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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-12
maan was so worried for her & she was in Khurana;s Garden wondering about her closeness with maahi.

Part-13
love their cute nok-jhok as always. Maan & maahi really enjoy a lot with geet/priya after so long. Armaan i think will make her to confess that she loves maan.

Part-14
Geet is unaware of the fact about maan's wife. I hope she got to know it soon. Why ridz wants geet back despite seeing her getting better?

Part-15
Now even i'm confused along with maan ki ye priya geet hi hai or is she someone else? Both of them were shock to know that priya & her family were leaving India within 1 day. I hope maan will soon got to know about her.
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I am too confused like MAAN was she really GEET r priya!!!!
maans feelings and priya longing proves she is GEET
but her outburst is confusing,
hope the key shashank and ritz had to the puzzle and most probably AMY wil break the lock.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SWEETY9167

I am too confused like MAAN was she really GEET r priya!!!!
maans feelings and priya longing proves she is GEET
but her outburst is confusing,
hope the key shashank and ritz had to the puzzle and most probably AMY wil break the lock.


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Originally posted by: priya_21



wait some time more


YEAH THATS WHAT I AM DOING EAGERLY
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Originally posted by: SWEETY9167


YEAH THATS WHAT I AM DOING EAGERLY


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Originally posted by: nishamna

Omg how complicated is their life. Is priya geet or not. Priya also started to feel for maan but she also knew that he is finding his geet in her which is intolerable for her.n maan , why he is feeling that she is only his geet. I hope all misunderstanding get clear soon. Waiting for next dear


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jasika08

Nice update

Waiting for next update.


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Part 16

Her little hope breaks today...her heart is crying ... he can't see tear in her eyes ...he try to wipe but she runs leaving him alone...in anger , helpless, all thing of table break in pieces in few seconds...

What I do jaan

.

Mera dil khta hai

Tum geet ho

.

Par tum ho ki

Maan hi nhi rhi apne maan ki baat

.

Kyun

Jaan

.

Kyun

.

.

.

Kya jo sb kh rhe hai

Whi sch hai jaan

.

.

He sits in one corner and talking with geet pic...

.

Tum mujhe chodke chali gyi hu ...kya

.

Fir wo ladki kya sch mein priya hai

Wo tum nhi ho kya jaan

.

Fir kyun

Jb wo mere pass hoti hai

Toh asa lagta hai

Tum ho jaan

Mere karib

.

Kyun is bechain dil ko wo sakun milta hai

.

Bolo jaan

.

He not know when day change into night and he sits alone here from long hours...his thought break due to daadi call...

Daadi am coming

********

Whole night he only thinking how he gets own answer... His cell buzzed and known name flashing on his mobile screen ...

Now enough

Bs kal ka hi din hai mere pass

Aur mujhe mere sbhi jwab chaiye

Ab

.

.

He cut the call without replying & calls the detective

You have only today night

Kal mujhe subh file apne table pe chaiye

.

Ydi asa nhi huya

You are finished

*********

Sid : priya open the door dear

Priya : sid don't disturb

Leave me alone please

Sid : what happen to you dear

Dekh aaj humara last day hai yaha

Aur hum khi gume bhi nhi hai

Chl khi gumne chalte hai

priya: I have no mood

sid : tu door open kr rhi hai ya nhi

ya mein hotel staff ko bolu isse open krne ke liye

.

I going to count only 3

.

.

3

.

.

.

2

.

.

Priya : bol kaha chalna hai

Sid : that's like our cutie pie

Priya : ab jaldi bol

Usse phle mera mood badal jaaye

Sid : acha

Priya : yes

Sid : first you go and ready fast

Hum fir bangla Sahib chalenge

Priya : waha pass mein ek church bhi hai

Waha bhi chalenge

Sid : how you know

Waha church hai

Priya : I don't know sid

Mujhe kaise

Sid : chod ye sb

Whi pass mein market bhi hai

Kuch kha bhu lenge

Aur etri shopping bhi ho jaayengi

Jo tune kal nhi kit hi

Priya : wo mein

Thoda disturb thi bs

Sid : hmm

Aur mujhse share krna tk tu ab thik nhi smjhti

Right

Priya : asa nhi hai

Sid

.

She hugged him and cried...

Sid : what happen cutie

.

Can I call armaan bro

.

Priya : sid

I don't want to go from here

.

I want him

Sid : kiski baat kr rhi hai tu

.

Priya come out from hug and wipes her tears...

Sid : priya

Look at me

.

You start loving someone

.

Am right

.

Priyaa

She jumped due to sudden her angry voice...

Priya : sid

Mein bs mjak kr rhi thi

Sid : oh really

I going to call ridz now

Priya : sid

Just stop it

.

It's my life

.

Sid : your two days love changed you so much priya

You never hide anything from me

Am your best friend na

.

