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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

good one please update next part soon

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IKEAwizard

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

HOLY SH*T.

You are so talented, Anita. Along with being extremely well-written, it was downright hilarious and put forward a very believable interpretation of the characters. This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. Even though the dialogue was in English, I could imagine each character saying and doing what you wrote for them.

If only Suhani was as strong of a character as you portray her to be. I would LOVE for her to entertain other men with kachoris after seeking a separation from DostRaj. 😆

I have to say though, my favorite part of the story was definitely Sangeeta, who sees right through the cheesy smile. Loved how Yuvraj wasn't fooling anyone, even though he was desperately trying to.

Edited by IKEAwizard - 10 years ago

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IKEAwizard

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Anita, you need to write for TV. I don't care how hard it is. India needs you.

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anita_m

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Thank you, shivalkar.

Du, when I'm on my walk, I think of various things, and when ssel pops into my head, I sometimes rewrite it or the characters do their stuff in my mind. So far it was easy, but from here on I am stuck. I know what I want, but how to get there will need more effort than I have time for.

Iks, thank you. And write for tv? They'd boot me out in a week, even if I were so inclined.

Edited by anita_m - 10 years ago