BLACK (U CAN ASSUME ANYTHING)
HE WAS LOOKING SCARY
AND MURMURING THAT "AJ JHANSI KI RANI TOH MUJHE CHOREGI NAHI KACCHA CHABA JAYEGI HEY MATA RANI MERI MADAD KARO"
ISHITA WAS LOOKING AT A TREE
HE SLOWLY TAKING BABY STEP COMES TO HER SHE DOESN'T NOTICE HIM AND KEEP STARING AT THE TREE
HE WAS MESMERIZE BY HER LOOK AND KEEP STARING AT HER WHEN SHE FEELS THAT SOMEONE IS BEHIND HER SHE TURN AND SAW HIM
AND FEELING HIS GAZE A BEAUTIFUL BLUSH COME ACROSS HER FACE RATHER ANGER
SUDDENLY SHE REMEMBER THAT SHE IS WAITING HERE SINCE 5:00 AM AND SHE LOOK AT HER HAND WATCH IT WAS SHOWING ITS 7:30 HER ANGER ROSE UP SHE LOOK AT HIM DANGEROUSLY AND SEE HIM STARING AT HER SHE STAND UP AND START HER BANTERING
"RAVAN KUMAR PATA HAIN MAI KITNI DER TAK TUMHARA WAIT KARRAHI THI TUMNE KAL RAT SMS KIYA KI MUJHE
WINTER MORNING ROMANCE KARNA HAI PATA HAI MAI ITNI THANND ME JALDI JALDI ME APNA SWEATER TAK LENA BHUL GAYI"
THATS WHEN HE NOTICE THAT SHE IS LITERALY SHIEVERING
HE IMMEDIATELY HUG HER AND SAID
"I M SORRY JAAN MAIN TUMSE MILUNGA ISLIYE 4:00 BAJE UTH GAYA AUR READY HONE LAGA 4:45 ME MAIN NIKALNE HI WALA THA KI MA PANI LENE AYI AUR MUJHE DEKHLIYA"
"AUR UNOHNE KUCH KAHA BATAONA" SAID ISH
NAHI MAI UNHE DEKH KE BHAG GAYA APNE ROOM JAKE BETHA AUR MERI AKH LAG GAYI JAB UTHA TO DEKHA ITS 7:20 AUR KISI TARHA BIKE RIDE KARKE AGAYA MAI ISS BEKAAR BAT ME
APNA TIME LOSS NAHI KARNA CAHTA AYO ROMANCE KARTE HAI"
SAYING THAT HE CAPTURE HER LIPS AND START CHEWING IT
SHE STRUGGLE FOR SOME TIME BUT SOON GIVE IN HIS PASSION AND START RESPONDING TO HIS KISS
AFTER A LONG TIME THEY BROKE THEIR KISS AND SHE HUG HIM TIGHTLY
HE SAYS "ARE MAI JABHI TUMHE KISS KARTA HU TUM CHUP KYU JATI HO MUJHE TUMHARA FACE NAHI DEKHNE DETI AJ TO MAI TUMHARA
FACE DELH KE HI RAHUNGA
SAYING THAT HE FACE HER TO HIM AND SAW THAT SHE IS BLUSHING VERY HARD HE HELD HER CHIN AND MADE HER FACE HIM AND TELL
"HAY MAI MAR JAWAN INNI SONI LAGDI HAI MERI GF KISS K BAD "
SHE PLAYFULLY HIT HIM AND SAY "KUCH BHI"
THEN THEY SIT HUGGING EACH OTHER SILENTLY AND ADMIRING THE NATURE
AFTER SOME TIME HE BROKE THE SILENCE AND SAY "CHAI PIYOGI?"
"HMM"SAID ISH
BOTH DRINK TEA
AND AGAIN THEY HUG EACH OTHER AND SIT
HE AGAIN BROKE THE SILENCE SAYS "MAINE NA MA SE HAUMARI SHADI KI BAAT KI " LISTENING HIS TALK SHE BREAK THIER HUG AND SAYS "MAINE BHI AMMA SE TUMHARE BARE ME BAT KI "
BOTH SAYS IN UNION " PEHLE TUM BATAO" BOTH START THEIR TU TU MAI MAI
FINALLY ISHU SAYS "ACCHA MAIN HI BATATI HU
TUMHARI PIC DEKHNE KI BAAD AMMA NE TUMHE JHAT SE PASAND KARLI AUR KAHA MUJHE APNA HONE WALA MAPPLAI (SIL) PASAND HAI AB TUM BATAO ANTY NE KYA KAHA "
RAMAN SAY" MA BHI TUMHARE PIC SE HI TUMHE PASAND KAR BEITHI"
SAYING THIS HE TIGHTLY HUG HER
AND SAYS "CAN I KISS MY WOULD BE WIFE "
SAYING THIS HE DIDN'T EVEN WAIT FOR HER ANS AND CAPTURE HER LIPS
THEY WERE KISSING HUNGRYLY
AFTER 3 MONTHS
(AT TAJ HOTEL HONEYMOON SUITE 11:30 PM)
ISHITA IS SITTING ON THE BED HIDING HER FACE UNDER THE GUNGHAT
AND AFTER SOMETIMES RAMAN ENTER THE SUITE
AND SEE HIS BRIDE
HE COME NEAR THE BED AND OPEN HER GHUNGHAT AND SEE HIS BLUSHING WIFE AND SMILE AND HOLD HER CHIN AND MAKE HER FACE HIM AND ASK HER PERMISSION THROUGH HIS EYES AND SHE TIGHTLY HUG HIM AND NODDED
(USKE BAAD KYA HUA IMAGINE KARLO)
its my first ever os pls give ur reviews be it positive or negative and thanks janani di for encouraging me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey lovely os kimty..
this is your first os in forum.
congrats behana..
keep trying..and next time give long os or ts,ss.

i like this morning winter romance,

romance karne keliye puttar ne jkr ko 5 am ko bulaya..
Aur puttar ke maa ke vajesa,ishu ko bulgaye.
to melt ishu,he kiss her..
He he he ishra married with in 3 months ..parents agree their marriage too..

Dont give up kimty..
keep trying..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good one keep on trying dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice Kimty😊
Good start with this OS..
Congrats once again🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome one kimty
It was really superb
Like it just way too much
He called her in morning
And poor Ishita came without sweater
Loved their kiss.
And they r married too
Why we will imagine
U write like u tell others

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Awesome one kimty

It was really superb
Like it just way too much
He called her in morning
And poor Ishita came without sweater
Loved their kiss.
And they r married too
Why we will imagine
U write like u tell others


thanks for the encouragement
wo sab padhne me maja ata hai likhne me nahi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice one dear
keep it up
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimty1230


thanks for the encouragement
wo sab padhne me maja ata hai likhne me nahi



Kyun bhai Hume toh bahut lecture mila tha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutieruhi



Kyun bhai Hume toh bahut lecture mila tha


now I m blushing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's a nice, cute & sweet OS.

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