Priya : sid

Sorry baba

.

Sid : mujhe phle sb bta

Kaun hai wo

Kaisa hai

.

He also loves you na

**********

Another side, maan is so restless...finally detective call arrived...

Sir jb Mr. Sushant india mein jyada din ek patient ki wajh se ruke the

Maan : patient

D : yes sir

He save one life

And then take with own for better treatment

Maan : isme

Priya kaha hai

D : sir last time aapne mujhe

Un 15 days ke baare mein jaanane ke liye kaha tha

.

Maan : great

.

Tum mujhe ye batao

Priya bchi thi ya nhi

Us accident ke baad

D : sir

I try to find out from her friends ...

Us accident ke baad wo kbhi usse mile hi nhi

.

Uske friends ko lagta hai

Sayad priya is dead

Isliye Ridhima - the elder daughter of Dr. sushant

Changed so much

After this accident

Whenever her friends try to contact her

She always denied

Make some excuses

.

Maan : no one try to come or go to check on home

D : try in starting

But dont get any information

Fir dheere- dheere sbhi dost usse bhool gye

Maan : hmm

.

Wo patient kaun tha

Jiski wajh se Dr. sushant ko yaha rukna pda

Koi jaan pechan wala

Any information about patient

D : sir koi jaan pechan wala nhi tha

Dr Sushant ko

Wo patient high way pe milli thi

He tries to find about her family

Unhone Missing files bhi check krwayi thi

But get nothing

Maan : tumne bataya

Wo fir

Us patient ko leke

Paris chale gye

Uske baad kya huya

D : sir is baare mein toh abhi kuch nhi pata chala hai

Maan : I want all detail

In nect one hour

Wo patient kaun tha

Uska kya huya aange

D : sir par

Maan cut the call...

.

.

If priya is dead

Toh ye ladki kbhi bhi priya nhi ho sakti

That means

Wo meri geet hi hai

Par geet waha puchi kaise

.

Kya wo patient

Geet thi

Jo dr. sushant ko highway pe milli

.

Par geet fir khud ko priya kyun kh rhi hai

.

He thinks. Only thinking from past night... Finally one more name clicked in his mind...

He instantly call on this number...and said to the person...come immediately here...he do whole arrangements...if flight ticket not get ,he arrange private plane ...Now he wants that person in next few hours here...in front of own...

************

Priya : sid

I start loving him

But he only try to find own wife own me

Sid : priya

He is married guy

How you can fall in love with him

Priya : sid

Pyaar ye sb dekhke thode na hota hai

.

Bs ho gya

Sid : now what you want

Priya : don't know

.

Why not u tries to win his love cutie pie

Priya : armaan

She run & hugged him tightly...

I miss you so much

Armaan : lagta toh nhi hai cutie

Priya : really I missed you

Armaan : par abhi toh yaha aur kissi ko miss kiya jaa rh a tha

.

Ha

Kya naam tha

Maan

She pouted...

Ridhima : bs issi hi miss krna hai tumhe

Apni ridz ko toh koi yaad hi nhi krta

.

Priya come out form armaan hug and hugged ridz...

Priya : ridzi

I miss you too

Ridzi : rhehne do priya

Tum sirf armaan ko miss kr rhi thi

Mujhe nhi

..

She makes little space in between... but priya encircled hand from her back around her neck...

Right ridzi

Armaan ko maine bhut miss kiya

.

Bs tumse thoda kam

Ridzi : schi

Priya : muchi

Armaan : lo ho gyi ye dono shuru

********

All settled for breakfast...

Ridz : waise mere aane se phle

Armaan tumhe kya kh rha tha priya

Priya : nothing

Sushant : ridz

Armaan

Tum achanak yaha kaise

Armaan : dad

Ye ridz ki zid ki wajh se

Ridz : dad

Am missing you and priya

Sushant : hmm

Ridz : are you angry on me

For this

Sushant : no beta

Actually hum kal wapas hi aa rhe the

Ridz : that;s good

Hum sb kal wapas chalenge fir

Armaan : oh common ridz

Dad

Aaj hi toh aaye hai

Kyun na ek week aur ruk ke chale

Thoda delhi hi gum lenge

Ridz : yaha asa kya hai tumahre gumne ke liye

Armaan : ridz

Common yaar

.

Kyun cutie pie

Tum chalongi mere sath

Delhi darshan pe

Tumahri ye behn toh bhut boring ho gyi hai aajkal

Sid : mein bhi chalunga

Sushant : sid

Flight ki ticket cancel krwa do

Hum next week chalenge

Wapas

Sid : ji uncle

Priya thanks to him form eyes that are also noticed by ridz...



Precap : most awaiting truth come out

.

Next part tbhi yaha post karungi

When I get proper likes and comment last time

Edited by priya_21 - 9 years ago
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